remix hence

guys here is my fan fic of remix probs 5-10 yrs further.anybody can write along with me

first we see a huge mansion
a white big building.
with a small mandir,tulsi etc
in we go
first we see a man with paper sitting on a rocking chair.
guess who
who else our dearest sumeet ahuja
sa:soniya meri chai le avo
soniya ray enters nothings abt her has changed.shes charming as ever
sr:aarahihoon baba,ek minute nahi rook sakte kya.
then we go on further
into the the puja room.
we find our dearest tia.
tia:om jai jagdish hare.....
then ranveer comes
ran:tia meri chai kaha hain
tia:ek minute rook nahi sakte.kya
ranveer walks away.and again tells
tia:dheko mia ro rahen ha
tia:tum samal nahi sakte.
sr:ranveer bache ko muje dedo mein samaloonge
suddenly the phone rings and ranveer picks it up.
Ran:kon baat kar rahe he?
Yuvi:hai ranveer dude kaise ho tum.sab kaise hain ghar pein.
suddenly ashi snatches the phone and says
ashi:kaise ho thakur
mama aur papa kaise hai.tia kaise hai,tum kaise ho,aur mia
ran:thoda rukiye ashi.hame bhi bolne dejiye.
humsab tekh hain.aap log kaise hai.
suddenly tia comes and takes the phone
and is very happy to hear ashi"s voise.
even soniya does the same and asks "mamam ladakh kaisi hain
usdin kahe rahi thi ki koi tall handsome ladka ke saat jana chathi thi aur ab"
ashi:wo to yuvi hain na mom.
sr:tum kab lot rahi ho ho
ashi:bohat jaldi mama
ashi:sabko meri aur yuvi ke taraf se bye kehedo.
and both keep their phones down
sumeet is happy to hear good news abt them.and says
sumeet:in dono ka bhi ek baccha hota to kitna kush hota ta mein
sr:sirf do saal hova na shaadi karke
aur tia aur ranveer ka kalke liye to teen saal ho jayega

hw was it.everybody can cont

this fanfic is totally bouncing !
gr8 work!

keep up the good work!

It's gr8. but why mia? what's it? what is it's meaning?

mmmmmmmmm.it was aweome no doubt but can u change d kids name frm mia to ria u know r for ranveer n ia for tia
well i wud surley add soemthing to it gimme some time though 👏
shelly

Cute.... but why dont u urself continue???

gr8888888888 😆 😆 par dere's sumthing wrong in wat ashi said--yuvi tall aur dark nahi hai !!!!woh toh humara cute ,short aur fair li'l indian hai acc 2 prachi 😆

no i think u missed that episode when soniya consoles ashi and ashi replies that way