aashi & yuvi @ sanganer(fan-fic)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi guys! this is a small fan-fic taking place @ sanganer. i am writing this cause i am really tired of seeing more of tia & ranveer .i want to c more of aashi & yuvi

while reading,please imagine the luv is in the air slow tune guys!

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sanganer,10:00pm. outside ranveer's house.

aashi thinking deeply is just sitting outside. yuvi enters

yuvi:whaco,tum abhi tak soye nahin.

aashi:(coming to her senses)tum(a lil surprised) ummmm,mujhe neend nahin aa rahe thi.

yuvi:hey!sab theek to hai na?(a lil worried)

aashi: haan,main bas timbo aur thakur ke baare main soch rahe thi.

yuvi: ab un dono ke beech kya hua.(a bored xpression)

aashi:duh uh! un dono ne kuch nahin kiya phycho. i mean jab mein in dono ko deekhthi hoon to i always think ki log pyaar kyon karte hai?(a lil disgust look)

yuvi:(he smirks) agar is sawaal ka jawaab pata hota na aashi, to logon ki life mein tension hi nahin hote.log soch kar to pyaar nahin karte. woh to bas ho jaata hai(looking into aashi's eyes) hum chahe bhi to kuch nahin kar paate.

aashi:(looking into yuvi's eyes,4 a minute forgetting everything) ummm,main jaante hoon yuvi,lekin yeh dono to khud ko itna dukhe kyon karte hain. agar dono ko ek doosre se itne prob hai to woh apne pyar ko bhula kyon nahin dete(though not completely believing wht she said).

yuvi: (an angered xpression) aashi! pyaar ko bhulana itna aasan nahin hota.(he starts speaking abt their lives) yeh sirf ek baar hote hai aashi.aur ek baar hote hai na to use bhulaana bahut mushkil hote hai.(there is pain in his eyes)sab log tumhaare tarah nahin hote hai, jo aasani se apne pyaar ko bhula paate hai. (aashi suddenly realising tht he was talking abt thm). shaayad tum is baat ko kabhi nahin samjhoge.(he just walks out,even before aashi realises)

aashi:(after a long yuvi had spoken abt their relationship,memories striked back,she was surprised to find tears in her eyes,4 this reason which had become a closed chapter in her life. yet she cud feel the pain.she cudn't ignore the fact tht yuvi's words even now bothered her)

she smiles to herself, aashi: tum theek kehete ho yuvi,ki maine apne pyaar ko aasani se bhula diya, shaayad isiliye cha kar bhi main tum hai bhula nahin paaye.

she goes inside the house.

guys! if its bad, stop me right here. u know i have to start accepting criticism right frm the start. guys writing is really not my cup of tea,but i thought lemme try.

happy remixing!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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AWESOMEEEEEEEE !!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOWWWWWWWWWWWW !!!!!!!!!!!!!plzzzzzzz continue !!!!!btw,plzzzzzzz c my new fic['my 1st ashi-yuvi fic--part 2!!!!!!']
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Posted: 19 years ago
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dont stop...it is vry gud 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its different! 👏 but plz make it ahve a happy ending!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi guys! thanks a million.i think this is the 1st time i am being appreciated 4 writing(unbelieveable) i'll try my best. hope u guys can have a treat during this weekened.


happy remixing!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its good.....plz do continue 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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bhool kar bhi yeh bhool mat karna ki tum ye fan fic likhna bhool jaao !!!!! 😉

duh uh !!!!!
i meant dont forget to continue , its 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey Sonia....its really good!!!👏....

I'm hoping to see something like this happen....😊

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