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devilangel

@devilangel

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Posted: 19 years ago

#281

there you go guys!
the next part!.. plzz commment and tell me if you like it.. if you dont like it.. plzz dont hesitate to say so.. criticisms are vry very welcome! hope to see lots of comments and i wil post the next part quite soon..i hope!

and also, i hope you noticed that this part was a lot bigger 😛 and the song was from The Supremes 'I wait for him'! hope u like everything..
luv,
shreyasi

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Saloni

@sal_remix

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Posted: 19 years ago

#282

i dont hav words..ur fic is just mind- blowing..n i wonder hu'll crirticize such beautiful work..plz do continue fast! 😃

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REMIX_TANVI

@REMIX_TANVI

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Posted: 19 years ago

#283

AWESUM YAAR! 👏
ITS BRILLIANT 👏
BUT DIS TIME DONT TAKE SO LONG 😆

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ishani

@sufi89

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Posted: 19 years ago

#284

its really awesome pls post the nxt part soon can't wait for it

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ishani

@sufi89

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Posted: 19 years ago

#285

its really awesome pls post the nxt part soon can't wait for it

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Devanshi

@t.r.a.yremix

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Posted: 19 years ago

#286

it's awesome 👏 .
post soon.

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Alomi

@2kool

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Posted: 19 years ago

#287

its awesummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!!
😃

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komal

@komal_ashiyuvi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#288

hey shreyasi
its superb yaar............ 👏

i actually wanted to cry ...... 😭 poor yuvi.............poor ashi.........
plz ab zyaada time in dono ko separated mat rakhna plz

do continue soon

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srkm

@srkm

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Posted: 19 years ago

#289

hey its really gud...the best was the coldness yuvi showed...call me dr.dev or yuvraj...wow!!!...n the sarcasm of both of them...when ashi said...dr.dev pressing on these words...n uv's last line...gr8..i like the refined style of writin...the words u use 2 put across the emotions r incredible...
keep it goin shreyasi...
continue soon...waitin!!!

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Divya

@divya_92

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Posted: 19 years ago

#290

nicely written 👏

hats off to you

you really rite soooo well

im waiting for ur next aprt 😉

continue soon

ps - hope u're studies are going well 😛 😊 😉

Divya

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