Suraj hua madham Parud FF Last part-pt16 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81
hi thanks 4 da pm n double terrific update! well written
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice update...👍🏼...Laila scares Parud by locking their doors...😲...she goes for shopping with Rudra...🤔...who holds her hand...😕...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update
So laila is the one who locked them in
She's staying
Who's the guy?!
Looking forward to finding out
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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very interesting update dear
loved it soo much
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85
Lovely FF dear
Loved it!!
Loved paro's naive and innocence
Rudra and paro got married
Loved Laila's love and concern towards paro quoting to her innocence
Laila felt Jealous seeing parud bonding and camaraderie with each other
Parud moments!!😳
Rudra taught basic etiquette for paro to follow and behave in high class ambience
Paro was trying to fit thyself presentable in classy parties
Loved rudra surprise for paro !! the swing
The kitchen scene was cute
Laila played prank on parud quoting to her sudden visit
😉😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Though have watched the film
Loved to read it in ur way of writing
Thanks for the pm
Do continue to pm me
Will be waiting for the next update😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for pm n double update. this laila is seems to be a danger for parud relation. she did not even mind to be unwanted n uninvited guest. u r giving shock after shock. waiting for more.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful updates😳
Edited by desigirl_aabida - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part9 Laila is angry:leave my hand
He:how can I not touch a pretty girl like u?

Suddenly Rudra cums & beats him
.
Rudra:Don't dare to touch any woman from now onwards.
Rudra pushes him.He runs away.
Rudra looks at Laila:Laila..are you alright?
Laila becomes so emotional that she embraces him.
L:Thank you for saving me from him.I really got scared.
Rudra caresses her consoling her:Don't be scared Laila.He has gone.
And I thought you are a smart bold girl.So only at home you are bold.Outside home you are so soft and scared.
Rudra giggles.
L:Don't tease me.In such situations any woman will get scared.She needs a savior and protector like you.
He smiles:Don't worry.One day you will meet your life song savior and protector.
Laila smiles looking at him deeply.
She says in her mind:You have become my savior.No one else can take the place of my savior.
R:Get inside the car.
Rudra and Laila get inside the car.
RUDRA:2day I'm in a bad mood.lets
shop another day with Paro.if she's not there with

me,tht day wil b unbearable.i'm sorry Laila

LAILA:its ok jeeju.i'm not sad.bcoz u saved me from a

disaster like a filmi hero.i'm gr8ful 2 u.whatelse is

makes me happier dan this?

Rudra smiles.He starts the car..Laila's eyes r on Rudra.


They reach home.
Paro:what all did u buy?
LAILA:nothing

PARO:I cant believe it.how can a shop crazy girl like not

buy anything

Laila explains the whole incident.G is shocked:Oh my

god!thank god nothing bad happened

RUDRA:since I had a small fight,my back is paining
Paro:Oh my God...hope it's not hurting you much.
R:I am alright Paro.It's just a slight pain.
Paro:Remove your shirt.I will do hot water massage for you.You will feel better.

Rudra removes his shirt.Laila's eyes r on him.
She turns off her face and thinks:Oh God..Why I am getting attracted towards him?I should control myself.
Automatically Laila's eyes falls on Rudra.Paro puts a cloth
piece into hot water & puts the cloth on Rudra 's back.
Rudra:Ahh..
Paro:Oh..is it paining you?
Rudra:It's alright Paro.
LAILA:Didi..u dunno how 2 do it properly.i'l do it
.
Laila takes the cloth from him and starts massaging his back.Laila had a special feeling touching Rudra.
A smile appears on her face.

Paro:How do ypu feel now Rudra?
R:Feeling better.
Laila:See..I told you that I can give him a nice massage.Jeeju feels better now.It's my magic.
Paro jokes:Then now onwards you do body massage for Rudra.
Laila thinks:Wish I could do body massage for him forever.


Laila gets ready to go to college:Didi..I am going to college.
Paro:It's the first day.This place is not familiar to you.So don't go alone.Rudra will drop you.
Rudra:Yes..I will drop you.
Laila smiles knowing that Rudra will drop her to college.They both sit in the car.Laila can't control herself from looking at him.
She thinks:Why I feel like seeing him always?
Rudra:We have reached your College.
Laila comes back to senses.
L:Thank you jeeju.
R:No need of thanking me.I did this for you who is very special for me.
Laila becomes very happy:Means I am special for you?
R:Of course..you are my Paro's sister.So you will be special.Right?
Laila becomes dull.
L:Bye.
She gets out of the car.

2 weeks pass...

Laila gets used to college and city.

It's raining heavily.
Paro:Oh no..clothes are lying on the terrace.I have to take them back.
Paro rushes to the terrace to take them back.
Rudra comes:Where is Paro?
Laila:Didi has gone to terrace.
R:In this rain?She is mad.
Rudra runs to the terrace.Paro is drenched in rain.
Rudra goes near her and pulls her:Paro..leave those clothes.You will fall sick.
P:But Rudra..
R:You have no resistance power.You will catch fever.Don't be so careless.
She smiles:You care for me so much?
R:Yes..you are my love.
She smiles and embraces him.
P:I am so lucky to have such a caring husband like you.
Laila who reaches there sees this
and feels jealous.
She thinks:Instead of becoming happy to see both together why I am feeling so insecure?
R:Paro..go ..run to your room and change your wet clothes immediately,Don't forget to dry your hair.
P:Ok..what about you?
R:I am also coming.You go first.Run..
P:Ok..
Laila hides behind the terrace door.Paro rushes to her room.Rudra walks forward to leave the terrace and go to room.Laila enters the terrace.
R:Laila..why are you here?
Laila stammers:Actually..I...
R:You too will catch fever.Go to your room.
While walking Rudra slips and falls on Laila.They both fall down..Rudra on top of her.
Laila looks at him with burning passion.
Rudra gets up from her body:I am sorry.
Laila gets up:No need to say sorry jeeju.
Rudra leaves the terrace.He thinks:It' was so embarrassing.
Laila smiles thinking of how Rudra was on top of her.

Laila was haunted by what happened in the terrace in her sleep too.She opens her eyes blushing.
L:I love you dear..


A few days later.B4 going 2 temple, Rudra finds a letter

inside his book.he reads it.

"My Dear Jeeju..i'm writing this letter 2 open my heart

b4 u.I luv u"

Rudra is shocked. Rudra cant believe it.

Paro gets inside the room:its getting late.cum Rudra
Rudra cums out.he luks at Laila.She had a killing luk.They get

inside the car. Rudra luks at the mirror.he feels

uncomfortable seeing Laila luking at him in the mirror.


They pray in the temple. Rudra opens his eyes & is stunned 2

see Laila smiling at him instead of praying. Rudra goes out &

stands.She also goes near him.

RUDRA:what's written in the letter?

LAILA:did'nt u read it?

RUDRA:yes.where you unconscious while writing it?

LAILA:no,I was unconscious.i luv u jeeju

Rudra is angry:u r mad
?
Laila holds his shoulders passionately:Yes..I mad in your love.
Rudra gets irritated:Laila!
Suddenly both see
Paro smiling at them inside the temple.they also
smile.

RUDRA:Laila...

LAILA:plz don't waste ur time by advising me.i'm
strong in my decision

RUDRA:Then what about your loving sister Paro?Have you ever thought about her?
u r spoiling ur sister's life.

She holds his collar angrily.
LAILA:I'm not that cruel.i don't want 2 destroy di's life.i
wont tel u 2 desert Paro di 4 me.but I want u.Did you understand?
Rudra is stunned


WHAT'L RUDRA DO?




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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part10
Laila:2day at 10pm I'l wait 4 u.after di's sleeps u'v 2
cum
Rudra:no.don't expect me.i'm not that sort of a person
Laila's eyes sharpen:u'l cum.bcoz the after effects will be worse than you can even imagine..
Rudra is stunned:Laila..
Paro cums.Laila has an evil smile 4 Rudra. Rudrafeels awkward.

At night on the bed.Rudra is upset.Paro is keeping on chatting with her.so he can't listen 2 what Paro says.
PARO:Rudra!r u here?
RUDRA:ya.i'm tired.that's why.Tell me what were you saying?
P:Means you did'nt hear anything?I was talking about Laila.Her college news.
Paro talks about Laila and Rudra gets irritated.
Rudra:Always Laila..Laila..Laila..you have nothing else to say?
Paro becomes gloomy:Why are you so angry Rudra?
He feels guilty seeing her innocent face.He caresses her face:I am sorry Paro.Job related tensions are there.That's why.
P:It's ok.I understand.
R:Let me sleep.Good night.



P:Good night.
Rudra pretends 2 sleep. Rudra 's mind is full of Laila's words.

Laila is getting irritated as Rudra is not cuming 2 see
her.she's sitting on the swinging chair & is stitching
pearls on the cloth. Rudra cums.She is relieved.
she smiles.
She holds his face passionately:I knew
that u'l cum.I know that you can't control yourself from loving me.

RUDRA:Stop it Laila.I luv Paro
LAILA:but u luv me too
RUDRA:no.i came here 2 tell u 2 stop this nonsense.plz wash
ur head.its full of worms.i hate u
Laila gets upset:no.plz don't tell like that.i luv u jeeju
Tears fall from her eyes.
RUDRA:stop it.
He tries to go from there.Suddenly she holds him tightly:You can't leave me and go like that.


Paro opens her eyes.she feels awkward not seeingRudra
there:where is Rudra?
Paro gets up from the bed.

Rudra pushes her:You are crazy.
Unexpectedly Laila falls on Rudra's feet:plz don't leave me jeeju.I can't imagine a life without you.
The pearls in her hand fall on his feet.
Rudra feels it unbearable.Suddenly Rudra is shocked 2 c Paro standing &
watching this.

WHAT'L B PARO'S REACTION?

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