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Posted: 10 years ago

#341

Very interesting chapter. Loved the story growth.Very excited for next part. Thanks for the PM.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#342

Originally posted by: deepsel
What a soul-stirring update Zara..The words "If papa is happy, I am happy" tore my heart with pain for that little kid...What a mix of emotions you are playing with...absolutely fantastic👏..Thanks

So you have shown a way how Myra is going to be independent if it indeed happens.. Kudos to you darling for keeping all the characterization intact from Sumer, Shatabti to Koel too..Hope Dhruv is really safe and Rudra finds him soon before he reaches Paro or will he?! 😉 ..You'll have to wait and see

Did you cleverly maintain that Rudra is celibate !!??? even after marrying Myra for almost a year..Well how cruel we PARUD lovers are😆😆.. I honestly feel Rudra would have consummated his marriage so fast.

You have nicely stopped the update with surprise twist now..intensified my eager to read the next one fast..so update sooner 😛 Will try.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#343

Originally posted by: Mamue
Rudra a celibate after being married to Myrah for a year,,,,,hmmm,,,,,,,kuch samajh nahin aaya.
Zara,you say that Rudra of RR wouldn't go physical that easily with Myrah & needing time is in line with his original character. That would have been the case if he hadn't kissed Myrah lustily when he confessed his love to her. The way he kissed her then, there is no way he can remain celibate for a year. I find it illogical .THAT original Paro's Rudra already got intimate, physical with Myrah when he kissed her passionatly in RR . For me, the essence of his original characterization finished there. I feel that the impact would have been better had they had sex life but NOTHING as compared to what he had or felt with Paro & for him to realise that though he thinks he loved Myrah but it wasn't half as close to as it was with Paro.
You said you wld be updating the next chapter soon. When will that SOON be,my dear. I am waiting.

In my opinion Rudra wouldn't have consummated his marriage so fast. Yes he would be physically intimate with her, but not for sex yet. Because Paro is still in his systems. As I have said before I'm rectifying what the CV's tarnished on screen making rudra fall for Myrah like that on screen, so is it bad for me to take a small 'illogical' turn to make things right!? Your telling me the CV's didn't do anything hugely illogical throughout the whole of RR...like i don't know...having a EXACT look a like of Paro who happens to fall for Rudra too?!😆 Having an exact look-a-like of Paro in the world, who isn't related to Paro herself, is totally logical but Rudra staying celibate for an extra year (After staying celibate for 8 years!!) to get over his first wife is totally illogical!?

Anyways if you do feel this small clause of mine of Myrah and Rudra being intimate, but not having sex yet, is bugging you, I'm very sorry. Maybe this story isn't the one for you.😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#344

Originally posted by: Mamue

You can not take a honest feedback or constructive criticism; I was only stating my opinion , my feelings ; There was no need to be so rude ; & then fans blame Miss Dhond for being high handed ; if this much honest constructive feedback can offend you then the kind of feedback the CVs got, for that I must say they stayed EXTREMELY cool ; Did I say I am going to quit reading this FF or that it isn't for me ? But thanks for telling me that this isn't for me ; I don't know about the ff but the writer certainly isn't FOR me.

I am sorry that you felt I was being rude when it was totally not my intention to be. You were simply stated your opinion which I totally respect, but I also said my opinion too with further reasoning why in my opinion my idea isn't, as you say, illogical.

Regarding the comment I made about this story not being the one for you. I genuinely meant it as I know I am not the only and best writer on the forum and I also know that there are many other fab writers who are also writing stories of what they feel would/should have happened post Myrah and Rudra's marriage. Though I haven't read any of them yet ( still on my to-do list) but I'm sure at least one of them will have your preferred idea of Myrah and Rudra consummating their marriage, therefore those stories would be better for you than mine. I didn't mean it in a bad way. Apologies again if you felt so.

Words across the internet can come across differently to different people so misinterpretation can happen. I have had many readers over the last 3-4years for my stories and so I know how to take on criticism (which your comment wasn't. It was simply your view/opinion) so I always come across other readers idea and suggestion and can handle them. My friends and readers from wayyy back know this too. But if you still feel I was rude, though I honestly wasn't trying to be, then sorry to say maybe you're right, I'm not the writer for you. And I can only be humbly sorry about it sis.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#345

Originally posted by: Mamue

I am sorry too Zara for misunderstanding your comment. And I am not flattering you when I say though there are other ff regarding how the story should have been after pato's death but this ff of yours remains the best as far as I go. I love, love the way it's turning out & I look forward to yr updates . Now pl pl update soon. I have bcum addictive to it now.
Once again sorry.

No probs. 😊

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...pinky...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#346

This FF is absolutely fantastic! A part of me is worried on how it will end...You ARE a Rudra-Paro fan, right? You won't be putting Paro with NK? I don't know if I could handle it!!

If you are putting Rudra and Paro back together, than the fact he has been celibate with Myra will (hopefully) make their separation easier. They simply don't have the same kind of love as PaRud. Myrah herself admitted it!

Anyways, can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks for the PM. Sorry for responding so late! :)

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Navya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#347

Zara...ACTUALLY YOU are right...the Rudra of original RR, I mean major saab of Paro's wouldn't have slept with Myrah that easily...I was going more by ( when I said that the marriage should have been consummated by now ) what they showed or rather tried to convey in the show when he kissed Myrah in a very lusty way ( I cringe even at the thought of it ) but then that part can be overlooked...because that was highly uncalled for...come to think of it, it's great that through this ff you will be undoing the damage done to his character by the CVs...Please update soon.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#348

Originally posted by: ...pinky...
This FF is absolutely fantastic! A part of me is worried on how it will end...You ARE a Rudra-Paro fan, right? You won't be putting Paro with NK? I don't know if I could handle it!!

If you are putting Rudra and Paro back together, than the fact he has been celibate with Myra will (hopefully) make their separation easier. They simply don't have the same kind of love as PaRud. Myrah herself admitted it!

Anyways, can't wait to see what happens next! Thanks for the PM. Sorry for responding so late! :)

Yes I am a huge Parud fan. If that doesn't give everyone the hint of how this ff will end then I don't know what else will sis😆😉