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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_wacko

thank god..mere pyare anmol ratano!

tumne kabir aur jas ko sideline kar diya...main ussi me khush huuuuuuuuuuuuuu
lizu..u executed my idea very well..loved d letter and every single word of it
and aks d way u capture each emotion...its marvello!




wacko my love...
itni mushkil se jas and kabeer ko hataya naa...
u need to wack ashu now....
can u believe wht she is doing next...
if u can, plz save me from this attyachaar.. plzzz
apna idea sunakar, kal mera bp low kar diya!!!
SHE IS GETTING THE FREAKING ADITIYA IN OUR PYAARA RCC!!!
BACHAAAO MUJHE
😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: BUBLAI


I am trying my best to catch up fast .... now on pt. 37 ... but will surely catch up on all the parts ...



U TEMME WHTS HAPPEING IN PART 37 FIRST!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_wacko

ill read n comment liz!

yes yes we r not ending dis..i cant write in forbiden much as much as i try!..
but here my feelings and my heart overpowers me..and creativity just flowssssssssss


temme about it..
i so dnt have time for anything, but i manage to remove time for this rcc corner.. i dnt knw y, my heart pulls me here.. u want to go next debileena?
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Posted: 14 years ago
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEE NO ADITYAAAAAAAAAAAA....AKANKSHA CHHHABRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA..DONTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT BRING ADITYAAAAAAAAA..
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz no no no nooooooooooooo...we can have something else...i dnt want any more third party to intrude on dem now..agar aisa hua toh main aur lizzie STRIKE pe chale jayengeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr😡
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: elizaa


temme about it..
i so dnt have time for anything, but i manage to remove time for this rcc corner.. i dnt knw y, my heart pulls me here.. u want to go next debileena?

awww sAme here..even wen i dnt write i still love reading d story from d start😳
okay im going next!😃 music to ur ears na?😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_wacko

awww sAme here..even wen i dnt write i still love reading d story from d start😳

okay im going next!😃 music to ur ears na?😆



😳 this was the only thing tht made me happy after ashu's yesterdays news!
music nahi!! mast waala band!!!
jaldi jaldi!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_wacko

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEE NO ADITYAAAAAAAAAAAA....AKANKSHA CHHHABRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA..DONTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT BRING ADITYAAAAAAAAA..
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz no no no nooooooooooooo...we can have something else...i dnt want any more third party to intrude on dem now..agar aisa hua toh main aur lizzie STRIKE pe chale jayengeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr😡


seee seee!!! ashuuu

cant u see... 2 of ur writers r going on a strike!!!
debs!! che needs serious help ;)
she LIKES aditiya!!
we need to show her some aage ke videos :|
mujhe serious heart probs honewaali hai!!
uff uff these kids!!
😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
hahaha..she like aditya..god..dude ur in for a rude shock..
!
haan im writing abhi..will finsh n post in some 10 mins..
aki no please i cant stand more triangles and stuff AT ALL...
im slowly aiming for them to confess and all..uske baad thoda happy puppies wale romantic moments bhi dikhayenge na...
cmon no adi..we can have remix gang fun! okay!
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 111

ashi stood there ,watching him go..the sadness had been replaced by a renewed sense of hope ,and his eyes echoed that emotion very well,atleast to her,that sudden glow became inevitable to ignore!
"kyun, why him ya!..why...main abhi tak ye nahi samajh paa rahi..ki main iss monkey poop se PYAR kaise kar sakti hu?!?!?!
like how..hello its me -ashi!"
ashi sood there,looking at the door and talking to herself..the first signs of a lunatic in love..
*great ab main apne aap se baatein bhi kar rahi hu,bhaggu kasam jisne bhi ye love ka concept banaya hai..usski toh...*
but suddenly she spotted a gleaming silver on the floor,she picked it up..it was a guitar shaped key chain..wid YD embossed on it in gold!
ashi suddenly softened at the sight of it...each memory..each touch re surfacing ..yuvi was so soft,so caring when it came to her..
*did he love me then,all the defence ,all the moments we spent together,alone*
who is that other friend,is it me? is it someone else?..who is it..
and then rationality swept over her and she snapped out of her reverie at the creak of the door!
yuvi was in the cafetaria..trying to find some peace and quiet..in the babble of the students!😊...
suddenly he heard a song playing in the background..
tum mile toh mil gaya humsafar
tum mile,toh khud ki hai khabar
tum mile,
toh rishta sa ban gaya!
suddenly the memory of them being in the jungle rose in his mind,ashi getting drunk...telling him that she liked him..a sweet smile(THE KIND I ADOREEEEEEEEEE) lit up his face..
tum mile,toh jadoo chha gaya
tum mile toh jeena aa gaya
tum mile
toh maine paya hai khuda...
so was she the reason..was she my strenght,my being
ASHI...
a mischievous knowing smile finally made him realise that she was special..
note: guys der is a loose end in d ashi part..that someone comes..but please its not aditya...(aki pad le😆???)
make it someone else...like ranveer vrinda or even jas..but not HIM!
Edited by luv_wacko - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Err, dude, I liked Adi. Vaise bhi .. We decided on a different name, na? Not Adi, but Karan. :P Phir kyon? Mere saath aisa dhoka kyon!? 😭😭

But I liked the part! 😃 Nah .. Agar main Aditya ko laayi .. toh I'll make him enter grandly, not like this! 😆 Toh it can be anyone. But .. Adi chahiye mujhe!! I can't write lovey dovey moments. I SUCK. :P

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