Alt ending FF:Our RR~Th#10~TH#11 UP! - Page 14

Zara ,it's outstanding. I am rushing out but couldn't leave without saying this. Will write more later.

Super duper chapter Zara...loved each and every word...every dialogue ...scene to the core ...just perfect.
Rudra's anger was portrayed so well , so natural ... the way he banged the glass on Naksh was brilliant. Oh how I simply loved it !!
The haldi scene was so beautifully put together , it was as if I am watching it live on my t.v screen...it was so intense and power packed.
I really appreciate the awesome chapters that you give us & the time & effort you put into writing it...but pl don't let it end soon, prolong as much as you can... I wish this could go on and on and on 😆

chap up!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/133271938

No PM's until I've updated DWE. Hopefully by Sunday.

Whew...all is well.
Paro is safe and tensions are running high.
Very nicely done.
👏

awesome...

Wow mindbogglingly awesome!!!!
The way you portrayed Rudra's feelings was tremendous... Parud has been the sexiest couple ever envisaged by a writer and your writing takes them a notch higher with every chapter . It was so beautiful the way Paro said Major Saab subconsciously 👏...the way Rudra pacified her by his shaant shaant was aahhmazing...

Very nice update. I was afraid Naksh might save Paro instead of Rudra , but sooo happy that didn't happen. I like Naksh a lot but want Rudra to be hero always.

very nice update. Poor Rudra. To be between heaven and hell

She remembered her majer sab but not for long
Naksh didn't understand how much paro ment for rudra!!! She is his life
Great update
Thnx zara

Amazing update