COLLEGE- *FAN FIC* part 7 pg 10; recap 8

THIS IS MY FIRST FAN FIC… I HOPE U GUYS LIKE IT… AND PLZ REPLY AND TELL ME HOW IS IT…

COLLEGE

Part- 1

All have finished their maurya and are in college… they all planned to go in same college… but unfortunately tia went to U.S. university and yuvi had leave his studies and get into politics because of his evil dad (but he still used to meet his friends)… ashi, ranveer, meher, pri, vrinda, nakul, sid were in same universities (in Mumbai)… M.P. was in U.S. too but was in New Jersey rite now… Varun went to New Zealand for M.B.A. Aman was in Ludiana helping his father and doing his college over there… All of them were having odd roommates in their university…

They are:-

Ashi, Pri, Meher ( hahaha… u can think ashi's halat)

Ranveer, Sid, Nakul (u can imagine ranveer… poor him he can't even study)

Vrinda, Pusti, Danielle

Pusti is a girl who loves her family and is same like vrinda… I mean padaku type... but she likes to party and she takes risk like ashi… is one of their friend in university…she wears clothes like tia and has long wavy hair… she loves her teddy given by her mom…she is beautiful like a peacock… she has all matching jewelries of her dress and even sandals… she is really pretty

Danielle is a spoilt girl with curly hair…she is bindaas and never cares about anybody except herself and her friends… she goes to parties and clubs and discos and pubs… she is crazy bout remix band (of course and tia is not here) so she wants to b the part of it…she is a total tomboy…she is as beautiful as a sweet angel (we can say Cinderella or Snow white)… no one can beat her… not even tia… but she has no feelings left after her parents betrayed her leaving in an orphanage all alone… but still she sometimes felt for her friends and helped them… she is also one of their friend in university….

Oh yes! How can we forget REMIX… remix is now past as tia is not there… but they want to continue remix but don't know how coz tia is in U.S.A

Ok now about main characters…

But not now in next chapter

Ok now tell me guys is this good or bad… plz tell me if it's bad… it will help me make changes and plz reply…plz plz try to find mistakes in my fic so next time I can write better…and then best… and then outstanding…so plz try to find mistakes… and tell me is it good??? U can tell the truth I won't feel bad but plz reply… and more of em' do u want me to continue…

okay seems total sufi begining pls post the nxt part fast
hurry up 😊

thatz awesome
cant wait till the next part
post soon 👏 👍🏼

hey its good,but i cant imagine remix without tia.plz bring her back.

ya kutie she will be back......don't worry...and plz plz reply me ......and try to find even 😊 a tiny mistake........and thanx to the people who replied.... 😊

plz bring her back soon,and a little chemistry between ranny n tia also.and ur fic is too good,that i cannot find any mistakes.u have written well.

hey don't worry!!!!!!!this will b of ASHI-UV and TIA-RANNY both...and thanx for proofreading...happy to kno that there r no mistakes from ur side......... 😊

wowwww....nitz...nice start...that yashy i'll kill him...really YUVi has gone to politics?????

ok guys the people who were reading i m posting another part for them 😊 ........and thanx thanx a lot 4 ur replies