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Posted: 19 years ago

#291

Originally posted by: ranv_rules

Ashi: thik hai timblet to tum aur hakur dec mein shaadi karna main aur uv sunday ko kar lenge. aur itne mahine mein tumhari practise bhi ho jayegi. kyunki shaad ke baad to tumhe kehna padega ki ' Tia Sisodia hona koi aisi vaisi baat nahi hai'.

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Hey Bhaggu!!!You're right...I mean ASHI's right...😆😆😆

Anyways,in the previous part,Ashi ACTUALLY wore a PINK(🤢) saree😕???

I mean pink is not her type😉...Anyways,whatever...

Oh...And...Yeah...You're fic is too good😳!!!

I love it😳!!

Do cont. soon😉!!

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sagarika ghosh

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Posted: 19 years ago

#292

guyz i was abt 2 post the nxt part dats part 28 when i realised dat my fic will be ending in anoder 2 -3 parts so i decided 2 w8 till more ppl replied.

thanks all of u.

part 28 cuming up soon.

sagarika

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swati

@sweta2005

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Posted: 19 years ago

#293

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sayantika

@sayanti_ashiuv

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Posted: 19 years ago

#294

plzzzzzzzzzzzzz sagarika,cont fasttttttttttt.we all r waiting,plz cont asap.

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sagarika ghosh

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Posted: 19 years ago

#295

PART 28

While the four soon - to- be - weds were planning the marriage they are interrupted by the sudden arrival of Sid.Sid who was getting the invitation cards gives himself a grand entry as the duty he was assigned with he had finally managed to get it right.or atleast we hope so that he did.

R:hello banna aap kaise hain?

S: main bilkul thik hoon.

T: haan obviously Tia's angel haina Sid ka dhyan rakhne ke liye.

Y:wassup bro?

A: Hi Sid. ab ab jab sab ne Sid ko hi boldiya hai to kya hum plz card dekh sakte hain?

T:Ashi tum to Tia ko chidhati thi ki Tia ranveer se shaadi karne ke liye utavali hoti hai par utavali to tum ho. have patience.

Sid hands over one card to Ashi and one to Tia. Both open the card and burst out laughing.

R: Tia kya hua aap has kyun rahi hain?

Y: aur Ashi tum kyun has rahi ho?

T & A: woh actually is card mein likha hai ki ........

T: Ashi pehle tum bolo Tia card tumhare baad read kar legi .

Ashi reads the card...

You all are cordially invited to the wedding of

Timbo
(daughter of Mrs. Sonia and Mr. Sumeet Ahuja)

with

Thakur
(son of Mrs and Late Mr. Sisodia)

After listening to this the reactions of all of them were quite expected Yuvi started laughing, Ranveer glared at Sid with eyes burning with anger and Tia started crying.

R: Tia aap ro kyun rahi hai.

T: ranveer Tia ki shaadi ka card hai aur woh bhi Sid ki stupidity ki vajah se kharab ho gaya abTia kya karegi?

A: Tia sab thik ho jayega aakhir hum hain na.

A: Timbo rona band karo aur doosra card padho.

T: you all are cordially invited to the wedding of

Wacko
(daughter of Mrs. and Mr. ahuja)

With

Psycho
(son of Mrs and Mr. Dev)

The reactions were exactly the opposite. earlier those who were crying were laughing now and those who were laughing were simply bashing Sid up.

S: accha guys am srry mujhe cards check karne chahiye the . woh mujhe laga ki card wala tum logo ko janta hai to tumhare nicknames bhi usse pata hoga par mujhe kya pata tha ki woh dufus nikle ga.

A:dufus tum ho bilkul dufus. apna dosh doosre par mat dalon. kal tak cards reprint ho jane chahiye.

S: ok guys bye main chalta hoon badmein milenge.

As Sid was abt to leave he stopped

S: woh guyz Sonia aunty ne kaha hai ki tum log aaab shaadi se pehle tak nahi mil sakte aur direct mandap pe miloge.

ALL: KYA!

S: haan this is all done so dat there is more excitement on your suhagraat. To yuvi aur ranny mere saath ghar chalo.

T: Par this is nt fair . Tia India vapas aane ke baadse reny se itne time ke liye door nahi rahi hai.

R: fikr mat kijiye Tia yeh sab humari suhagraat ke liye hi ho raha hai.

(whispers in her ears. jab bhi hum free honge Yuvi ko leke aapse milne aa jayenge. thik hai.)

then they all wave each other goodbye. the sadness of nt meeting each other gone in the excitement of meeting away from their parents glare.Such situations increase the romance in one's life . Though there is no dearth of romance here but what harm is done with sum more.

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sagarika ghosh

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Posted: 19 years ago

#296

PART 29

Several days passed and the love birds were not able to meet each other. Both Ashi and Tia were very angry as Ranveer had promised he would come with Yuvi to meet them. It was the night before the D- Day. Ashi and Tia had come to stay at AHUJA MANSION for the wedding. they were staying in one room.

Everybody had gone to sleep suddenly Tia heard as if someone was calling her TIA TIA Shhh ...... Yuvi lagta hai sab so rahe hain. Tia felt that Ranveer had come to meet her in her dreams if not in reality. suddenly a stone was thrown which landed in the balcony. Surely Tia wouldn't imagine ppl throwing stones in her dreams sooo she wasn't dreaming someone must have thrown a stone. She got up and went to the balcony and saw................ Ranveer and Yuvi. so she wasn't dreaming, they had climbed up to the balcony with the help pf the pipes. She quickly went and waked Ashi up and slowly and silently the four went outside the house unheard by anybody or probably they were heard by ppl but decided against disturbing the lovers on their night out.

Ranveer took Tia to a dserted park and Yuvi took Ashi to a different one.

R: Tia aap humse naraz to nahi hai ki hum aap se itne din milne nahi aaye.

T: woh Tia thoda upset thi par Tia ko realise hua ki tum humari shaddi ki preparations mein busy ho toh phir Tia upset nahi thi.

R: haan Tia aur vaise bhi yeh dooriyan humein humare suhagrat par aur kareeb layengi. kal ki raat humari raat hogi bas hum aur humari Tia dono akele ek saath , lights off

T: ranveer ( hits him shyly)

R: arre Tia aap sharmagayi. accha thik hai aaj sharma lijiye kal magar yeh sab nahi chalega. aap humare doodh leke aayengi, hum kamre mein ghusenge darvaza band karenge , aap ka ghunghat uthayenge..

T: bas Ranveer Tia ko sharam aati hai ( hides her facein ranveer's shirt)

R: humse kya sharam tia . aur agar aap aise sharmayengi to humara gift kaise dengi.

T: kaunsa gift?

R: ek saal mein ek choti si Tia sisodia.

Tia now hid her face even more. asthe moonlight fell on her face Ranveer saw how pretty she was he slowly removed the hair that fell on her face and slowly kissed her cheeks. It was dark but had it been daylight he could have seen the effect his touch had on Tia, her eyes closed cheeks burning pink.slowly he moved frm Tiaz neck , to her cheeks and then to her lips. the feel of his lips on hers drove her senseless and sent shivers down her body.

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on the other hand the two lovers were more vocal of their feelings and iin between when words failed them , expressed their feelings with gentle kisses. Yuvi and Ashi were never those out of the book romantic lovers, they were different. They fought with each other even on petty issues but that was how they had first expressed their feelings actually fights were what had brought them 2gether.

Ashi andYuvi never let ppl now abt their feelings for them feelings were personal , very personal. Public display of affection was rare , very rare.

soon it was time to leave. Yuvi and ashi picked Ranveer and Tia up and silently without saying a word , just holding hands they went home letting their eyes do the talking and just appreciating the feeling of being together on the night before their marriage.

Edited by ranv_rules - 19 years ago

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Divya

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Posted: 19 years ago

#297

too good Sagarika 👏

continue soon

Divz 😳

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sagarika ghosh

@ranv_rules

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Posted: 19 years ago

#298

part 29 posted.

last part will b posted whenever i hv time.

do comment

sagarika

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jasy

@jasy

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Posted: 19 years ago

#299

It is superb, Its too good, continue soon.... 👏

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honey_13

@honey_13

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Posted: 19 years ago

#300

You are too good man
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue the last part soon .
It's really sad that you are ending your fic
It was really nice.
Why don't you continue with their life after marriage????

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