Write songs 2/4 REMIX!! - Page 3

Originally posted by: charmingal

Kab kyun kahan kidhar
Ruk gayee meri najar,
Tum kab dil mein saman baithe,
Khabhar na huyee mujhe jaane jigar,
Dil ke ek kone se awaj nikal rahi hai,
Saman rangeen and aur mausam haseen hai,
Magar pata nahim kyun,
tere mere beej yeh fasilon ki lakeer khadi hai,
Ab toh yeh tum hi kaho meherbaan,
Kya paana tumhe nahin mera naseeb?
Kya dil mein mere rehna nahin tumhe gavara,
Ya deni padegi mujhe apni jaan.
Kab kyun kahan kidhar,
ruk gaye meri najar.,

Dedicated to Tia and Ranveer- from Charm.

wow charmin girl !!!👏

44 where did u get such a gr8 n fantabulous imagination, i mean i havnt read such a wonderful creation 4 such a loooooooong time!! u r relly fantastic!!👏👏👏 i just cant praise u much !!

apni imagination kaa thoda hisaa mujhe bhi de do so that my idle mind just gets 2 do sum work!!😆😆

cheer n keep up d gud work!!👏👏

👏 👏 Wah Dj, Ashi aur charming gal. Wonderful. I am luving it. Post more plzzzzs. 😉

all of u it was gr8!!!!!...but soory i cant do any of it myself 😭 😭

here's 1!!
c.. this song is in 4 parts..... 1 4 each of da members of REMIX!!
k.. here's my 1st part of da song 4 Ashi...
this is deewana hai deekho 4m K3g!!
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Deewani ko deekho, anvesha bannerjee ko
usko Ashi kehkar, log bulate hai
Use lal-bal deekho, dil na churale wo
aisa kyun lage hai bolo na....

bolo bolo bolo
jhum chiki chiki jhum, tum bolo,
hai wo kaun jo??
Hey-bhaggu kehti hai, sabko wo!!


ha.......an
jhum chiki chiki jhum, tum bolo,
hai wo kaun jo??
Hey-bhaggu kehti rehti hai, sabko wo!!

come on come on
come tell us, tell us who u r
come on come on come tell us, who u r
Who r u??
(Duh-h Main Anvaisha Bannerjee Ray hoon!!)

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will post da other 3 parts 4 da others soon!! 😊 😃
Waiting 4 ur replies!! 😉 😳

👏
WWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWW CHARMINGAL
words are not enough to describe how enticing ur poem is ...
its awesome how u can express ur thoughts so well into a poem..
even i write poems but thy're nothign close to this one.. awesome work 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼


🤗keep it up .. i can proudly say tht ur ma best friend!!!!

Thank you swt life. Thats great. I'll be writing a song for Aashi and Yuvi too. Hope you guys like it too.

all r gr8 2 posted one nobody saw it 👏

dj n charmin girl keep up d gud work!! 😊
u both r awesome writers!! 👏
b/w dj where r d other 3 songs??!! 😕

da other 3 r comming up ppl!! This was just da 1st part n now.. here's da second part!!
Same song.. now 4 Tia.. actually no.. my fav is Tia so I'd post here's last!! Now its Yuvi's turn... 😆

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Deewana hai deekho, Yuvraj dev ko
use yuvi kehkar, sab bulate hai
uske curly hair ko deekho, dil na churale vo
aisi kyun lage hai bolo na...

bolo bolo bolo
jhum chiki chiki jhum, tum bolo,
hai wo kaun jo??
ashi use he-man kehti hai, wakko n Hey dood kehta hai wo!

ha.......an
jhum chiki chiki jhum, tum bolo,
hai wo kaun jo??
ashi use he-man kehti hai, wakko n Hey dood kehta hai wo!

come on come on
come tell us, tell us who u r
come on come on come tell us, who u r
Who r u??
(Hey dood.. I'm Yuvraj Dev.. Yashwant Dev's son!)

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ha.. next 2 parts coming up soon!!
😉

Cool! 👏 .Ur poems r soooooo gooooooodddd! 👏