A Parud OS - The Lioness - Page 3

Originally posted by: multimediaa

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">I can't describe my feeling in words now</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">Words are failing me</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">Could there be a better end to RRians nightmare</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">Now I have something to imagine and feel happy about</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">Till today I haven't seen that scene properly</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">I just skip the episode after Rudra talks to Paro over Phone</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">I have made myself accept that</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">Paro and Rudra lived happliy everafter with Dhruv</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">And in future they might have had another child too</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">This may sound weird</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">But that's how I consoled myself</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">But still some times When I see the scene accidentally or by mistake</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">It hurts like hell</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">But today finally I had a relief</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">I can't thank u more</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">Such a well written OS</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">I hope no RRians misses this</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">True lioness Paro</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">And Paro is sure Capable of this</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">Rudra's Paro and Dhruv's mother can stand for herself</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">I loved how u brought that sword inside the story</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">No I am not going to say Kash if it was like this</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">I know there is no use crying over spiltmilk</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">So I going to hold this story in my heart and</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">Live with it</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">Thank u so much.</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">I don't know how to thank u more</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">U made me emotional today</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">This is the first story of urs that I have read</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#ff6666">And I am deeply touched and floored</font>

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It was a nightmare for all of us wasn't it, wonder why the CVs put us through it.
Parud are living somewhere happily expecting their first child. That's the picture in my head going by the CVs timeline. It's not weird at all, I started writing my own story after I came to know that Paro was going to be killed. I know how you feel.
The Paro who escaped from Tejawat by throwing chilli powder can definitely escape from Shantanu.
The sword was a nice touch in the beginning, so brought it back.
I'm happy you were touched by what I wrote.
Do read my other FF sometime. It's long but has enough Parud to keep your interest.

Originally posted by: prabha.abha

So gud u choose words so perfectly, I liked the way u described

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: Angellic_doll

That was superb... Wish cvs have done this

Me too. A sword, a danda even a kitchen knife could have been used to save the day.

Originally posted by: thakurpreeti

Hii Rithu,
Happy to see ur os again, its amazing beyond the word, seriously can't explain in words, this episode was really heart breaking episode n lots of pain n sadness for all RRians, everyone wanted that anyhow Paro was alive n u do it in ur OS with lovely way, paro killed shantanu to protect her baby, love it sooo much ''

Thanks dear. Everyone who loved RR and Parud would have expected a better end for their story. Paro's death was too much to take. It hurts that the CVs were so cruel and for no reason.

Originally posted by: kulfi89

How i wish dis was wat had happened in our RR... U r amazing... Thank u for dis wonderful OS... Really cant express my feelings in words after reading dis...

Me too, Paro could have been saved. If only the channel had stayed away from creative decisions.
Thank you.

Originally posted by: neet2407

This is wonderful Rithu and beautifully written and I would much rather have watched this than what we actually had to watch!

Thank you neet. I couldn't stomach what they offered either.

Originally posted by: firsttimehere

Hi Rithu

I am happy you wrote this OS again after your FF. Frankly speaking , I read the first 2 lines and understood it was related to THAT episode and was scared to read ahead - actually really really scared. I did not have the courage to read anything related to that dreadful episode and accidentally the paeg got scrolled down and i could see the ending lines . And I was so so relived seeing those and then I got the courage to go and read the entire story😊

Thank you for giving this alternate ending for the story.😊

I don't blame you Vani. My fingers were shaking as I tried to remember bits and pieces of that episode when I was writing this OS. But next time please remember that I love Parud just as much as you and will not hurt them and keep reading from the top.
Thank you.

Originally posted by: Cutemithra

Nice OS rithu... How much I wish this has happened the show.. I still dread thinking about that particular episode.. You have given a goodalternate ending..

That was the darkest episode shown in RR. I'm glad you enjoyed my ending.

Originally posted by: JJKKL

<font color="#000099" size="2">Hi Rithu,

We both think alike.😛 On Monday I called Paro a lioness and on Tuesday you made her act like a lioness. 👏

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• <font color="#000099" size="2">I am sure the real Paro , the original Paro would have done anything to get out of that situation unhurt. </font>
• <font color="#000099" size="2">Paro who did not hesitate to hit Rudra inspite of having an unknown bond with him. </font>
• <font color="#000099" size="2">Paro who stood up for those she loves and trusts - like Maithili
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• <font color="#000099" size="2">Paro who never hesitates to go against the evil - like Tejawat</font>
• <font color="#000099" size="2">She will never succumb to Shantanu. She would never have succumbed to the evil. </font>
• <font color="#000099" size="2">What the CVs showed us was a weak clone of Paro.</font>

<font color="#000099" size="2">Apt ending for that episode.

I am happy you got bored and decided to write this OS. Hope you feel bored in future too 😆

PS: While flipping channels yesterday I saw the actor who played Shantanu. In Zee TV.. Not sure which serial. From the BG music (the same one used for him in RR) I assume he was again a villain. And then today I read your OS !!
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I should give you credit actually for planting this seed in my mind. After reading your latest update, I kept thinking of how Paro was like a lioness and that a lioness always fights for her cubs. That's how nature works. This story evolved from that thought process.
Completely agree with the things you have pointed out. Our Danda bhaisa wouldn't have cowered so easily to anyone. If she can stand up to Rudra and Tejawat, she would have fought Shantanu too. The CVs just wanted her gone, so that their new and improved partner for Rudra can be brought in.
Boredom usually stays miles away from me. Usually something or the other keep my mind occupied even if I have nothing to do. Like your story yesterday.
Must be the new show he is working on. There was some buzz about it a couple of months back.

Originally posted by: nik1310

Thanks for the PM...

Jai Maa Durga...absolutely great idea to bring the sword back into the story...and very true the woman who could not see a chooha being killed...slayed the Rakshas...loved this OS

Thank you. I wanted the sword back in the story at some point or the other. The woman couldn't stand a chooha being killed but used a danda to knock out Rudra and Tejawat 😉 . Our heroine always rises to the occasion.