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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: prabha.abha

its really super dear, nice choice of words u have chosen. i loved it


Thanks dear. Happy that you loved it.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: deepsel

<font size="2" color="#6600ff">Aww...I loved it Rithu...🤗</font>

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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">Even in original when Mala as soon as he saw Rudra said "Mera beta ..kitna bada hoyaga" I seriously wanted to punch her hard being myself a mother...Sorry for being so hard here but I disgusted that woman...Was that the first emotion that comes to your mind when you see your lost son after you betrayed him and left ...Shit they butchered that role Rithu..I am still fuming ...</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">Coming to your update, i loved how my Sumer stepped up for his cousin..I simple want to hug him now😆😆and the confrontation was bang on..short and crisp...</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">I know Teju mind is crooked and will plan something soon but adored him thinking for to his wife and loyal workers..A villain with moral😉😆</font>
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<font size="2" color="#6600ff">How cute of Rudra to think about Paro as soon as Teju was arrested..no wonder..his whole soul is filled with Paro now...Aww am so excited for next update..finally a happy moment..</font>



Thanks Deeps 🤗.
The mother in me wanted to punch her too. She kept in touch with Kakosa but didn't bother to try and contact her son. But that dialogue showed how delusional she is to think that her son will be waiting for her with open arms. It was true maybe for the first couple of years, then he grew up. That entire track got screwed up to please TRP audience who probably wanted Rudra to be the devoted son who cares about his mother after everything.
Go ahead and give my Sumer a hug. He deserves it in this story. I wanted to avoid melodrama in the confrontation, Mala doesn't deserve it. Maybe later when she meets Paro there can be tears. But no more tears from Rudra. She earned his cold indifference.
Teju's mind will plan something that will knock your socks off. But that can wait for Parud reunion. As you put it, his whole soul is filled with Paro now. Rudra needs to meet his Paro as soon as possible.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Anny14

<font color="#cc0000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">Beautiful chapter Rithu! 👏I loved as her mother led Rudra, more real than the show !! I feel really angry 😡as they reacted to the character and as Paro became an emotional blackmailer, please do not do that !!! thanks very much Anny14
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Thanks Anny. I found this track in the show to be unrealistic as well and was very upset. Paro won't be an emotional blackmailer here as she has seen how Rudra and Dilsher have been hurt and she has been hurt by Mala's actions herself.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nehageet

Awesome. rithu dear 👏


Thank you 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just because mala gave birth and looked after him for 8 years does not mean that Rudr will forgive all her mistakes. Especially the wrong they were doing with the nation. For Rudr country comes first and what thakur and his wife did wife did was against everything he believed in. Good that he took a stand and stood by it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update Rithu, just the way I want Rudra to behave.
I want to see this kind of Rudra who's focused more towards his duty without loosing his self control even when his worst past comes in front of him.
I know I told repeatedly but again I like the depth of the character you are giving to Sumer banna.
Hoping next chapter Parud filled😳 Missing them dear.

Take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update. The sentence I liked most
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He was glad that he wasn't raised by a man who was ready to make money betraying the country and flouting its laws. He was a Ranavat and Ranavat men always put the country first."

Am glad Mala was also arrested. Waiting for the next update.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb Update Rithu 😊 Loved the way you handled mala-Rudra - tejawat story 😊
I am also happy because I as of now dont see mala coming in Ranavat haveli in future anytime .. I was worried if there would be more drama coming up and everyone reverting to their older selves (Mohini ,Sumer and even Rudra ) .. but am glad that isnt happening now 😊

Waiting for the PaRud moments next chapter 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: custodian75

Just because mala gave birth and looked after him for 8 years does not mean that Rudr will forgive all her mistakes. Especially the wrong they were doing with the nation. For Rudr country comes first and what thakur and his wife did wife did was against everything he believed in. Good that he took a stand and stood by it.


Completely agree with you. As he told Dilsher and Danveer during the wedding track his life is what the BSD has given him. He will put his job first and not a mother who abandoned him years back.
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Originally posted by: KhushiParo

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Awesome update Rithu, just the way I want Rudra to behave.</font>

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I want to see this kind of Rudra who's focused more towards his duty without loosing his self control even when his worst past comes in front of him.</font>
<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I know I told repeatedly but again I like the depth of the character you are giving to Sumer banna.</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Hoping next chapter Parud filled😳Missing them dear.</font>

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Thanks dear.
I wanted Rudra to show control when it came to his estranged mother and not fall apart too. Mala should realise that there is concept called Karma which always makes sure you face the consequences of your past actions.
I just wanted Sumer to have something else to do than be Mohini's minion. No idea how he evolved so much. Glad you like this version though.
Next chapter will have Parud and something I promised a friend will happen.
Take care 🤗

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