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Posted: 10 years ago
So finally paro and myra face to face. But i know that myra has a large heart and that she would let parud be together
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sarita_barun

Awesome update.
Oh my gosh, Myrah saw Parvati. 😲
Knowing Myrah, she'll selflessly move away from Rudra and Dhruv's lives... that makes me sad though Paro will get her rightful place back.


@bold this is quite true, however I honestly feel she'd fight for her own spot too if the circumstances were so. Because I was thinking what would Myrah have done if she was in Paro's position for the whole Laila fiasco. She wouldn't have moved aside like Paro did. She would have ripped Laila's hair out and kicked her out herself. Myrah is much more impulsive and says whats on her mind. And I can definitely imagine Myrah more easily made jealous than Paro. Not in a bad way. A good way. They aren't the same. You'll see this in the coming chapters.

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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update
Though eager for Parud reunion ,feeling sorry for Myrah( she was a grace in Rudra s life during Paro s absence)
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Posted: 10 years ago
You seriously cannot stop being so amazing now can you?

This chapter had every intense element I could possibly think of...and it's only CHAPTER FOUR!? What do you have in store for the rest of the FF? Your works are going to be the death of me! Haha.


Okay, so back to the update. The conversation between Dhruv and Rudra was so cute. Dhruv's reasoning actually wasn't half bad for a kid. I mean if I was in his position and I heard what kaki-sa said, I would be conflicted too. I'm glad Rudra explained that no matter what happens he will always love him. He explains how he will always love Paro too and that Dhruv reminded him so much of Paro. I got a little teary-eyed, I'm not going to lie. What broke the dam of tears was that he remembered "Main. Tu. Hamesha." I remembered the episode and I felt the pain. He had promised forever, and he didn't get it. At least this time, when he promises 'hamesha' to his son, he will be able to keep it. I love Rudra's emotional struggle through this first part.



Naksh and Paro are so adorable. I can just tell that they are going to be best friends, like NK and Khushi. He's offering to help her, without asking for anything in return. I wonder if he will ask her for something later. They don't know that she's married so maybe he will ask for her hand in marriage later. Who knows? I'm just speculating. It was so Paro-like when she wanted to help out at the orphanage. She didn't want to stay there without pulling her weight. I figured she would love children. I think she can sense that she was a mother, but hasn't said anything yet. I think her being around children will bring out her maternal instincts, which she had briefly showered on Dhruv. A mother's instincts will never fade...according to all the mothers I've spoken to.


Even after so long, Rudra could sense Paro. He didn't know she was there, but the fact that he can sense her is still a big deal. He had been moving on, but Paro's memories are resurfacing more than he would like. Oh the irony! We know why but the poor chap doesn't! The Myrah scene where she chased the butterfly reminded me so much of Paro. But I know she's not! I actually felt bad for her when she realized why Rudra didn't go shopping with her. As much as she doesn't want to admit it, Myrah knows she will never be able to take Paro's place...and I feel some negativity in that aspect...like she's jealous.


The Myrah-Parvati confrontation...you outdid yourself. I really thought you were going to make Rudra or Dhruv see Paro first, but NO! You made Myrah see her first! Oh man, I am sitting at the edge of my seat! What is going to happen now? I feel that this is where Myrah will develop some shades of gray. *prepares large stick* If she realizes that Paro is still alive, she may try to keep her away from Rudra because she doesn't want to lose him. But I think deep down she knows that Rudra's happiness...his true happiness...lies with Paro. I don't think she'll be able to stand that. Oh god forget Rudra...how is Dhruv going to handle this?!


Okay, I can't wait for your next update! Take your time, because I know you're busy, but I seriously cannot wait! *screams excitedly*


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DevdasiSingh

You seriously cannot stop being so amazing now can you?

This chapter had every intense element I could possibly think of...and it's only CHAPTER FOUR!? What do you have in store for the rest of the FF? Your works are going to be the death of me! Haha.This ff will be a rollarcoster. Trust😆


Okay, so back to the update. The conversation between Dhruv and Rudra was so cute. Dhruv's reasoning actually wasn't half bad for a kid. I mean if I was in his position and I heard what kaki-sa said, I would be conflicted too. I'm glad Rudra explained that no matter what happens he will always love him. He explains how he will always love Paro too and that Dhruv reminded him so much of Paro. I got a little teary-eyed, I'm not going to lie. What broke the dam of tears was that he remembered "Main. Tu. Hamesha." I remembered the episode and I felt the pain. He had promised forever, and he didn't get it. At least this time, when he promises 'hamesha' to his son, he will be able to keep it. I love Rudra's emotional struggle through this first part. Yep. A child's thoughts are very hard to contain especially with such a complicated past. Glad you're liking it.



Naksh and Paro are so adorable. I can just tell that they are going to be best friends, like NK and Khushi. He's offering to help her, without asking for anything in return. I wonder if he will ask her for something later. They don't know that she's married so maybe he will ask for her hand in marriage later. Who knows? I'm just speculating. Maybe...Maybe not.😆

It was so Paro-like when she wanted to help out at the orphanage. She didn't want to stay there without pulling her weight. I figured she would love children. I think she can sense that she was a mother, but hasn't said anything yet. I think her being around children will bring out her maternal instincts, which she had briefly showered on Dhruv. A mother's instincts will never fade...according to all the mothers I've spoken to. Yep yep. You're absolutely right. Motherly instincts kicking in without realizing.


Even after so long, Rudra could sense Paro. He didn't know she was there, but the fact that he can sense her is still a big deal. He had been moving on, but Paro's memories are resurfacing more than he would like. Oh the irony! We know why but the poor chap doesn't! LOL i know right. 😉

The Myrah scene where she chased the butterfly reminded me so much of Paro. But I know she's not! I actually felt bad for her when she realized why Rudra didn't go shopping with her. As much as she doesn't want to admit it, Myrah knows she will never be able to take Paro's place...and I feel some negativity in that aspect...like she's jealous.Who wouldn't be jealous. It's natural, but you'll have to see what Myrah will do after knowing of Paro a little more.


The Myrah-Parvati confrontation...you outdid yourself. I really thought you were going to make Rudra or Dhruv see Paro first, but NO! You made Myrah see her first! Yeaaah!😆

Oh man, I am sitting at the edge of my seat! What is going to happen now? I feel that this is where Myrah will develop some shades of gray. *prepares large stick* If she realizes that Paro is still alive, she may try to keep her away from Rudra because she doesn't want to lose him. But I think deep down she knows that Rudra's happiness...his true happiness...lies with Paro. I don't think she'll be able to stand that. Oh god forget Rudra...how is Dhruv going to handle this?! You'll have to see. Myrah is not going to be evil in my ff at all. She's going to simply be myrah. But yes it'll be natural feeling to feel scared that Rudra will leave her. Because If myrah was in Paro's postition during the laila fiasco Myrah wouldn't have stepped aside like Paro, she would have ripped Laila's hair out. So you'll have to wait and watch.


Okay, I can't wait for your next update! Take your time, because I know you're busy, but I seriously cannot wait! *screams excitedly*
I swear I could write just to read your brilliant comments. I love replying to them. Thank you.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg rudras remembering his past! And loved the mirror part.

So now that Myra knows the balls in her court. Wonder how she's going to deal with it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Zara I have been waiting for your update for sooo long, hehe...seems ages... It's beautiful, like its being played in front of me...oh Why oh Why did cvs not go this way ?
It feels great to read/know that Rudra loves Paro so much, that Paro will always be number one for him...that was the beauty, the essence of RR otherwise we have love stories dime a dozen...who cares? We watch them , like them , then forget & move on but how can we do that with RR ...NEVER...because this isn't a simple love story,it's the love story of soul mates & eternal love which , due to certain issues CVs couldnt do justice to ...but YOU & a few others are doing ...thank you .
I keep checking this thread for updates so you don't have to pm me because I know you are busy & have other things to attend to, too...just keep the story going
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Posted: 10 years ago
The mirror connection was superb. The entire chapter is superb.👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
this is d best part till date.Rudra druv conversation was very emotional.i pity myruh 4 being getting detached from druv.loved naksh myruh meeting n then paro myruh meeting was sperb.how will myruh react?very interesting
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry I don't read any other fiction or than arshi.plz dnt send me PM of story other than arshi. Thank u

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