Alzia SS 'The Malik Of Sultan's Heart' last part pg 32 - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago
atleast they can steal ur cheek biting idea yaar...☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: princess200

atleast they can steal ur cheek biting idea yaar...☺️

they will only churao yaqut ki izzat afzai🥱
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Posted: 9 years ago
hahahaha🤣 why u play with poor yaqut like that yaar...he was about to join his hands and probably catch Mirzas feet also...bas yehi baaki reh gaya hai...next update mein ull make him fall on Altunias feet also kya 🤣🤣
Amaa iski himmat toh dekho seedha bedroom mein ghuss aaya...woh bhi razia ke aane se pehle 😆

Thoda aur gutter banati toh kya jaata tera 😈

lut jayenge, khud ko bech k bhi sanam, hum tujhko payenge

to cheen lenge dunya se, chura lenge, daka dalna pada ya krna pada qatl jo bhi ho aap ko to hum hi payenge


uff! aap k in gulabi ruksaron ka ras pee jayenge hum☺️☺️


oye hoye...itna bhi qatal na karo hamara mirza...!!
sonaa ur dialogue delivery and shayaris are perfecttt !! 👏you really know how to keep mirzas character and nature intact...no one can do it better than you and babajee !!!! 👏I wait ..wait for ur updates firsttt and foremost to hear ur shayari and romantic dialogues of Mirza😳

uff the cheek bites☺️

ye sharam ka nahi, hamai mohobbat ka rang he mohtarma, jo aap pe khoob chad rha he.😳😆

aap hamen jitna door krengi na (he pulled her and she fell on him) hum utna paas le ayenge aapko

YAAAR AISA WALA ROMANCE CVS KAB DIKHAYENGE HUMEIN 😡😡

LEARN LEARN SOMETHING FROM HER STALKERS !!

she took a pillow and started hitting him, he snatched the pillow and threw it away, she started hitting him on his chest with her hands, he opened his kurta buttons

Altunia; ye lijiye khul k mariye is gustakh dil ko, kambhakht mun kholne se pehle sochta bhi nhi
yeh kya ho raha tha bhai 😈😆☺️
isko complete kyun nahi kiyaaa


hahahaha u actually brought Dar-ul-Falaq here 🤣🤣 and the way he told her...fatima nahi falaq kahiye ...🤣🤣 like hes so annoyed by the two of them🤣

and this bit --->Altunia; ama sultan aap hen k wo, aap to ese pareshan ho rhi hen jese aapke abu ya bade bhai agaye hon, keh dijiye aap nahi mil skti ...
thank god he made her do that🤣


i loved i loved i loved this update totally...
enjoyed every bit of it...yaaay aise hii updates deti rehna...yeh aise wale...i feel like reading this again and again🤗🤗
Edited by princess200 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: princess200

hahahaha🤣 why u play with poor yaqut like that yaar...he was about to join his hands and probably catch Mirzas feet also...bas yehi baaki reh gaya hai...next update mein ull make him fall on Altunias feet also kya 🤣🤣

Amaa iski himmat toh dekho seedha bedroom mein ghuss aaya...woh bhi razia ke aane se pehle 😆

Thoda aur gutter banati toh kya jaata tera 😈

lut jayenge, khud ko bech k bhi sanam, hum tujhko payenge

to cheen lenge dunya se, chura lenge, daka dalna pada ya krna pada qatl jo bhi ho aap ko to hum hi payenge


uff! aap k in gulabi ruksaron ka ras pee jayenge hum☺️☺️


oye hoye...itna bhi qatal na karo hamara mirza...!!
sonaa ur dialogue delivery and shayaris are perfecttt !! 👏you really know how to keep mirzas character and nature intact...no one can do it better than you and babajee !!!! 👏I wait ..wait for ur updates firsttt and foremost to hear ur shayari and romantic dialogues of Mirza😳

uff the cheek bites☺️

ye sharam ka nahi, hamai mohobbat ka rang he mohtarma, jo aap pe khoob chad rha he.😳😆

aap hamen jitna door krengi na (he pulled her and she fell on him) hum utna paas le ayenge aapko

YAAAR AISA WALA ROMANCE CVS KAB DIKHAYENGE HUMEIN 😡😡

LEARN LEARN SOMETHING FROM HER STALKERS !!

she took a pillow and started hitting him, he snatched the pillow and threw it away, she started hitting him on his chest with her hands, he opened his kurta buttons

Altunia; ye lijiye khul k mariye is gustakh dil ko, kambhakht mun kholne se pehle sochta bhi nhi
yeh kya ho raha tha bhai 😈😆☺️
isko complete kyun nahi kiyaaa


hahahaha u actually brought Dar-ul-Falaq here 🤣🤣 and the way he told her...fatima nahi falaq kahiye ...🤣🤣 like hes so annoyed by the two of them🤣

and this bit --->Altunia; ama sultan aap hen k wo, aap to ese pareshan ho rhi hen jese aapke abu ya bade bhai agaye hon, keh dijiye aap nahi mil skti ...
thank god he made her do that🤣


i loved i loved i loved this update totally...
enjoyed every bit of it...yaaay aise hii updates deti rehna...yeh aise wale...i feel like reading this again and again🤗🤗

Himmat e marda to madat e Khuda😛
Yaqut k saath khelna is my hobby, my fav toy😆
Ama aur gutter bhi ayega

Dar ul falaq bechare kab tk single rahenge cvs to kuch krne nhi wale to me hi sahi😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
iss story mein bhi mera late comment.. 😒

Malik ALtunia hum aapke saamne hath jodte hen guzarish krte hen aap andar mat jaiye
Altunia stared at Yaqut and then burst into laughter

sonu ye kya kar diya tumne yarr 🤣

bechare ke hath pair judwa diye tumne Mirza ke samne wo bhi sirf andar jaane se rokne k liye
abhi se Yakut miyan ki yeh haalat hai toh aage toh maula mere maula 😆
CVS ka toh pata nahi kab kuch aisa dikhayenge lekin tumhari story mein ye sab padhke itna mazza aata hai 😉
Mirza miyan ke mizaz aaj kuch jyada hi acche hain
itni tareefein, besharmi, mazakiyapan😉 iss Mirza ke hi toh hum deewane hain

daru ki falaq, falaq ka daru
yahan story mein bhi Zaroon miyan se Daru miyan bana diya usse 😆

Altunia; ama sultan aap hen k wo, aap to ese pareshan ho rhi hen jese aapke abu ya bade bhai agaye hon, keh dijiye aap nahi mil skti

Razia; pr

Altunia; kahiye

hahaha Razia ko hamesha Mirza ki kahi baat mann hi leni chahiye

awesome update tha sonu!!
update soonish!

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Posted: 9 years ago
@pari its okay comment to kiya na😃
yaqut ki bajana is my hobby😛
dar ul falaq ko cvs to dikhate nhi to mene soch ye bhi me hi krdun😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part_12

Yaqut was very worried, his intincts told him Altunia was upto no good but he could do nothing, Shamshad Razia and all the others blindly trusted him

Yaqut; ya Maula hamari Sultan ki hifazat krna unhe andaza bhi nhi wo kis museebat main hain.

Little did he know that ALtunia was not eyeing her, he actually loved her and she loved him back, unknown to everyone except Shazia Atigin Fatima and Zaroon, the two love birds spend alot of time together.

Razia was lying on the swing, her head on Altunia's chest and he had wrapped his arms around her.

Altunia; aapko nahi lagta ab ye baat hamen sabko bta deni chahiye

Razia; konsi baat?

Altunia; yehi k Fatima aur Zaroon dar-ul-falaq ban gye hen

Razia laughed, she turned to face him and bringing her face close to his

RAzia; aur RAzia aur Altunia, alzia

Altunia; alzia? MashAllah bada hi pyara naam hai

Razia; so to hai, do jism ek jaan, alzia

she rested her head again on his chest. He played with her fingers.

Altunia; aapke hathon main kab hamare naam ki mehendi rachegi? kab aap hamari dulhan banegi

Razia blushed

Razia; kab aap Malik-e-Aala banenge

Altunia; Sultan! sultanate k ilawa kuch aur kyun nhi soojta aapko?

Razia; soojta he na, balke hamen to aapke ilawa kuch nhi soojta

Altunia; haan aur ye sultanate to hamare khwabon pe kaayam he

they both laughed again, they kept dreaming about their happy future, unaware of what the destiny had planned for them.

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Altunia woke up and heard some voices, he recognized the musical voice of Razia in an instance but then he recognized the other voice and his blood boiled. Yaqut and Razia were chatting and laughing together standing on the balcony watching the sunrise

Razia; pta hai Yaqut hamen na kai raton se neend nhi aati isiliye roz ab suraj ko tulu hte dekhne yahan ajata hen, aaj aap bhi pakde gaye

Yaqut; sultan hum kafi dinon se pareshan hen kisi baat ko le kr, isi liye neend nhi ati, agar aapki ijazat ho to hum bta skte hen?

Razia; ye bhi koi poochne ki baat hai? be jhijhak ho k btaiye

Yaqut; Sultan ghustakhi ki mwafi chahenge, pr..hum..hum kayi dinon se dkeh rhe hen..Malik Altunia..unke mijaz..unki nazren

RAzia; MAlik Altunia? unhe kya hua, aapki ladai hui unse?

Yaqut; nahi sultan..wo nahi..wo dar asal..hum kese btayen aapko hamen to alfaaz bhi nahi mil rhe

Altunia who was hearing all this came to them and pushed Yaqut, Yaqut fell off the terrace and landed on the ground hard

Razia; Yaqut!!!..mirza ye kya kiya aapne?

Altunia's eyes were burning in anger.

Altunia; aap yahan subah subah us yaqut k saath mil k hamari buraiyan kr rhi theen? ye chalta he yahan roz?

RAzia; nahi mirza wo hum

Altunia; aur ye Yaqut khud ko bht kuch smjhta he na ye, har waqt aapke aur hamare beech ata he aaj iska kaam tamam krdenge hum

ALtunia took out his sword and marched towards the ground where Yaqut was, Razia ran behind him and tried to stop him.

Razia; mirza hamari baat to suniye, Yaqut ne kuch nhi kiya wo to bas

Altunia put his sword on Yaqut's neck

Altunia; aaj hum tumhen nhi chodenge

Yaqut; to krdijiye qatl hamara MAlik, aapse darte nhi hen hum, magar apni sultan ko aapse mehfoos rakhenge chahe uske liye jo krna pade hamen

ALtunia punched him,

Altunia; RAzia sirf hamari hai, sirf hamari !!!!!!! sbse pehle to tumhari ye na paak zaban hi kaatni hogi

Altunia was about to attack Yaqut again, RAzia threw a sword to Yaqut and he caught it, Altunia looked at Razia in anger and he felt betrayed, he hit Yaqut's sword and they indulged into a fight. The whole palace gathered there, from simple slaves to cpurtmen all were present there, and RAzia stood helpless.

Altunia was on fire and Yaqut was no match for him, ALtunia hit him on the arms and belly and he was bleeding badly, the courtmen were whispering.

Courtman; ye sultan na bas khadi hui hen, Malik ALtunia ko to sir pe chadhaya hi hua tha, ab is habshi ko bhi, ab kis ka saath den

Courtman2; sahi kaha miyaan, pr sach kahun to ye Altunia khud ko hi sultan smjhta he, bechare yaqut ki galti hi kya he jo sare aam usko maar rha he

Altunia was about to hit YAqut when RAzia held his hand, she came infront of Yaqut

RAzia; bas! ab aap agar ise marenge to us se pehle aapko hamen maarna hoga mirza

ALtunia was shocked, he felt as if all his bones were being crushed together

Courtman; Sultan Malik Altunia ko saza di jaye, bina waja Yaqut ko peeta he usne

Courtman3; nahi Sultan hamen yaqeen hai is habshi ne hi kuch galat kiya hoga

RAzia; nahi..hum chasma deed gawah hen, Yaqut beqasoor hain aur Malik Altunia ne bila waja unhe apne gusse ka shiqaar bnaya he, aage ka faisla hum deewan-e-khas me sunayenge

The sword fell from Altunia's hands, he couldn't believe his ears. The love of his life was planning to punish him just because he hit a nobody. He walked away silently and so did all the courtman. Razia broke down on the floor. Yaqut was taken away. Shazia and Fatima came to Razia.

Razia; aapi...aapi humne mirza...ab hum kya kren aapi, ek trf farz he aur dusri trf mohobbat, kis k saath insaaf kren hum

Fatima; Sultan aap unse baat krne ki koshish kijiye wo zarur samjh jayenge

Altunia on the other hand broke everything inside his room, Atigin entered andtried to calm him down

Atigin; mere bhai ye tum kya kr rhe ho? us habshi k liye khu ko kyun nuqsaan pohncha rhe ho tum?

Altunia; wo habshi hamare halk me phasa hua kaanta he atigin, hum use zinda nhi chodenge

Atigin; uski kya galti he? Galti to Razia ki hai na tumse mohobbat k daawe kr wo subah sawere us k saath waqt bitati he, ta k tumhen pta hi na chale, aaj to bhari mehfil me uska saath de diya aur ab tumhen saza sunai jayegi, ye shahi khandan k mard to mard aurten bhi dil phenk hoti hen

Altunia; Atigin!!!!!!1 zaban sambhal k, hamari mohtarma k shaan me gustakhi hum bardasht nhi krenge

Atigin; konsi mohtarma? wo jo ek taraf tumhare saath pyar k geet gati he aur dusri taraf us habshi ka saath deti he? kitna arsa hogya na tum dono k ishq ko abhi tak unhone sbko parde me kyun rkha he? niqah ka ehlaan kyun nhi krdeti? mere bhai, me to ek shehzadi ka shohar hun phir bhi aaj tak unpe haq nhi jata paya to wo to sultan he tumhare saath waqt bita k phenk degi niqal k doodh me se makhi ki trh, phir na kehna hamen, aur agr yaqeen nhi he to jao, kaho unse, abhi saza k saath niqaah ka ehlaan krde

Altunia thought for a while and then went to RAzia, Razia was still crying in her room with Fatima by her side, Fatima left when she saw him ente, Razia ran to him

Razia; mirza , miza hum..humen galat mat samjhiye, wo to..aapki galti he aap jante hen na...humen insaf

Altunia; humen aapki har saza manzoor he, bas ek ehsan krdijiye hum pe, aapke aur hamare niqaah ka ehlaan krdijiye

Razia didn't respond, she was silent, Altunai observed the change in color of her face and then started laughing.

Altunia; yaani aap bilkul wesi hen jese humne kabhi socha bhi na tha, is masum chehre k peeche ek be dil sultan he, jo sbko sirf mafad k liye istimal k use phenk deti he, wah Razia Sultan wah, bht acha sila diya hamari sachi mohobbat ka aapne, waah, hamare saath itne din se sirf dil jaoi kr rhi thi aap

RAzia; nahi mirza hum aapse sach me mohobbat krte hen

Altunia; is lafz ko na paak na kijiye Sultan, ghin aati he hamne ye soch k aap esa krskti hen, hamari bachpan ki dost hamari mehbooba hamen bas ek ghulam ki auqat ka samjh istimal krti rhi aur hamen pta hi na chala

RAzia; nhi mirza

Altunia; altunia! mirza hum sif apne apnon k liye hen, aur aap sirf sultan hen, humen saza suna dijiye jaldi sultan, ab hamen aapke fareb ko aur nahi jhelna

He left in anger. Razia stood helpless.

The next day RAzia sat in the court with dark circles and dry eyes, her tears had dried up after continuos crying, Altunia stood in the court as the guilty and Yaqut sat as he was unable to stand

Razia; Malik ALtunia ne jo kiya wo qabil-bardasht nhi he, magar unhone delhi sultanate k liye aaj tak jo kiya hum use bhi nhi jhutla skte, isiliye hum unhe Altunia ko jila watan krte huye, unhe Bhatinda ka subedaar banate hen, aaj se aur abhi se Delhi k darwaze unke liye band hen leking delhi sultanate k liye wo ab Bhatinda k subedaar hen.

Altunia just nodded and left for Bhatinda without a word


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Posted: 9 years ago
sorry for the bongi non romantic update, next is alzia war😉
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Originally posted by: overactor

sorry for the bongi non romantic update, next is alzia war😉


Are u bloody kidding me ? This was a BRILLIANT update. You know I like a grey Altunia more than an always-romantic Mirza na ??
#IcantWaitForTheAlziaWar ...surely urs is better than cvs ka...bt wait a minute u already showed a war OS btwn them before. ..yeh bhi waisa hii hoga

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: princess200


Are u bloody kidding me ? This was a BRILLIANT update. You know I like a grey Altunia more than an always-romantic Mirza na ??
#IcantWaitForTheAlziaWar ...surely urs is better than cvs ka...bt wait a minute u already showed a war OS btwn them before. ..yeh bhi waisa hii hoga

no ye different hoga 😉 i can write two wars differently na with the same theme😛

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