ITS BACK. pyar dosti hai! NEWPART#9 pg.13 - Page 7

amazin...one of the few times tht i hav been hooked on to somethin...keep up wid the good wrk n continue asap

Namz ....ur fic is
superb, terrific, awesome, fantastic 👏 👏 👏

and amazingly apt description of the actions and expressions of the characters through the pics
....i really appreciate ur efforts.
loved both the ashi-yuvi and tia-ranv parts
and cont fast 😊

ya i agree wth anushka.......this fic is really gud pls comtinue it soon

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Part #8

Next Day just before class starts .....
Natasha often feels like she is all alone even if she is surrounded by a big crowd. Maybe it was the loss of her mother that made her feel this way.. but she never let anyone knw abt how she really felt inside.. ranveer walks into the arts class in search of yuvi.. he spots yuvi and talks to him. while doing so, he sees natasha lost in her thoughts.. He sits on the seat next to natasha
R: hi natasha
N: ahhmm! hi!



R: aap bahut deep thoughts mein thi.. shayad humne aapko disturb kiya..
N: nahin nahin .. aisa kuch nahi hai.. woh to main bas yunhi..
Tia comes into the class and sees them both together. natasha looks at her.. and ranveer realises she is watching someone at the door he turns and sees tia coming in..
R": hi tia
T: hi..yuvi..ashi kahan hai
R: turns back and says to natasha: inhe kya hua hai??
N: hehe.. (she winks at him and says) : i think she's jealous..
R: ab isme jealous hone ki kya baat hai?
N: comon ranveer itne bhi bhole mat bano ... jaise ki tumhe nahin pata kyun..



R:ahh.. abhi hume class ke liye late ho raha hai.. hum aapse baadme milte hai.. bye
N: bye
Tia turns and looks at natasha
N: hi tia.. (wit a worried smile)
T: hi

aashi comes to the class and mitra sir enters their class...
Mitra: Ranveer Sisodia... pls come out..
Yuvi: yes sir,
Mitra: yeh jo tumhere ghungrale baal hai.. unka kya karne wale ho tum?
Yuvi: sir .. woh..
mitra: punishment ke taur par tum gym clean karoge aur weekend par kahin nahin jaoge.. ur grounded
yuvi:lekin sir..
Mitra: i said ur grounded and tths final..
yuvi turns to go back to class so tht he can take his books.. when ashi is standing at the door... wiht their books..
Ashi: lets go..
yuvi:where?
ashi:DU-UH! gym
they enter the gym and begin cleaning up...
Yuvi: aashi yeh kaam mera hai to tum yeh sab ...
ashi: yeh plan mera tha.. aur iske liye tum dono ko kai baar problems face karne padte hai.. so im giving u company...
yuvi: oh really .. to tum ye sab ranveer ke liye bhi karti.. ?
ashi: obvio yeh bhi koi kehne ki baat hai kya.. ?



yuvi: oh comon ashi... hum dono jaante hai ki tum yahan kyun aayi ho ... tum meri madaat kyun karna chati ho... tum itna time mere saath kyun spend karti ho.. as he says these sentences he comes closer to her and she is just quiet gazing into his eyes.. rite ashi? he comes very close..
and ashi brings the broom in between them ::: HAAN, kyunki jhadu marna meri hobby hai..
and yuvi smiles...

😆 jhadu marna meri hobby hai........way to go 👏.....ure fic is soooo romantic 😳 yet funny.......pls continue asap

😉 tooo gud yaar nams!!!!!
keep it up!!
cont it faster..........

avani 😊

dat was soo cute plus d merger of pcs was awesome it went along pretty well to gr8 !!