SS - ESCAPE PLAN (Part-6 posted on pg 16) - Page 6

Oh man pree 👏

Love the story👏

Thanks for the PM. That promo still gives me goosebumps. It was so intense. Makes me wonder how it would have been if that was part of the story. Thanks for making it come alive with your words.
Sincerely hoping this would turn into an SS if not a FF.

Amazing story you are writing. Please continue.

Originally posted by: aditi97

Oh man pree 👏

U are rocking

Ohh that scene, I mean first promo was soo intriguing and you got that out soo well !!

Uff Rudra's voice "BHAAG JITNA BHAAG SAKTI HAI, TU JAHA JAYEGI SARHAD KI TARAH TERE PEECHE AAUNGA"

That arrogance in his voice ahh !! FAB

And Paro's silent strength wahhh!!!

You got those memories back ❤️

Hey Aditi 🤗

Thanks buddy.. 😃
Yes this promo was so intense and Rudra's attitude, arrogance, intensity was..
Happy to know you like it.. thanks for your lovely comment.

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Originally posted by: Lily30

Love the story👏

You are a brilliant writer👏

Please pm me whenever you update😃

Eager to read more😃

😃 Thankyou so much dear..
Yes sure will pm you.. as I will update the next part today😊
and I have accepted your buddy request.

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Originally posted by: -Suganthi-

Thanks for the PM. That promo still gives me goosebumps. It was so intense. Makes me wonder how it would have been if that was part of the story. Thanks for making it come alive with your words.
Sincerely hoping this would turn into an SS if not a FF.

😊Thankyou Rithu..
Yes this promo still gives goosebumps.. it was awesome ⭐️ and Don't know why the makers didn't
use this promo scene in the show .
Happy to know you liked this part.
I guess I should make it SS.. As this OS is already extended till 3rd part😛

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Originally posted by: rati123

Amazing story you are writing. Please continue.

Thankyou dear 😊

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Hello everyone,

Firstly.. Thank you so much for liking the previous part and for sharing your thoughts on
it 😊 ,it was heart warming 🤗 . It just gave me a confidence as being a beginner.. Here I am posting the next part and I am not sure how many parts an OS can have?!😆

So I am turning this story into SS.. and hope you like this part!

PART - 3

Paro felt something sharp, pointed prick her cheek so she moved her head forward away from it and heard throbbing heart beat under her ear, felt strong muscular arms holding her tight, carrying her.. holding her close to his body while walking fast in sand. Gaining little conscious she tried opening her eyes but she couldn't.. than she heard his voice "Hold on" as he made her sit on seat, pulled a belt across her, in a hurry sitting on driver's seat.. reversed his jeep in speed, taking a sharp turn, he drove fast from there.

When he reached Hospital doctors immediately took Paro under observation, doing her checkup..

In few mins. Aman too came running.. asked in worry "Kuch ho to nahi gaya Parvati ko?!" (Has something happened to Parvati?!) seeing Rudra give him a angry look.. so Aman amended the sentence "Mera matlab hai.. bhagwan na kare kuch ho Parvati ko!" (I meant.. with God's grace, hope nothing will happen to her!).

In a while doctor came out to them informing.. it seems to be she is in state of shock and have high fever, also due to heat and dehydration she fainted. Hearing this Rudra felt little guilty to have pushed her to a limit where she got sick.. maybe he shouldn't have been so hard on her! But she is also the stubborn one..who don't listen!

Rudra instructed the doctor to do their best telling "Iska zinda rehna bahot zaruri hai.."(It's important that she stays alive). Doctor seeing so much concern and worry from Major and the officer for this young lady.. nodded assuring them. Rudra told Aman to look after her security in hospital and he left from there.

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In BSD office..

Rudra sitting in his cabin, listening to two officers who were giving report of any suspicious developments in Birpur or in nearby villages. Told him Tejawat haweli was totally vacant now and till now there was no trace of him or his men in Birpur or nearby any village. BSD soldiers were now on search mission to find Tejawat and his men.

One of the officer told Rudra that they got hold of one suspicious man, who was caught near Tejawat haweli. The man said he was a vegetable seller come every day to sell vegetables in haweli and since two days he found no one near haweli..so he thought to go inside and check!. But from his behavior they thought something was suspicious as he got so scared seeing BSD officers that when they tried to talk to him.. he ran away. So we have arrested him for questioning.

In hospital..

Paro in sleep again witnessing nightmare.. That she is running in desert..in scorching heat.. Trying to run away from a MAN HOLDING A GUN.. she couldn't see his face but only his silhouette as he was blocking the sun..

She just ran..

Ran in fear.. away from him..

On the other hand..Rudra entered interrogation room.. the suspicious man was handcuffed sitting on the chair in middle of the room with 100w bulb hanging over his head. Seeing Rudra walk towards him..he shivered in fear with eyes wide. Rudra stood infront of him with hands on his waist.. asked the main question without wasting the time "WHERE IS TEJAWAT??"... The man gulped hearing Rudra fierce voice and stammered.. "Hh..how would I know?? I.. am just a vegetable seller".

Paro in her dream.. Runing in desert.. shouting...calling in fear..MAASA..BAPUSAA..

(The man with a gun was following her..)

Rudra clenching his teeth said "I am not asking who you are..? Just tell me where is Tejawat and his men?.." The mam shook his head rigorously in denial "I don't know.."

"Theek hai fir.." (Ok than..) Rudra turned his back at him and from his eyes signaled the officer on door.

Paro ran to reach her home.. the safest place for her.. to her parents.. she doesn't turn back to see who this man was holding the gun, chasing her.. but she felt some unknown fear griping her..

The man hands were now tied above his head from a rope hanging from hook on the wall and his feet were also tied with the rope. Rudra took out his gun from its holder and while putting the bullets in it said " Ye aakhri mauka hai tere pass.. Yaa to baata de, Tujhe jo pata hai Tejawat ke bare mei?.. Ya fir..." (You have this last chance..either you tell, whatever you know about Tejawat?..or..) He twisted his wrist and the gun got closed with the sound of click. And Rudra looked straight in eyes of the man.

Paro in her dream.. Saw her house in some distance.. feeling relief and happiness that in mins. she will be home.. She ran as fast as she can towards her house..

Man moving his head in denial.. "Sahab mujhe kuch nahi pata... bhagwan ki kasam.." (Sir, I don't know anything.. I swear on God!)

Paro then saw her Maasa, Bapusaa standing infront of the house at the door and tears of happiness came in her eyes.. she couldn't believe she was seeing them infront of her.. smiling at her.

Rudra raised his hand holding a gun and pointed to the man's head.. clenching his teeth in anger he asked again "Tejawat kaha hai?" Now the man was shivering , sweating with fear

"Aa..aap.. mujhe maar nahi sakte..!" (You can't kill me!)

Paro forgetting that she was running from the Man holding gun.. she forgot all her fears seeing her parents and wiping her tears she ran to them.. wanting to touch them, hold them in her arms as soon as possible.. from childhood she craved for love of her Maasa and Bapusa.. Craved to be held in their arms, feel their love and care.. and now seeing them so close to her.. she could almost feel the love and warmth of them.

Rudra stared at the man with fierce eyes..intimidating him to speak if he want to live.. but when the man didn't.. Rudra dropped his gun and the man took a breath he was holding..thinking he was saved..

Than..next second..

Rudra pressed the trigger..

Paro heard the loud sound of SHOT.. and her eyes widened in SHOCK.. her parents fell infront of her eyes..

"Naaahiii...!" (Nooo...!) shouting.. with sudden jerk Paro woke up from her sleep...she sat on bed.

Shivering , sweating, and out of breath... her eyes were wet with tears.. mentally telling herself.. "It was just a dream.. bad dream..". Wiping the sweat from her forehead she looked around in confusion,..she was in hospital bed, tubes on her hand and arm.. The next second.. Nurse came running inside the room, telling her to relax and rest. She did as asked as she was feeling dizzy.. closing her eyes talking Bhoolenath's name while holding Rudraksh bracelet on her wrist.

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Half an hour later..

Nurse was doing Paro's checkup asked her if she was feeling fine?.. Paro sitting on bed..nodded at her in agreement..

She was contemplating all the things happened in past three days.. these are one of the worst three days of her life.. Paro was interrupted by Nurse as she asked

"Where is your Husband??"

Paro's eyes widened hearing her question and she felt as if something heavy is thrown on her chest that she couldn't breathe and that air didn't reach her lungs, she felt loss of voice.

Nurse continued to say "Apni Dulhan ko assi haalat mei kaun choodta hai??" (Who leave his wife in such a condition??)

Shaking her head Nurse looked closely at Paro's forehead and said

"Aur kaun Maang bharta hai Khoon se.. iss tarah??!" (And who fill the Maang with Blood?)

Paro frowned at the last question and raised her hand to touch her forehead but nothing came on her fingers.. seeing doubtful expression of Paro, Nurse took out hand mirror from the side drawer and handed to Paro.

The first thing Paro saw was deep red color filled in her Maang like a sindoor.. little more was smudged on her forehead.. and it was BLOOD!!

She touched her forehead again and again to see if she was hurt anywhere..! thinking hard to remember from where and how she got her Maang filled with blood. Then suddenly incident of day before yesterday flashed infront of her eyes.. When she had HIT him on face.. and tried to escape.. she has struggled to get free from his hold.. his face had brushed on her forehead..maybe than accidently smudging blood on her head!!

[Unknown to them.. Destiny was playing its game.. Uski Maang se.. Jisne Sindoor mitaya tha, Ussi ne Sindoor se bhi zaada laal rang bhardia.. apne Rakht se..]

[The person who had wiped the sindoor from her Maang, Is the same person who has filled her Maang with the deepest color of red.. with his Blood]

Not hearing a single word from her mouth.. nurse tilted her head looking carefully at Paro.. "Kya tum bol nahi sakti? Gungi ho?" (You can't speak? Is it? ) Paro keeping the mirror aside looked at her but before she could say anything.. she heard HIS voice from nurse's behind..

"Ye bol bhi sakti hai.. aur Bhaag bhi sakti hai.." (She can talk also and she can Run also..) saying this he entered the room.. nurse turned towards him and Rudra warned her "So be alert!!"

"Major!!"... "She is weak..she can't run..!"

Rudra staring at Paro said "You don't know her.." Paro just gave his a cold stare.

Rudra left to see the doctor and in the mean while Aman entered the room and asked Parvati politely how she was feeling?' seeing the genuine concern on his face.. Paro smiled a little and replied that she was feeling better.

Aman hesitated at first than took a step forward and kept the packet he brought near her hand than stepped back. Hesitatingly said "It get cold at night..", "So.. this shawl is for you.." and turned to leave but stopped seeing Rudra standing at the door..questioning him with raising his eyebrow and tilting his head slightly. Aman just nodded saying "I am leaving" and he left.

Rudra saw from the door.. how Paro's eyes showed little spark holding the packet and he don't know why but he felt little relief seeing her getting normal. Rudra frowningly thought he could have scolded Aman for showing care for her, who was just their witness and nothing more! But he didn't..

He had let Aman find peace in taking care of her...who carries the same name like Aman's expired sister 'PARVATI'.

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Paro was now looking like mess.. wearing same dress for quite a few days, hair messed up, skin looking tan from heat and dirt..

Rudra brought her in his BSD tent and showed her door of wash room telling her to go have a bath and clean herself. But when she said.. she has no clothes to change into.. Rudra went to his cupboard and pulled one of his kurta and pajama and handed it over to her.

"I wouldn't wear this.."

Rudra getting frustrated said "You certainly can't expect a Ghagra from my closet..?"

Looking at her from his drooping eyes.. continued to say.. "I don't care whether you want to wear this or not.." , "But if you have some problem with my clothes..than GO wrap bed sheet around you.." Signaling from his head towards the bed "As it doesn't matter to me.."

Her mouth opened with eyes wide..to what he just said..!! But he just passed from there annoyed that she always refuses to what he says.

Half an hour later when she came out of wash room..

Rudra thought to take a short nap after changing into his white kurta pajama, while she went in for bath. With the sound of door opening he woke up.. slowly he took his arm off his eyes and with half opened eyes saw her standing near the wash room door wearing his black pajama and blue kurta.. This instantly woke him completely.. he straighten up from the bed and looked at her in full attention.. But then he was stunned at what he saw.. she was looking clean, fresh and beautiful like a morning flower.. her soft face had a childlike innocence, her wet hair loosely hanging till her waist.. Rudra forgot to blink his eyes while looking at her.

He then noticed the kurta was over size for her as its shoulders were drooping, arms of kurta were too long for her, even pajama ends were long that they were coming on her feet.. Rudra thought "it will hinder her walking!"

And the next moment she started to walk but tripped on the pajama end but before she could fall.. he rushed to her side.. one hand holding her arm and other around her waist... he saved her from falling.. Paro's hands griped his biceps for support.. she looked up at him in surprise and they stared into each other's eyes.. Standing , holding each other almost like in embrace.

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Thanks for reading.. 😉

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Loved part 3 👏
Rudra saved Paro and brought her to hospital, eager for the next part.
Thank you for the pm 😃