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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: fate

strangers once more &a mp;n bsp;

year 2016

the duchess of mullineaux invites you to the langsdum ball

the ball was in full swing...the richest and the classiest people waltzed in the estate of mullineaux.....the great hall decorated in fineries looked spectacular..the ball was a success.....lady carberry smiled ... after months of preparation the event had finally taken place and so far without ne hassles....there was beauty,charm,money and wine.....and ofcourse scandles.....she looked lovingly at her son in law...the marquis of mullineux.....he looked ravishing ...handsome was to litle a compliment....his long hair was tied back in a red ribbon...in his black tuxedo and dark colourin he looked every bit of the rebel he was...with the air of insolence that surrounded him to the attitude of aloofness..to his arrogance...everything looked just...perfect?.....lady carberry smiled.....she was lucky to have him as a son in law...all the women of the ton flocked arround him...he treated them with respect....flirted with them or openly ignored them....he was unattainable....her smile was replaced by a frown....a gorgeous lady in blood red walked up to him whispered something into his ears and his eyes twinkled dangerously....lady carberry knew who she was....countess of michigan.....not that she didnot approve of her..she liked her..she had a spirit and fire which very few women possesed...but these two were already the talk of the ton....y were both of them so hell bent on ruinin their repution???wat lady carberry dint know was that the marquis and the countess was much above the common scandels..they had seen so much that gossip of the elite dint matter to them...they had seen enough of the ppl of the world...they had learnt young.....they had seen how whom they had once called frnds deserting them....they shared a relationship which no one understood nor did they want to explain.....


she wandered into the ball room...wat am i doin here???this is not me...wat am i doin here dressed in this ridiculous gown attendin this ridiculous event of ridiculous ppl who are lord and lordess onli in tiltles feedin their vanities and false proud regardin some stupid title which dint have ne meanin in this time....

wesha can we go?????please....by the way u look lovely tonite in violet....the colour really suits u....quite exquisite....i know u hate this sort of things but...this is the bestest place where one can find awesome business prospects ...investors and get to meet the right ppl....come on now...

hey bhaggu.....the women in violet whispered



aha...so..u..did..cont...it😉

well...i..like..these..typo..period..flitting..fics..where.. u..flit..bw..diff...time..periods!
now..write..faster!
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Posted: 19 years ago
well firstly thk u for contunin...secondly amazing...the time factor is gud..past... present...n ya use those old english vocab...it added d needed effect 2 d feel of the place...

plzzzzz continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
woooooooooooooooooooow
tia u rock girl
i missed u 😳
ab onlyn bhi nahi aati hai
waise gr8 part s'usual...this ones one of the more intresting parts yet 😳 .....btw...wesha..hey bhaggu..violet gown...ASHI?? 😲😲😲.....omg now i jst have to read the next part 👏

and by the by frm whr did u kno so mch old world english 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
tia ur fic is really wonderful 👏 plz cont soon.

titli
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Posted: 19 years ago
its gud tia....continue soon....poor ashi widout uv...whos wid her newy.....n ay will b 2gether na tia...plz plz plz puhleezeeeee
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Posted: 19 years ago
Wow 😛 the perfect combination of past and present...........i love historical romance and you are using it so perfectly 😊 ............super nice ya please continu it as fast as you can...............damn good job 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
thannnnnxxxxxx ppl
ok next part!!!!!!!comin up soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
okay fate,we all r waiting. 😳 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
common now lets dance...i had even saved this dance for u ..... the countess said.... the marquis looked up...in to the lovely eyes of the countess....dont u get tired of dancin lady???..
hmm i do wen i dance with those hedious apes but not wen i am dancin with good lookin guys like u .... then i dont mind...
am i hearing correctly??u paid me a compliment!!!
hmm so now can v dance??
so that was a bribe???
so it was...now can v please dance??
will u quit smoking???
o god after 10 years u have not been able to make me abandon smokin wen will u quit tellin me to stop smokin??
a guy can try rite??
exactly just the way i am tryin to get u to dance wimmi...

ahh the marquis himself.....how is ur lordship...its really a surprise to see u here with the haute ton...and dat to in the first dance of the season...i believed u despised social gatherings.....
the speaker was a well dressed man in his late 40's dressed in an expensive suit and twinklin blue eyes...
and how can we forget the lovely countess...
he bent down a softly kissed the countess's hand...
earl of dunstun.... its a pleasure to have u tonite....i but then the night wud have been incomplete without u....tell me how is the work at st.cathedrel going on..??

ur lady...without u the night wud not of begun..and the work has been goin on quite well all thanx to ur donations...and yes it is a pleasure meetin the marquis....all well i hope...the earl replied adressin the last few words to the marquis...
everything is well....and well i dont despise the ton but i am just scared of the ton and the ppl...now if u wud excuse me...
the marquis left....without another word...
the countess frowned at the sudden dispersal....
do save me a dance my lady...
she returned him with a smile a left behind the marquis...

on her way she bumped into a woman in violet ... she smiled apologetically and left...not givin her another glance....

but the lady in violet..better known as wesha...but let us give her ..her real name back now will we??anvesha ray bannerji urf ashi....
ashi stared into the space...she knew that face..that attitude..that smile...very well...infact too well...she had known it better than the face she saw in the mirror every day...the face that broke her heart..took away everything she had...even her identity......yet she had loved her...loved her enuff to call her..her sister...yet something got terribly wrong...

weshaaaa come on....i want u to meet some one...he is the real catch of the nite....marquis..

ralph dragged ashi to a group of ppl centre of which stood the marquis....

lord i am ralph de mario ...executive director of marks and spencer and dis is...wesha
nice to meet both of u .... umm wesha do save me dance....i always look forward dancin with a gorgeous lady..and u r by far the most beautiful lady in this room do save me a dance will u ??? he smiled and left....

leavin ashi stunned...a tiny tear drop slid down hear cheeks.....marquis of mullineux..or yuvraj dev of maurya...
the guy she had loved and the guy who had screamed from the maurya roof top that he had loved her too....but now????they were strangers once more.....he did not even recognise her.....but nor did the countess....ashi smiled...and uttered a single name..lavanya
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesomeeeeee tia 👏
hats off 2 u.plz cont asap. 😊

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