Will U B Mine-prt14,pg 47.UPDATED! - Page 11

awsome me really watin 4 d nxt prt....

wow ur fanfics rock. jus awesum fanfic plz continue wid it soon. i am waiting. 😊

Dia...cool, u continued finally! Yuvi asked to kiss her!!!!!! 😳

hey awesome fic read the whole right now!! its 2 sufi
excellent,keep up the gr8 work 👍🏼

arushi

wow.how sweet uv is.plzzzzzzz post asap.i miss u

Originally posted by: ashi912

wow.how sweet uv is.plzzzzzzz post asap.i miss u

u think i don't ???

newayz,thnx a LOT 2 ALL of u 4 u'r replies but i xpected sum more...

Originally posted by: funky n crazy

dikhne mein bhi short hi hai......and cudnt u hve used sum more spafces in the middle......tht wud hve mad it look muchhhhhhhhhhhh more longer...😆

yeah................i thot of doing so.........😆😆

Originally posted by: Evathegr8

Dia, u r a total roxtar!!!
Plz continue!
Your fanfcs are sooooooo enthralling yaar,it makes me go deep down to Ashi and yuvi.....
😉

oh...........i'm flattered............😳

i'm glad u lyked my fic..................😛😛😛

diaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa u better continue soon.....and haan don u dare use toooooooooooo many sapces to make it long...

Part 6

Ashi enters her room..........

vrinda:Oh................finally madam ko time mila mujhse milne ke liye.Ashi,main yeh homework apne liye nahi,tumhare liye kar rahi hoon.Zyada jaldi nahi aa sakti thi ?Waise,tum thi kahan itni der tak ?

ashi:Sorry for being so late,Maate.Woh main Yuvi ke saath thi..........

vrinda(with a naughty expression):YUVI ke saath ?!Waise,tum dono kar kya rahe the ?

ashi(a li'l angry):Duh,Maate,tum bhi naa...!!! I was trying to hide from Mom aur Yuvi ne mujhe help kiya and after Mom went away,I was having coffee with him........at CCD.

vrinda:Oh...yeh baat hai...mujhe laga ki tum aur Yuvi...

ashi(really angry this time):Duh,maine kaha na,stop it ! Yuvi mera dost hai.OK ?Mai nahi chahti ki koi hum dono ke baare mein ulta-seedha kuch bhi kahe...chahe woh tum ho ya aur koi.

vrinda:OK-OK,mai aaj se tumhare aur Yuvi ke baare mein ulta-seedha kuch bhi nahi kahungi.I'm sorry.

ashi: It's OK.Friends ke beech kabhi sorry aur thanks nahi hota.But still,I'm sorry for shouting at you.

vrinda:Hum dono kya yahan baith kar sirf "sorry-sorry" karte rahenge ?Chalo,let's finish your homework.

ashi:Maate,can you please hurry up with the home-work ?

vrinda:Haan,zaroor...par kyun ?Tumhe kahin jaana hai kya ?Tumne mujhe pehle kyun nahi bataya?

ashi:Duh,Maate ! Tum har waqt mujhe itne questions kyun poochti rehti ho ?Actually,I'm supposed to meet Yuvi at the shed...8:30 sharp.Mujhe ready hone ke liye bhi toh time chahiye,na ! Is liye keh rahi hoon ki let's hurry up with the home-work.

Vrinda is very surprised,but she doesn't ask Ashi anything,just in case Ashi gets angry...

(Half an hour later)Vrinda is helping Ashi to do her home-work...

vrinda:Ashi...kuch poochun ?

ashi:Of course,Maate !Anything.

vrinda(expecting ashi to be really angry):Is it...umm...tum aur Yuvi...is it a date?

ashi:Duh,of course not !

vrinda:Toh phir ?Suddenly yeh meeting kyun?Woh bhi sirf tum dono ?

ashi(with a naughty expression):Woh toh main tumhe baad mein bataungi...not now

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