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Posted: 19 years ago
PART 10

"miss ray ...may i know are u late 2 class?"
"uhhh..maam..i was...umm..ya...doin a brain transplant fer timbo i mean tia...poor kid...bachpan se hi no brain na..so maine socha punya ka kaam kardu"
"thts quite enuff anvesha....nd u yuvi..y r u late 2 class?"
"maam..i was assistant surgeon..wacko ke hi brains nahi hai...so i thot how will she do a surgery?"he grinned at ashi...
ashi elbowed him in d stomach...
"anvesha...sit in the 3rd bench beside tia...nd yuvi u sit rite here b4 me"
ashi made a choking face as she went 2 sit bside tia.....
the teacher turned 2 the board....
"so class..yest we were learning abt the second world war.."
"boo"ashi suddenly whispered
tia gave a piercing scream..
"miss ahuja..i understand dat the WW2 had sum horrifyin accounts..but please remember tht it was over nearly 50 yrs ago"
"u punk..how dare u scare tia like dat?"
"i was juss chkin if u gt ne new brains...doesnt seem so..."ashi grinned...
yuvi shook his head...
this girl is nvr gonna change....did i say girl i meant tomboy...but mann....wateva she was..she was hot...sizzlingly so...
he was shook out of his reviere by a fast asleep sid whu had fallen on to his shoulder...
he spent teh rest of the period carving on the bench (R.I.P-in loving memeory of thos whu died waiting for the bell to ring)
finally ..the bell rang...
when ashi nd yuvi emerged out of the empty classroom 20 mins later....
his lips were smeared with lipstick the colour of the rising sun..fiery red with shades of orange...


ashi woke up with a start in the middle of the night
it was a minute b4 she realised she was nt alone....
she quickly thot of all the ppl whu it cud b...aliens...kidnappers...assasins....an army of spiders...
"yuvi....wat r u doing here at this time"she asked in surprise..
"ssshhh..kuch mat bolo sweety"he placed a gentle hand of her mouth...
they came out into the grounds heavy with the smell of fresh grass....
now his hand was on her eyes as he guided her forward...
"hey bhaggu..yuvi..abhi bata rahi hoon..main hide nd seek khelne ke mood main nahi hoon....or r u sum alien in the disguise of yuvi..jadi batao badmash alien..mera yuvi kahaan hai?"
he rolled her eyes...
"ashi.....close ur mouth..nd open ur eyes...."
she opened them 2 find herself in the shed....xcept tht it took her a while 2 rcognise it...
it was filled with flowers...wild roses....the most perfectly beautiful full red roses....
a card read

"for the wildest beauty of them all"
she hugged him hard....touched....no one had done nethin so sweet for her before...
he hugged her bak..surprised at her reaction....he was used 2 doin all dis...but he had nvr recieved such a pleased reaction b4.. he hugged her close..as if sumhow sensing the fear nd uncertainity in her


Edited by hellraiser - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
πŸ‘ wow!!!!!!!!!!!it is tooooooo gud 4 words........
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Posted: 19 years ago
πŸ‘ really nice!

luved dis part

u hv left me speechless Sid πŸ‘

continue soon!

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
it seems ashi doesnt no tht uv is the best shed decorater 😳 n he will keep doin it 4 her in sukh n dukh πŸ˜ƒ me too fallin short of words to tell u how gd it is......gr8 part πŸ‘

cont soon....
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Posted: 19 years ago
AWESUM FIC HATTS OFF TO U
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey sindhu

awesum.............. πŸ‘


do continue soon..........
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Posted: 19 years ago
oh gawd!!!!!!!!!!!!
howwww !!!iam soo sorryyy sid i didnt even see dis part for soo long im soo osree was preoccupied d whole day missed gibng d first comment now i can gib aaraam see
dat first para of timbo was damn good nd d way ashi nd yuvi talked reminded me of dat history waala part about mughals πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
d way tia screamed soo timboish πŸ˜† i loved d line u worte rip in memory off πŸ˜† im still lafing reading it 😳 nd d last part
wow!!
it reminded me of dat london waala scene aww damn cute uv is such a woman man 😳


a perfect 11 on ten episode πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome just awesome
have i told u u write da best fic

cont soon plz b4 i die waiting for ur nxt prt 2 come
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwwwwwwwww!!!!why is yuvi so cute!! 😳 😳 😳 this part was luvely sindhu....

an yes enjoyed the class wala scene πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† i have never ever enjoyed ashi-tia convo as much as i do i ur fic πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

they r brilliant πŸ‘

waitin 4 more honey!! πŸ˜›
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Posted: 19 years ago
what a swweeet n amazing part 😳
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