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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RitikaGarg8

Ooo! Intriguing!!

I wonder what the secret is... Please Continue soon and PM me if possible :D


The secret is an important one. You will know it much later. I have sent a buddy request so that I remember to PM you.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 3


"No... you can't" she spoke in her sleep. "Please...don't" she said as she started to sweat. A cool hand felt her forehead. Her fingers fisted the sheet and her legs kicked off the covers. Strong arms moved to restrain her. "Please... it will hurt," she pleaded tying to pull free.


"Shaanth! It's just a bad dream," he finally spoke cradling her slightly. She stopped kicking her racing heart slowing down. "That's right. Just a dream," he whispered in her ear. Slowly her eyes opened. She saw him. Rudra holding her. Her husbands arms around her. "You came back," she whispered. He pulled away slightly and switched on the night lamp. Of course he came back. This was home where else would he go.


She wanted to ask where he had been, what happened to Thakursa. But this wasn't the time. He looked tired and ready to collapse. She wondered if it was just this mission or every day was going to be like this. "Shall I bring you dinner?" she asked not sure if he had eaten. He glared at her, "I didn't marry you to because I need someone to take care of me." Why did he marry her, she asked. "Good back to sleep," he said and went to the bathroom.


He had married her to punish her, to break the hope that she could go back home. He turned on the shower. She had made this her home. Even his bathroom smelt like her scent of wild roses and honey. She made him her comfort. Her nightmares stilled in his arms. "You have given her the right over you,Rudra!", Laila's voice echoed. He turned off the shower. He would be careful and protective of his heart. She wouldn't destroy him the way Ranavat had been destroyed.


She watched him emerge dressed in a white kurta. "Didn't I tell you to go to sleep?" he shouted seeing that she was standing by the bed. She moved uncertain where exactly she could lie down. She grabbed her comforter. He grabbed her hand and led her back to her side, "Paro, we are married. You can sleep here." Her eyes widened. What was he implying? "I won't hurt you if that's what you are afraid of," he assured her. She nodded and went to sleep.


The next day morning as she was clearing the breakfast table. She heard commotion in the hall. Kakisa sounded very angry. She went towards the others when she felt a hand on her wrist. "Stay close to me. I don't know what that lady's problem is," Rudra instructed. She obeyed. Kakosa was trying to calm her down. "I will not calm down. What does he think of himself, he is king only for that little village who hasn't realised that the whole of India have a single government. We, Ranavats had more power and prestige but we gave up our titles and joined hands with others," she shouted.


Sumer came close and asked, "Paro bhabhisa, can I get a cup of tea?" At Rudra's slight nod, she left for the kitchen. "What's did you tell them?" she heard him ask his aunt. She had told them that if the Ranavat heir likes a girl and wants to marry her, he will do it directly. His family will make sure he gets the bride of his choice. He doesn't have to kidnap her from the man tap. But he never kidnap her from the mantap, Paro thought to herself. Who was twisting things?


"Tejawat is making it look like I'm a love struck fool not a responsible soldier. Did you tell him that I rescued you in the desert the first time we met?" he asked. She nodded and told him that what he did that day was a good thing, what a soldier would do. It wasn't foolish. "Paro, if my credibility is questioned, his guilt won't be," he explained.


"I will give you proof of his guilt. You make sure he doesn't drag this family's name through mud," Kakisa told Rudra. Kakosa asked what proof she had and why hadn't mentioned this before. "I didn't know whether your nephew was causing trouble like he used to or if he was doing something important," she replied. Rudra asked if this was about her conspiring to have him killed or Paro kidnapped.


Bapusa was furious, "Mohini, what do you lack? This haveli, this family, this money isn't it enough for you? Why are you behind his life?" Kakisa didn't have an answer. "Forget it Ranavat, just because she decides nothing is going to happen. Don't hurt yourself by shouting. It isn't that easy to bring me down" Rudra told his father. His father pushed him aside and went to his room. Kakosa followed him.


"From now onwards don't interfere in my work or my life. Otherwise the consequences won't be good," he warned and held Paro's wrist dragging her away. Once they were in their room, he let her go and picked up a file. Seeing that he was busy, she went back to arranging his cupboard. His clothes were mixed with Sumer bhaisa's and there was no room for her things.


As she folded her eyes kept darting to him. "If you want to talk about anything other than what just happened outside you can," he said not moving his eyes from the file. She did have several questions but didn't want to annoy so just walked to the diwan were he was seated. "When I was small, there was a boy," she paused to see his reaction.


He kept the file aside and turned to her, "Paro, BSD are not terrorists. We don't kidnap children to join our ranks. They have to apply at headquarters if they are interested. We aren't as bad as Tejawat pretends us to be." She shook her head. She knew that they weren't bad having met the BSD officers and having spent time with them. "I saw him at a bus stop and he was very upset. I gave him my doll to cheer him up and," she stopped. His face had turned pale.


He got up wondering how she knew this story. That was his secret rendezvous with a sweet girl who had made him smile. He wondered if she was the girl who gave him the doll. He took it out and she cried, "My doll. You kept it safe." She checked for the "P" she had made. She laughed when she found it. "Why did you give it to me?" he asked . She replied that she just wanted him to smile. He nodded. That fit the explanation he had all those years ago.


"Why did you keep it with you?" she asked. He replied that it was one of sweetest things anyone had done for him. She wondered if his mother had left him then but didn't ask. "You can have it back," he said kindly. She looked like she could use the comfort that doll provide. She held it close grateful for the memories of her parents they represented.


A few minutes later, there was a knock at their bedroom door. Paro opened. Samrat bhaisa and Jeeja came in asking for Rudra. They rushed in and showed him a picture. He got angry seeing it. "Maithili found this picture on Thausa's floor," Samrat bhaisa said. He replied that it's about time his father throws out that woman's things. Jeeja shook her head, "That's not it. She had come here during your sangeeth. I didn't recognise her and I asked Maajisa. But she had left by then.


"Thakurain maasa?" Paro whispered looking over Rudra's shoulder. The other three were shocked. "What's rubbish are you saying?" Rudra shouted. Paro told him that she knew the lady. She was Raja Thakursa's wife. Samrat bhaisa asked her to see carefully if it was the same woman. "If Paro says it's her, it's her. She has spent years in Birpur. She would now," Rudra said walking to the door.


"Wait are you going to tell Bapusa?" Paro asked wondering how he would take it. Rudra nodded. His father needed to know this even if it would hurt his pride. His mother had run to the biggest crook of Rajasthan.

Edited by AlooMatar - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
OMG! I wish the story was this straightforward in the serial as well; it would save viewers a lot of angst...😛😆
This Rudra is less volatile than the one in the show, and I hope that's gonna help PaRud's relationship in this ff. 😉

All in All, Wonderful Update and I wonder what's going to happen next...

P.S. - Thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome Update...
PaRud scenes are so lovely..
The way Rudra comforts his Paro which s always unique..
PaRud childhood Doll & Frndship scene is vry cool one,.
Rudra is vry cool person in ur story its also nice bt I love Paro's Jallad Rudra more..
Mala so soon and u didnt forgot abt Laila too..
Its vry nice & Awesome update..
Loved it so much,.
P.S. Pls PM me...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RitikaGarg8

OMG! I wish the story was this straightforward in the serial as well; it would save viewers a lot of angst...😛😆

This Rudra is less volatile than the one in the show, and I hope that's gonna help PaRud's relationship in this ff. 😉

All in All, Wonderful Update and I wonder what's going to happen next...

P.S. - Thanks for the PM 😊

Thank you. Their life is hard enough as it is, why add complications.
Rudra is getting his way so far. So he doesn't have much to complain right now.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -BhavyaEsther-

Awesome Update...

PaRud scenes are so lovely..
The way Rudra comforts his Paro which s always unique..
PaRud childhood Doll & Frndship scene is vry cool one,.
Rudra is vry cool person in ur story its also nice bt I love Paro's Jallad Rudra more..
Mala so soon and u didnt forgot abt Laila too..
Its vry nice & Awesome update..
Loved it so much,.
P.S. Pls PM me...

Thank you. Parud are unique na. He is in a weird place right now. Might become more Jallad.
I don't like Mala so getting her out of the way 😊
Will PM you on the next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 4
"Rudra wait! You can't go. It will break his heart," Paro said chasing after her husband. He kept walking then suddenly instead of pushing the door open, he dragged her aside. He took her to the store room and pulled down some sheets. She looked around covering her face from the dust. She saw an old wedding photo in a gilded frame. She rubbed off the cob webs when he banged open a cupboard. She watched in horror as he dumped sarees upon sarees. "What's are you doing?" she asked placing her hand on his shoulder.

He pushed it off and said, "This is like Ranavat's mind. He pretends that she isn't important. That she is a beautiful woman who doesn't belong to anyone. But the truth is, he is waiting for her return. He thinks she left because she is upset with him. That she will come back when she is ready. Come back when she misses me. But he was wrong. She left not because she was upset, but because she cheated on him. The promises she made, the life she built, the child she raised didn't matter."

He asked her to bring the things to the aangan. She stood there confused what he was upto. He picked up a bunch of sarees and dumped it on her arms, "That was an order. You don't have to think about it just follow the instructions." She quickly took them and ran before he yelled at her again.

In the aangan, the entire family was gathered. "Beendini, if you have decided to wash your mother-in-law's old clothes take it to the backyard," Mohini said. Rudra brought some more boxes. He put them all down. "Bring me a matchbox," he told her. She knew what he was upto and waited for someone to stop him. "I will get it myself," he said and went to the kitchen.

Bapusa came out of his room, "What's new madness is this? Parvati why is taking his mother's things?" he watched in horror and a sudden blaze lept in the middle of the aangan. "Tejawat will make sure she has clothes. We don't have to keep her things anymore. He will take care of her needs. It is the least he can do after all the years she has given him" he said.

Bapusa slapped him hard, "Don't you dare talk about your mother like that." He reeled back in anger, "She isn't my mother or even your wife. She is just Tejawat's" he couldn't say it. Not as he watched his father's eyes dilate. He placed his hand on his father's shoulder, "She isn't coming back. I will kill her if she even thinks of coming here."

Bapusa held his heart lest it shaters. He watched his wife, former wife's face burn. Instinctively he reached to save it. The smoke was too much. He started to cough. Paro pulled him back, "Let me take you inside Bapusa. There is nothing to watch here." Rudra stopped them, "Paro! Wait! He needs this." Paro shook her head. Life had already been cruel enough to him. He didn't need this.

Kakosa told Samrat bhaisa and Sumer bhaisa to get water and put the fire out. "Kakisa I hope you haven't squirreled away some of your sister's things," Rudra asked. She shook her head. "Some of your grandmother's things are there which I was asked to keep for her. But now they belong to Parvati Beendini. She will take her place in this house."

Later that evening, Paro went back to her room after making sure that Bapusa was feeling better. She saw his silhouette in the dark and walked towards him. "How could you do that? How could you break your father like that. Jallad!" she scolded. He didn't respond. It infuriated her. She needed explanations. She was the enemy he married. What was Bapusa's fault.

The ground beneath her feet rolled. She slipped and braced for impact. His arms held her tight, steadying her. He switched on the light. She gasped at the destruction in his side of the room. Torn papers littered the floor. Broken glass with smelly alcohol placed at the table by his bed. "You were drinking?" she asked shocked to see his dishevelled appearance.

"I'm sorry ma'am. I didn't mean to startle you. My life has taken another unexpected turn and I just needed a few drinks. I will try not to bother you," he said guiding her safely to bed. She watched the polite stranger tuck her into bed and switch off the light. She watched him go slump back into the darkness. She saw him pour liquor into a glass and got up. "Go back to sleep," he growled. She complied unwillingly. He wasn't the gentle Bapusa who would open up with his grief. He was Rudra, the one who had built walls around his heart to keep it safe.
The next day morning, he stretched on his bed. The alcohol had drowned his memories and made the night bearable. He looked around and realised that Paro wasn't there. He scanned the room wondering vaguely if another beautiful woman had left him. Maybe it was for the best. She left before he grew attached to her.

Moments later, there was a knock at his door. He got up to open it. The bathroom door opened first and his wife stepped out. "What were you doing in there?" he asked walking past her. She frowned but didn't answer. Maithili Jeeja appeared at the door with a tea tray, "I hope I didn't wake you too early. But there is plenty to do today." Paro felt guilty at not helping around the house.

"Maajisa said we will be having a puja in the morning followed by Mukh dikhaee and other rituals. Just get ready quickly," she said. Rudra was annoyed. He didn't want to perform anymore rituals where he had to act like the doting husband. "I know it isn't easy for you both but these things follow all weddings and with your wedding being the talk of town, we will have to make sure people realise that there is nothing strange about this union," she explained. Paro replied, "Don't worry Jeeja. We will do as required." Jeeja smiled and took her along, "Come with me and I will show what you have to wear."

While the puja was going on, the calling bell rang. Sunheri got up to answer it. "Rudra bhaisa, someone named Dr. Bakshi has come to see you," she told them all. Bapusa asked her to call him inside. "What's the matter Rudradev? Did you miss an appointment that the good doctor has come home looking for you?" he asked. Rudra replied that he was fine. And that the doctor was probably there to check his health.

Next to him, Paro tensed. She remembered the bout of wheezing Bapusa went through yesterday. Rudra must be right. He needed extra care. She wondered how she could make his life better. "Actually I'm here to meet the new Mrs. Ranavat. I have heard several things about her," a middle aged man said coming in. Instinctively Paro reached for her husband's hand. She watched him take a seat next to Bapusa. "Theek hai?" Rudra asked observing the pale fingers on his arm. She nodded slowly pulling her hand away. Panditji smiled at them and finished the rituals.

"Khani khama, doctor saab," Paro greeted the man who was waiting in their room. She was followed by Rudra who was annoyed by the prospect of having a doctor examine him. "I'm fine. You should just clear me for work," he suggested. The doctor looked at him keenly, "You have a bullet injury that needs attention. Don't bother lying he said. Rudra scowled, "You are worrying my wife unnecessarily." The doctor replied that her fate is to worry everytime he wears his uniform.

He guided Rudra to a chair and instructed him to take of his kurta. Rudra looked at Paro pointedly. She turned to leave when the doctor stopped her. "Someday this boy might have the good sense to get a proper dressing and come to you," he said peeling off the shoddy bandage that covered his biceps. Paro gasped seeing the scars on his body. "Don't glare at her. You look like an animal with so many scars," the doctor scolded.

Paro's eyes were fixed on his battle worn torso. Why would anyone put themselves through constant pain like this? She remembered how he felt about protecting the country. It was an obsession for him to go after those who threatened the nation. Whether he had proof or not he didn't wait to stop what he thought was wrong. This was a noble line of work wasn't it? Why did Thakursa think of BSD as the enemy then? They put their lives on the line for him too.

"There. That is done," the doctor said helping Rudra wear his kurta again. Paro quickly discarded the old bandages. "Is he going to be alright?"she asked. He nodded, "He is fine. In fact, he is just the excuse. I wanted to talk to you."
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hmmm... once again, I am wondering what this is all about? Why does the doctor want to talk to Paro?
I can see the Jallad side of Rudra coming out with the mention of his mother and her belongings. I hope Rudra and his Bapusa get over Mala quickly...

I like the small moments between rudra and paro - how she reached for his hand and he told the doctor off for "worrying his wife" . PaRud are so cute. Looking forward to more of them in the next update!

Thanks for the PM! :)


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its Really an Awesome update..
Jallad Side Of Rudra in d right place,I doesnt want Fear Rudra who got to kno abt his mom in RR...
PaRud small moment is really Nice..
y Dr want to talk to Paro? Is thr any serious prob? Oh God I hav to wait for nxt chapter to kno abt it..
Thx for PM...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Phew!!!! Finally read the two chapters.
Awesome updates as usual. No doubt about it. But this time Rudra was incomprehensible to me. Everytime I get to see a new side of his. Really a closed book as you've said earlier. Thanks for the PM. Continue soon.

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