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Meeko

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Posted: 14 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: luv_wacko
lmao..soniya is soooo adorable...lol youngsters ke saamne young legna padta hai🤣
great going guys..i was a bit bored wid dat kabir n jasmine..n jasmine reminds me of aman's girlfrnd cum fiance cum galepadu behenji manmeet🤣...

ill go next gimme some time..catching up wid remix..wen im remixified ill write..

naps welcum to d corner..n guys rachel mite write some parts...i hope she does i need some differnt parts now.!

welcome back!! meherbaani se tum aayi toh!!

papers kaise the?

it has been long, only am and anki wer writing!!

high time more ppl join in😃

nappy ek part likh ke kho gayi... get her back too😆

i knw jasmine and kabir pakka rahe haii.. par woh nah ho toh thers no masaala too na...😉

get rachel too>>

and am waiting for ur part.. fast babes!!

welcome again!!

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debo...:D

@leeseunggilove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#232

papers wr gud..one paper wasnt gud..bt overall acche the..kal likhungi babe...abhi ep delh rahi hu..

btw nw im online..retro pics lady

!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#233

When Are You Updating, Debs ??

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Meeko

@Meeko

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Posted: 14 years ago

#234

debby... bohot der rikh liye....

am posting now, and am desp to read ur lines, sunday is too far... aaj hi likh lo na meri jaan!!!!😊

@anki: 3 din se rukhe the na... u go next!!😆

part 79

Sonia - ''I have arranged for a private cab for you two tomorrow! I don't want Ashi travelling with other students whilst she is sick..and the only one I trust with her is'' (Pointing at Yuvi)

''you! Toh kal subah 9 baje, your cab will be waiting for you outside this hotel! Bbiee!'' (Waves and closes the door behind them)

ashi (breathing hard)- "fooof, kahaan se mamma aagayi, accha hua we sent kabir back" looked at yuvi and narrowed her eyes

uv (grinned back)- "2 hours>> is wacko ke saath>> karein kya?"

ashi (shrugged her shoulders)- "wasnt it u who wanted to stay back with me... bhaggu knws wht we can do now"

uv (looking at the television set) -"movie?"

ashi (confused) -"heyy bhaggu!! movies?? tumhare type ki movies main dekhti nahi" and turned her face.

uv -"huh!?!??! meri types? meri types matlab??"

ashi- "tumhari types>>> tia types>>> senti types>>> MAIN NAHI DEKHTI!!"

UV ( immitating tia)- "puhleez... yuvi dev hona koi aisi waisi baat nahi hai! yuvi koi bhi aisi senti type movies dekhna pasand nahi!" and rolled off the bed laughing.. ashi joined in!!

ashi (still laughing) - "uv!!! tum miss 'aisi waisi' tia ki KYA acting karte ho!!"

uv (switching on the tv)- "ab bolo, which movie?"

ashi (looking at her watch)- "aah!! uv!! ur facinated with vampires?? wht diff, put onn star one!! weel watch pkyek repeats!! ;)"

uv- "star one?? here it is!!" looking bk at ashi "ashi.. look at tht chick... u look so much like her?!?!?"

ashi (petrified) -"oh plz psycho, i dnt look lke her, she looks like me!!- period!"

yuvi (pretending)- "yeah.. whatever... but she is much more hotter thn u!! black head u see" and he winked

ashi grinned.. he dint knw wht was next, "oh, so u like black heads?"

yuvi- "ofcourse.. i dnt like made up beauties" staring at her, "i like natural stuff... u see..."

ashi (continued her grin)- "heh!! and how bout the sexiness of a non natural purple head?"

yuvi knew wht she was hinting to, he quickly changed the topic-" what a brat misha can be!??! ull have some coffee? am ordering for myself!"

ashi-"hmm.. on my moms expense... i will"

yuvi called for coffee and cookies, things wer so different this time, he was used to being alone with girls, but now.. he cldnt figure out wht to do..

the coffe was there, they wer somewhere close to each other, and as their eyes met, their retina's danced to a beat that would fix them for an entire... 3 seconds..

"is this a date?" ashi thought to herself, and without delay, she took a sip.... then another sip... "ahhhhh, finally, this is refreshing."

"can this beat the flavour of the alchohol, u had on our jungle night out" yuvi snorted

"aah uv!! u ass... u forced me to hav tht, wht cld i do?" she shrugged her shoulders

uv- "u hit me, u insulted me?!?!?"

ashi (without waiting for a second)- "wen ur drunk, u do wht u always wanted to.. saara sach hota hai!! i cld have evn killed u then!! just coz i always wanted to!!" she sipped her coffee.

"and wht about being my wife and my dad's daughter-in-law??" he paused

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#235

Ahaa, Eliza, this has to be the wackiest part ever!! 😆😆

''She looks like you!'' ''No..she looks like me!'' 😆😆 ''I don't like made up beauties!'' ''So you like purple heads?'' 😆😆

Total bakwaas? Nah.. totally awesome! 😃

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#236

PART 80

Ashi turned to look at him. ''What do you mean?''

Yuvi smiled and shifted. He looked hesistant. ''Ah well..You just said that you do whatever you want to do when you are drunk, right?'' He raised a eyebrow at her and she knew that she was trapped.

She kept a straight face on and pretended that she doesn't understand him. ''Right.. So?''

Yuvi chuckled and grinned. ''And you mentioned being my wife and Yashwant Dev's future daughter-in-law. Was that what you want to do, since you said it when you were drunk?''

Ashi choked on her coffee. She moved her hand around in panic and motioned for him to pat her back. ''H..he..lp!'' She managed to stutter between her coughs.

''Oh yeah!'' Yuvi covered the distance between them and patted her back gently. ''Relax! You will be fine!''

That eased Ashi down a bit and she closed her eyes and sighed while the coughs stopped. She looked down at her coffee and forced her gaze up to meet Yuvi's eyes. Those black eyes always made her feel like he could watch through her, into her soul, her mind. She shook her head and muttered a thanks.

Yuvi smiled. ''Damn, you scared me, you wacko!''

Ashi smiled back, though her mind was too preoccupied with the closeness she and Yuvi shared right now. He was less than an inch away, right next to her. His hand was still on her back, and his face was too close to her neck. Yuvi realised that and he quickly turned away and slided back to his original seat. He threw his hands back and smiled. ''Didn't mean that! I was just trying to help!''

Ashi relaxed back on her pillow. ''I know, psycho! Did I say something?''

Yuvi kept his head up against the pillow by using his hand and grinned. ''Well, you were meant to say something. You were meant to answer my question!''

Ashi threw her head into the pillows and snorted. ''Please don't start that again, Yuvi!''

Yuvi's eyes twinkled with mischief and his grin just got wider. ''Why? Doesn't Anvesha Ray Banerjee have an answer right now? She is speechless for once.''

Ashi grunted and faced him. ''Look, I said that because we needed that shelter. And the only way to get that shelter was to convince them that we are together, husband wife.''

Yuvi sighed and nodded. ''Yeah, but I'm sure there could have been a way around.'' He winked at Ashi. ''Unless you didn't want a way around!''

Ashi threw the pillow at him out of impatience. ''Dude, get a grip! You are flying too high! Why would I - Anvesha Raj Banerjee - want to pretend that I'm your wife? That would be my worst nightmare. It would be hellish. It would be..It would be.. something that I can't even imagine!''

Yuvi started laughing and moved forward to calm a furious Ashi down. ''Chill, chill, Ashi. You are not my wife, so snap out of your dreamland!''

Ashi narrowed her eyes. ''Dreamland?'' She looked around for something to hit Yuvi with. ''I'll show you your dreamland today!''

''Woah woah woah'' Yuvi threw his hands forward to stop Ashi from scrambling about and picking any random thing to hit him with. She started wriggling in his grip. ''Get off me you moron!''

His hands slided down to her waist and locked her hands behind her. Ashi snorted and rolled her eyes. Yuvi just stared at her. ''Okay okay! Lemme go..I won't hit you!'' Her words were fakely sugar coated.

Yuvi realised the fact that he was too close to her on her bed. He snapped out of it and he was about to move back when his hands moved around her back and she started bursting into fits of laughter.

''Woah, Ashi, what happened? Man, you are a goner! A total nutcase!''

Ashi started laughing hysterically and managed to rumble a 'That's my tickle zone, you wacko!' before she started having those fits again. Yuvi looked down at his hands on her back and his eyes twinkled.

''Oh shit!'' Ashi muttered before he started tickling her again.

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debo...:D

@leeseunggilove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#237

u guys have gone nutssssssss....lol ashi n misha...classic part lizzie.considering d possibilities u nad i discussed ki 2 hours room me kya hoga🤣....

lmao...loved both parts mummy n baby..😛..i will update gimme sometime...iv falllen ill now....so gimme some time..i WILL update!

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Meeko

@Meeko

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Posted: 14 years ago

#238

@ debby

we have toh totally gone nuts... thinking wht to put up next, remix bukhar utra nahi... mera toh nahi!😆

classic part??? thanks😆

as u knw, didnt have nething in mind.. 2 hrs, alone in tht room!😳

mummy and baby??? dnt make me feel so old!😉

UVE FALLEN ILL?? kya hua tujhe? go get some rest and stop madraoing on IF!😆

exams ke baad bimar? tc yaar....

and dnt worry bout the update, we can wait(thoda) considering our obsession with ay, we can wait just thoda😛

btw, y msger hua? tum toh bina bataye gayab ho gayi...😡

me and anki wer waiting for u 4 so long to come thru yahoo

Edited by elizaa - 14 years ago

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Meeko

@Meeko

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Posted: 14 years ago

#239

itna bada post banaya and dc ho gaya😡 waapis utna nhi likhungi😕

@ aaki- kal ki raat was too good.. had a good time with dad..😛

par mom ne aake bohot daati diya, SHE EVEN TOOK AWAY OUR BOTTLES😡

DNT UNDERSTAND Y SHE EXISTS😡

par we had fun... i told my dad bout the vampie's ff we r reading.. dad loved it,😆

coming bk to ur post.... u v well knw, hw MANY times did i read it!!

love ur writing skills babes!! a few more exercises and u can write a book fo sure!!👏

and chicken soup toh tum likh hi logi!!😛 stories hum de denge!!😆

ive been reading tht ff, love the way it is written, but i can see no diff... urs is equally the best!!👏

ashiyuvi!!

yuvi just loves to go close to ashi😆 usko sirf bahana chahiye!!🤣

she just had to cough and he was soooooo close to her!!

agar id be coughing, meri maa do deti and mein theek ho jaati(idk y am getting my maa here.. guess coz i just got some pastings form her😡)

LOVED the tickling part!!😛

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#240

Ahaa, Book!? Ain't that a bit too much!!? 😆😆 You know? Meri problem ye hai .. I write one part, two part, three parts, max four parts in my FF, get bored & throw it away in some deep dark corner!! I can only manage to write and write here 'coz it's a group story! And I love you two's parts!! 😃

Bas bas.. apni maa ko beechmein na lao! We all hate our mums at times, don't we? Normal behaviour! 😃

Debby.. Take care!! 😊 Jab theek ho tab update karna! But you'll HAVE to update! Lizzie..ab we will wait for her!! I totally want a part from her! 😃