Pieces Of These Species - 150PtsUpdt(FINISHED) - Page 25

Originally posted by: luv_wacko

YM pe add karo dono mujheeeeeeeeeee

Lizzie!! I'm dead..I'm dead..I'm so totally completely dead!! Gosh! What a part!! Seriously.. kya likha hai, dude! I have read this 10 times now.. And OMG OMG that hug! And then that kiss! Awww.. Lizzie! I love you for writing that! :D

*Runs off to read the part once again*

Originally posted by: _Akanksha_

Lizzie!! I'm dead..I'm dead..I'm so totally completely dead!! Gosh! What a part!! Seriously.. kya likha hai, dude! I have read this 10 times now.. And OMG OMG that hug! And then that kiss! Awww.. Lizzie! I love you for writing that! :D

*Runs off to read the part once again*

Originally posted by: elizaa

mean anki.. come ol right now... wer did u disappear???

ask me to write part now.. and u see.. thenga!!

jaldi se aao yahoo pe😡

Abhi aa rahi hoon.. Wait 15 minutes till meri behen so jaaye! I'd have to pop offline any minute she enters my room!! And main bhi update karungi abhi.. chill!! :D

PART 82

Soniya - (Cupping Ashi's face) ''I trust you, mamam! I trust you more than my life! And I trust Yuvi too. He is the only one that can keep you happy!''

Ashi - ''Duh uh mom! Aap toh aise bol rahi hai jaise hum shaadi karke 7 janam tak saath rehne wale hain!''

Soniya - (Frowning) ''Kyon? Tumne usse shaadi nahi karni?''

Ashi - ''Mom!? Aapka dimaag toh theek hai na? We are ONLY 17 .. and besides, child marriage = not cool!''

Soniya - (Smiling) ''Toh problem sirf child marriage se hai .. Yuvi se nahi!''

Ashi - (Pushing back and turning away) ''Mom, please, no marriage, no yuvi, okay?''

Soniya - (Worried) ''Ashi .. '' (Turns her around to make Ashi face her) ''Tum khush toh ho na?''

Ashi - ''Duh uh mom! Im happy! (Grins widely) ''See!''

Soniya - (Still not convinced) ''You love him, right?''

Ashi - (Looks down at her shoes and doesn't meet her gaze) ''Frankly..I don't know if this is 'love'!''

Soniya - (Holds her chin and makes her meet her eyes) ''Fine..do you like him?''

Ashi - (Hesitates) ''I... '' (Smiles) ''I like him, mom! Chill! I like him!''

Soniya - (Smiling) ''That's my girl! I'm very happy for you, mamam! ''(Embraces her) ''Very happy!''

Ashi - (The smile dissapeared from her face and her eyes turned sad as she hugged her mom) ''I wish, mom! I wish!'' (She muttered to herself)


--NEXT MORNING--

''Yuvi .. Yuvi utho! Yuvi!'' Yuvi was sleeping solemnly under his covers in his tent. He still hadn't gotten over him kissing Ashi's hand and that passionate hug. All those feelings were making him dizzy, and there was a huge smile on his face, even when he was sleeping.

Yuvi - (Mutters) ''Wacko, get lost! Abhi toh sone do!''

Jasmine - (Frowns and pulls the cover off him) ''Wacko? Did you just call me a wacko? Yuvi!''

Yuvi - (Jumps upright) ''Oh..Jas! I'm sorry..mujhe laga.. mujhe laga koi aur hai!''

Jasmine - (Takes a deep breath and lets it out slowly) ''Fine! fine! Koi baat nahi ..!'' (Holds his hand) ''Tum mere saath chal rahe ho na!''

Yuvi - (Confused) ''Kahaan?''

Jasmine - (Smacks him on the shoulder playfully) ''Vaapis Maurya ofcourse, you idiot! Dobara jungles mein gum jaane ka iraada hai ?''

Yuvi - (Smiles as those memories in the jungle came back to him) ''I won't mind!'' (He muttered too low for Jasmine to hear)

Jasmine - ''Kuch kaha tumne?''

Yuvi - (Snaps out of his reverie) ''Nahi .. nothing! Vo .. '' (Hesitates) ''I'm sorry..Jas..Mujhe Ashi ke saath jaana hai!''

Jasmine - (Angrily) ''Kyon? Uske saath kyon jaana hai !?''

Yuvi - (Tries to calm her down) ''Dekho.. dekho Jasmine, she is sick, and.. uski mom ne specially mujhe kaha hai, uske saath rehne ke liye! To take care of her! I can't let them down..Please try to understand!''

Jasmine - (Tears brimming in her eyes) ''Understand what, yuvi? That the guy I like and who likes me too can't spend time with me coz of this deal with another redhead!''

Yuvi - (Tensed) ''Listen, Jas .. ye deal mera idea tha, and you do not need to diss Ashi because of this!''

Jasmine - (Quips) ''Fine.. tum jaao apni pyaari Ashi ke paas! Get lost!'' (Walks away angrily while Yuvi makes no move to stop her)

Yuvi - ''Damn it!'' (Angrily when Jasmine was gone) ''Abhi sirf 7 hi baje hain and mujhe 11 baje nikalna hai!!..Ab main kya karun?'' (Remembers Sonia saying that he can go to Ashi's room in the morning if he wants) ''Ashi .. '' (Smiles and starts to get ready and pack his bags)

-- OUTSIDE ASHI'S HOTEL--

Yuvi - (Walking calmly when someone smacked his shoulder and sent his bag flying) ''Woah..watch it dude!'' (Turned around angrily)

Kabir - (Holding him by the collars) ''You are such a scumbag!''

Yuvi - (Pushes Kabir off his shirt) ''Dude, relax! Kya hua!?''

Kabir - (Smacks Yuvi on his face) ''Tum kal raat Ashi ke kamre mein the! Maine Sonia ko kehte suna that you kissed her! Do NOT forget .. she is MY girlfriend!''

Yuvi - (Dodges his another punch and punches him back) ''She is not your girlfriend, Kabir! And leave her alone!''

Kabir - (Wipes the blood off his face) ''Looks like tum apni is fake dating deal ko kuch zyaada hi seriously le rahi ho, hun!?'' (Warning him) ''Agar tumne Ashi ke close jaane ki koshi ki .. toh ...''

Yuvi - (Challenging him) ''Toh .. kya ? kya kar loge?''

Kabir - ''Sab ko bata dunga about your fake dating deal!'' (Grins) ''One more thing.. You should always remember that she is with you only coz of the deal! She LIKES me.. and you know that!''

(Yuvi clenches his fists and smacked him once again, while Kabir hits him hard on his head which starts bleeding)

Ashi - (Shocked) ''Hey Bhaggu!. Yahaan chal kya raha hai !?'' (Looks at Yuvi's nose and head which is bleeding) ''Yuvi .. tum theek toh ho?'' (Rushes to his side )

Kabir - (Angrily) ''Ashi, I want some explanations!''

Ashi - ''Duh uh!'' (Turning around angrily to face him) ''Explanations toh mujhe chahiye.. What's the meaning of all this!?''

Yuvi - ''Ashi ..voh..''

Ashi - ''Tum chup raho! Tumse kisi ne kuch nahi poocha!'' (Caressing his face to wipe the blood) ''Seriously, dude, tum dono poore ke poore paagal ho!''

Kabir - ''Ashi, whats this? Main tumhaara boyfriend hoon.. vo nahi!''

Ashi - (Snapping back) ''Boyfriend chahe jo bhi ho .. tumhein Yuvi pe haath uthaane ka koi hak nahi hai!''

Kabir - (Protesting) ''But he also hit me! Dekho.. ye blood!''

Ashi - (Ignoring him) ''Shuruaat tumne ki! Maine upar ki window se dekha! You came and hit him!'' (Pushes Yuvi with him inside the hotel) ''Tum mere saath chalo .. and you, Kabir, you just get lost!''

Yuvi - (He was just standing there looking at Ashi and Kabir fighting. He couldn't help but smile at Ashi's concern.. and he had to admit, he felt pretty happy seeing Kabir ignored like that. Still grinning, he led Ashi lead the way)