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KhushiParo

@KhushiParo

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#241

What surprise/suspense you got in your mind Rithu.😊 From few updates Parud happy, whole family happy and surroundings happy with Aman's marriage but looks like slowly you are bringing the storm in the form of Pizza😲. Should I be worried next time when I order Pizza?😆

Hmmm... Shatabdi has some guts showed gun to Rudra 😲😲 Wow! I'm too surprised like Paro how come Rudra handled the situation with calm😉 Anyway even if she agreed that time we know Rudra will never agreed to that😳

Beautiful song selection but lil surprised it was used on Aman and the bride ... not your fault it's mine... still holding onto the past so thought for a sec it was on Parud and Rudra might giving one more surprise as I'm used to his surprises recently😃

Now Rudra need to think ... The pizza to the wedding place?, the odd delivery guy looks lil tensed isn't it? and lastly if it was a gift as he said he is not supposed to take money... well enough reasons for me to wait for your next update😳...

Take care

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firsttimehere

@firsttimehere

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#242

Hi Rithu .. it was a feel good chapter ( except the pizza part though - am somehow getting negative vibes about that )

Am surprised , Rudra would have met ladies previously for sake of matrimony ( ofcourse , he was no the party who was interested though) .. but still with his temper issues , that quite a big surprise 😊 No wonder Paro is surprised 😊

Paro wonders what else could Shatabdi be looking for in a husband .. probably she has not yet realized that she (Paro) has managed a great feat in getting a beautiful place in majorsaab's dil 😊 Rudra as a husband material is not everyone's cup of tea for sure .. Rudra needs a Paro and vice versa 😃

I love how you have brought out the friendship Aman and Rudra share .. Loved Rudra helping Aman in romantic matters 😊

I am saying it again .. your version of Rudra is very very adorable and charming 😉

And he uses his BSD brain too .. 😛

Coming to the Pizza part , are you paving way for trouble into PaRud's life ? My guess is probably a Shantanu like character who sent that pizza to harm someone .. am I in anyway close ? 😛

Looking forward to the Pizza story in next part and some more romance too😊

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_ResHma_

@_ResHma_

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#243

Rithu again commenting on three chapters at a time

Chapter 6 :

It seems Mala's secret will be revealed to the family first. Of all people Samrat stumbling on him in the saree shop. Is he smart enough to guess that Danveer is hiding something. Mala is living in an illusion. She wants to hold on to both Rudra and Thakur, when she knows they can't stand each other.

Rudra is going with the flow. Though not very fond of rituals and functions, he is enjoying because his wife is enjoying. Stealing romantic moments in between is always so cute.

Chapter 7:

Dedicated entirely to Rudra expressing his love through gifts, through actions and through words too. Loved the unique way in which Rudra gave paro the gifts. And then helping her dress up too romantic. While paro is still naive, Rudra is very eager. Yet he is taking it slow. You wrote Paro kissed him softly. Where on cheeks or on lips? Did they kiss before? Rudra's reaction was a little mild for me.

Just one thing, is this trip a honeymoon or are they for Aman's marriage?

Chapter 8:

As I said earlier Rudra is taking it slow and enjoying his wife having fun, though in his case the defination of fun is different. The paragraph you wrote about Rudra remenscing his training days had be wondered. Rudra was of the angry type and reclusive. Him being friends with anyone and enjoying pranks is difficult to digest.

Liked how he did to Aman exactly what Geetanjali madam had did to him and Paro in Jaipur.

The pizza is definitely not a gift. As someone mentioned probably from Shantanu. But what is the plan to frighten Paro or harm her. Good Rudra is suspicious and should open the box before taking it inside.

Loved how you are elaborating the wedding sequences though of Aman. JJ just rushed through them in her FF.

Waiting for the next rithu.

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Mariia

@Mariia.R

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#244

Lovely chapter, such a warm atmosphere 😊

Parud together, Shrabdi's story - showed a gun to Rudra..

Don't understand the song lyrics, but it was lovely how Aman crooned to his wife to be - cute scene.

But the first thing that I targeted was that pizza...Dark clouds in the sky? 😕

Parud have been so happy and cozy together, unfortunate something unusual is happening(?).. but knowing Rudra's character, I am sure that he will investigate the matter thoroughly.

I hope that Shantanu doesn't appear in the picture...
Interesting to see how you continue this story!

Waiting!

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-Disenchanted-

@-Disenchanted-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: Cutemithra
My God.. Is this really Rudra.. Teasing shatabdi and Aman and Paro.. Planning romantic moments for Aman.. Did geetanjali mam spike his drink... It s nice to read this version of Rudra..

Regarding pizza delivery, I think it s the stalker's work.. In that case he needs more homework about Rudra.. Rudra's brain and eyes..

Rudra can be relaxed as long as he gets his way 😉 And Aman is a good friend so a little teasing a lot of helping is part of the job description.
Yes the stalker is trying to see how close he can get to Parud without getting caught. This is risky for him, but necessary.

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-Disenchanted-

@-Disenchanted-

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: KhushiParo
What surprise/suspense you got in your mind Rithu.😊From few updates Parud happy, whole family happy and surroundings happy with Aman's marriage but looks like slowly you are bringing the storm in the form of Pizza😲.Should I be worried next time when I order Pizza?😆
Hmmm... Shatabdi has some guts showed gun to Rudra😲😲Wow! I'm too surprised like Paro how come Rudra handled the situation with calm😉Anyway even if she agreed that time we know Rudra will never agreed to that😳
Beautiful song selection but lil surprised it was used on Aman and the bride ... not your fault it's mine... still holding onto the pastso thought for a sec it was on Parud and Rudra might giving one more surprise as I'm used to his surprises recently😃

Now Rudra need to think ... The pizza to the wedding place?, the odd delivery guy looks lil tensed isn't it? and lastly if it was a gift as he said he is not supposed to take money... well enough reasons for me to wait for your next update😳...

Take care
🤗

Thank you. Just because Parud are in their bubble of bliss doesn't mean all is fine doesn't it
Na, pizza should be fine as long as you order it from your regular guy 😊
Shatabdi's dad is a super shot with the gun, so not a big deal for her to use it as well. And Rudra had to behave in his senior's house with his senior's daughter 😉
I think I'm not the only one who needs reminding that its Aman's wedding, so he should get some romance too 😳
I got a little distracted while writing the next part, I'll try and finish by Saturday.
Take care,
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-Disenchanted-

@-Disenchanted-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: firsttimehere
Hi Rithu .. it was a feel good chapter ( except the pizza part though - am somehow getting negative vibes about that )
Am surprised , Rudra would have met ladies previously for sake of matrimony ( ofcourse , he was no the party who was interested though) .. but still with his temper issues , that quite a big surprise😊No wonder Paro is surprised😊

Paro wonders what else could Shatabdi be looking for in a husband .. probably she has not yet realized that she (Paro) has managed a great feat in getting a beautiful place in majorsaab's dil😊Rudra as a husband material is not everyone's cup of tea for sure .. Rudra needs a Paro and vice versa😃

I love how you have brought out the friendship Aman and Rudra share .. Loved Rudra helping Aman in romantic matters😊
I am saying it again .. your version of Rudra is very very adorable and charming😉

And he uses his BSD brain too ..😛

Coming to the Pizza part , are you paving way for trouble into PaRud's life ? My guess is probably a Shantanu like character who sent that pizza to harm someone .. am I in anyway close ?😛

Looking forward to the Pizza story in next part and some more romance too😊

Thank you. The next few chapters will have drama building up, though Parud will be away from it.
I don't think Rudra would have intended to meet any young women but it might have happened inadvertently. Like at social ocassions were they run into families of the people he works with. And with Geethanjali's help their parents would have tried to get close to him even if he kept a distance.
Paro doesn't realise that Rudra is not perfect when she looks at him through the eyes of a lover. They complement each other very well which is why his issues don't affect her. But that's not the same with everyone else.
Aman is a very good friend and Rudra's go-to guy. So when he needs a hand Rudra obliges.
I spent 60+ chapters to make him charming and less jallad like. I'm glad I managed.
Yes your guess is good. It's someone out to hurt Parud. But since I haven't decided how much of Shantanu to retain in my story, I won't say more.

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-Disenchanted-

@-Disenchanted-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: psagars

Rithu again
commenting on three chapters at a time

Chapter 6 :

It seems Mala's
secret will be revealed to the family first. Of all people Samrat
stumbling on him in the saree shop. Is he smart enough to guess that
Danveer is hiding something. Mala is living in an illusion. She
wants to hold on to both Rudra and Thakur, when she knows they can't
stand each other.

Rudra is going with
the flow. Though not very fond of rituals and functions, he is
enjoying because his wife is enjoying. Stealing romantic moments in
between is always so cute.

Chapter 7:

Dedicated entirely
to Rudra expressing his love through gifts, through actions and
through words too. Loved the unique way in which Rudra gave paro the
gifts. And then helping her dress up too romantic. While paro is
still naive, Rudra is very eager. Yet he is taking it slow. You wrote
Paro kissed him softly. Where on cheeks or on lips? Did they kiss
before? Rudra's reaction was a little mild for me.

Just one thing, is
this trip a honeymoon or are they for Aman's marriage?

Chapter 8:

As I said earlier
Rudra is taking it slow and enjoying his wife having fun, though in
his case the defination of fun is different. The paragraph you wrote
about Rudra remenscing his training days had be wondered. Rudra was
of the angry type and reclusive. Him being friends with anyone and
enjoying pranks is difficult to digest.

Liked how he did to
Aman exactly what Geetanjali madam had did to him and Paro in Jaipur.

The pizza is
definitely not a gift. As someone mentioned probably from Shantanu.
But what is the plan to frighten Paro or harm her. Good Rudra is
suspicious and should open the box before taking it inside.

Loved how you are
elaborating the wedding sequences though of Aman. JJ just rushed
through them in her FF.

Waiting for the next
rithu.

Hi Reshma,
Yes, Mala will be outed by the family before Parud find out. Samrat is the not smartest Ranavat but he might just suprise you. Yes, she is still stuck in her dream world where she wants both her son and husband. She might be able to get both if she actually handles things better. It's not strange for a man to get along with his step father especially when he is trying to reform himself.
Rudra will be fine as ling as he is not dragged into the wedding. He prefers to stay on the sidelines unless required otherwise.

Thank you, I'm trying my best to keep things as unique as possible given that we have such a exceptional couple. Paro is warming up slowly and steadily and Rudra wants to hurry the pace but without pushing her. The first time she kissed Rudra was in the first FF the day before they got married on the cheek. Since they have been married, Rudra has been stealing kisses wherever he wants whenever he wants. Whether she kissed him on the cheeks or lips this time is your guess.
They are here for Aman's wedding and will leave go the honeymoon after this.

I had thought that he was a bit of a recluse until the birthday episode where his friends called at midnight to wish him. That would mean he had a close bunch of friends at some point in his life. Since his adolescence was painful for him, my guess is they are his fellow trainees. That's why BSD is important to him because the people who worked with him took the place of his family.
You're right this time Aman needed the push.
Rudra's mind is too sharp for such amateurish tricks but it never hurts too be careful.
Thank you, sometimes I think I'm going too slow with this wedding track which should have been done two chapters ago. I can't help it my fingers seem to have a mind of its own when I type. I just want Parud to have the moments they missed in their own wedding which was very rushed when Rudra just took Paro directly to the mantap (Check the last chapter of After the storm for details).

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-Disenchanted-

@-Disenchanted-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: Fimiramak

Lovely chapter, such a warm atmosphere 😊


Parud together, Shrabdi's story - showed a gun to Rudra..


Don't understand the song lyrics, but it was lovely how Aman crooned to his
wife to be - cute scene.


But the first thing that I targeted was that pizza...Dark
clouds in the sky? 😕


Parud have been so happy and cozy together,
unfortunate something unusual is happening(?).. but knowing Rudra's
character, I am sure that he will investigate the matter thoroughly. 


I hope that Shantanu doesn't appear in the picture...

Interesting to see how you continue this story!


Waiting!


🤗

Thank you.
It's a beautiful song with wonderful meaning and since it's from the bride's favorite movie, it fits beautifully.
It's too early to worry about the stalker. Rudra won't let him affect Paro's happiness.
More on the stalker as the story progresses.
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