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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part- 5


Ok guys here is continuation… hope it turns out good…

While getting into the car… Ashi saw ranveer in a sad mood… and was thinking about ranveer and tia…
Uv- kya hua ashi? Tum kya soch rahi ho?
Ashi- who uv… main thakur aur timbo ko leke parshan hoon… thakur is totally changed after timbo has left for US… he is missing her so much…
UV- I know ashi… par tum iskeliye aabhi fikar maat karo… rite now just concentrate on me…
Ashi smiles and tells- ok now let's go…
While going to the park on the way ashi saw something and said- Uv plz take me to that store…
UV- ashi is waqt… we need to enjoy… u know na ki mein pune ja raha hoon…tomorrow…4 a whole week…aur is waqt tumhe silly se gift shop jaana hain…
Ashi- plz uv… plz… for me…(and makes a sad face)
UV- as u say ashi… par tum is taraha sad maat ho…
UV turns his car towards gift shop…
UV- let's go…
Ashi- uv tum nahi aarehe…u sit in the car…
UV- par kyun?
Ashi- uv do as I say…
UV- thik hain par jaldi aana…
Ashi goes to gift shop and comes after ten minutes
UV- kaha thi tum… itni der kyun lagaya…
Ashi says nothing and shows him a cute teddy bear…
This teddy bear is exact same as coco…but has a bow on her…so it's a girl teddy
Ashi- uv this is for you… a special gift from me… her name is coci… so coco = uv which is with me…and…coci = ashi which will stay with you…
UV- ashi u r soooo sweet… and without telling anything else he just kissed her check…and gently took koki…thank you ashi… this will always stay with me as ashi…
Ashi- uv… this is for you… whenever we both are not together…then u can look at coci…and I will at coco…she takes coci from uv… and tells her- u better take care of uv…
UV- ashi u r the best…and he hugs her tightly
Ashi- ok ok…uv I kno I m best…tell me something new…neways ab chale…
UV smiles- after u…and he opens his car door for ashi…
Ashi sits in and uv puts coci in back sit of his car…and then they leave for the park…

Meanwhile in the college…

Danielle(in a worried voice) - vrinda…vrinda ashi kaha hain…
Vrinda- who uv ke saath bahar gayi hain par kyun?
Danielle- kyun? Kyunki aaj hamara project due hain…aur aaj hamari presentation bhi hain… aur agar ashi nahi milliee to who is quarter mein bahut poor marks layengi…
Vrinda- dani… ab hum kya karenge?
Danielle- obviously usse phone karo and call her back…
Vrinda- dani… woh jabhi uv ke saath hoti hain to aapna phone switch off rakhti hain…is there neway jisse ashi bach sake…
Danielle- agar sonia aunty kahe ki ashi uske saath hain… kyunki agar hum kahenge ki woh bimar hain phir bhi hume sonia aunty ki sign chahiye…
Vrinda- let me call sonia aunty…
She calls sonia and tells her everything…
Sonia- Kya? Yeh mumum bhi na… thik hain mein principle se baat kar loongi…
Vrinda- thank you aunty…
Sonia- sweetheart thank you to muje tumhe kehna chahiye… tumne muje rite time par phone kar diya…varna aaj to mumum nahi bachti… neway kya usne aapna project finish kar diya hain…
Vrinda- haan aunty… dani aur usne milke project finish kiya hain…
Sonia- acha sweetheart muje jana hain… dani ko bhi thanx kehena…
They hang up the phone…
Danielle- kya hoa?
Vrinda- vo maan gayi… she is calling the principle…
Danielle- thank god… varna pata nahi ashi ka kya hota…neways vrinda yeh pusti kaha hain?
Vrinda- woh shayad kamre mein padh rahi hogi… kal hamari test hain naa…
Danielle- oh ok… vrinda mein chalti hoon… I need to go to locker then then muje class bhi to jana hain…chal then c ya later…
Vrinda- hmm… bye
While Danielle was going she saw ranveer very upset…she went near him…
Danielle- Rans… kya hoa… tia ko miss kar rahe ho…don't worry uska phone abhi aayega…main usse janti nahi hoon…magar uske bare mein itna suna hain…neways rans chill… agar uska phone naa aye to hum mere class ke baad use phone karenge…ok now can I see a cute smile on ur face…
Ranveer smiles and says- thanx dans… ab aap apne class ko attend karne ahiye… warna miss hojayega… aur hum aapke class ke baad aapko milte hain…
Danielle- ok bye rans…
Ranveer- Bye…
Ranveer was still in tia's thoughts just then his cell rings…
Phew… I hope you guys liked it… it was a pretty long part…plz comment… coz they encourage me to write…I hope it turned out good…plz tell me how is it?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its awesome!!!! 👏 really very nice. u posted after so long. 😳
pls cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
its too gud 👏 😳 😊

plzzz cont. asap
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
amazing Nitz!

lovely parts!

Coco n Coci, Yuvi n Ashi 😳 😳

continue soon!

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
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AWSOME.ESSE KAHA TE HAI FAN FIC.CONTINUE 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awsummmmmmmmmmmmmmm yaar now i want sum romantic scenes btw tia-ranny
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: vitak

its awesome!!!! 👏 really very nice. u posted after so long. 😳
pls cont soon.

hey thanks...i will post tonite...yup... i had tests so it took me long...

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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanx a lot guys....😳....

Edited by nitz_rocks - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: divya_92

amazing Nitz!

lovely parts!

Coco n Coci, Yuvi n Ashi 😳 😳

continue soon!

Divya

hey thanx a lot divya😉... i kno... i wish when they date again ashi gives coci to uv😳... it will be sooo nice😉...i wish but😳... it would b awesome...neways i will post tonite...

Edited by nitz_rocks - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its very nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue fast and writr about tia ranveer and also bring tia back fast.

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