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BabyHimavari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1111

Originally posted by: bhabhijaan

The concept sounds very interesting indeed. Please do execute your vision into words. I like your stories. They are very descriptive. 😃🤗

ok BJ... i will try it out... i don't know how much i am gonna justify that...there r so many characters in the story...JBJ, Fatima, Iltut, turkan, ruknu, Qutub jaan... and defo AlZia would be there... have to add some new characters too... gonna be really challenging one... 😛... and also i am not at all so good in history... so writing story on the based on period drama is really tough...

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fm05

@fm05

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1112

Precap se lagta hai ki Sultan ka soda karwane ki idea Mirza ka hi hai. He really believes it is not Razo.😭 Agar jung mein woh usko gayal kardega toh joot bolne ki sabak mil jayegi Razo ko.😛 Badi ayi Mirza ko confuse karni wali.😡

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Scrumptious

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1113

Originally posted by: bhabhijaan
Precap se lagta hai ki Sultan ka soda karwane ki idea Mirza ka hi hai. He really believes it is not Razo.😭 Agar jung mein woh usko gayal kardega toh joot bolne ki sabak mil jayegi Razo ko.😛 Badi ayi Mirza ko confuse karni wali.😡

I hope he doesn't hurt her in this process

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fm05

@fm05

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1114

Originally posted by: ifians

ok BJ... i will try it out... i don't know how much i am gonna justify that...there r so many characters in the story...JBJ, Fatima, Iltut, turkan, ruknu, Qutub jaan... and defo AlZia would be there... have to add some new characters too... gonna be really challenging one... 😛... and also i am not at all so good in history... so writing story on the based on period drama is really tough...

Hume toh history ka fiqr nahin.. hum khud history mein weak hai.😆 AlZia ka love story nayi tareeka se likht lo toh hum wah wah karenge. You are going to use all the characters toh sach mein challenging hoga par I have full faith in you. It will be a good read insh'allah. 😳

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fm05

@fm05

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1115

Originally posted by: mydesire786
I hope he doesn't hurt her in this process

Arreh halki se chot se kuch nahin hoga par AlZia ka marham patti scene mil jayegi agar kisi ek ko chot lagi.😳😆

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Scrumptious

@Scrumptious

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1116

Originally posted by: bhabhijaan

Arreh halki se chot se kuch nahin hoga par AlZia ka marham patti scene mil jayegi agar kisi ek ko chot lagi.😳😆

uske liye toh main kab se wait kar rahi noon yaar 😳😉

but want razia dressing Mirza's wounds , lekin mujhe nahi lagta that's possible kyunki turkan ne toh Mirza Ko chudwadiya hai na

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Scrumptious

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1117

Mere man toh surf wahi khayal araha hai yaar Mirza shirtless aur zakhmi puri tarah se and razia uske zakhmon par malam lagrahi hai ... ❤️ Oh god u activated my gutter mind 😆😉

Edited by mydesire786 - 10 years ago

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fm05

@fm05

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1118

Mirza needs to give Razo a reality check bas. Yeh Sultan bankar zyada hawa mein udh rahe hai. He will bring her down a peg or two & talk some sense into her.

Sultan Yaldoz ka takat bhale hi Delhi ki Sultanate ko khaaq mein mila sakta hai par jis shaks Tuknu ka saath de raha hai aur uska majboori ka faida utha raha hai uspe bharosa kyun karega koi. 🤪Aise Sultan pe toh lanat. 😡 Maar gaya toh ghazni ka pe bala hoga. Begairat insaan.🤢

Use the love of the awaam to rebel against Tuknu & Yaldoz. C'mon.

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fm05

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Posted: 10 years ago

#1119

Originally posted by: mydesire786
Mere man toh surf wahi khayal araha hai yaar Mirza shirtless aur zakhmi puri tarah se and razia uske zakhmon par malam lagrahi hai ... ❤️ Oh god u activated my gutter mind 😆😉

😆 control Naaz...meri toh abhi roza hai...yeh sab nahin soch sakti 😳😆