A Parud FF: After the storm ( Final chapter posted) - Page 15

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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update Rithu- love that Mohini is much more understanding in this story and that Samrat and Maithali are adopting - also glad Rudra found out about the kidnapping !
These are things I would have loved to have seen in the show do am very happy you are writing about it!
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice to see Rudr with happy thoughts.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Crazy410

Omg. Loved the new chapter. Rudra is ready to go down on his knees...yaaayyy!!!


Thank you. But you are getting a little ahead of the story. Rudra always knew of his attraction to Paro. His real challenge is accepting it gladly and acting on it 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KhushiParo

Loved it Rithu, very nice update.
Rudra came to know kidnapping of Maithili and how Paro helped to get her back.
I'm so glad You are covering lots of points CVs missed.
Dilsher asking about Paro as beendini and threatening Rudra is very nice.
Dilsher - Paro shared beautiful bond.
So sweet Rudra remembering how he spent the evening with Paro and already missing her.
Even Samrat - Maithili equation you are handling differently, showing Samrat independent and
decides for his own family.
Thanks for PM.


Thanks Sushmitha. The CVs stopped paying attention to details after March didn't they?
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love the bond that Dilsher shared with Paro too. She restored his faith in khoobsurat women.
Rudra missing Paro is not new, his eyes always searched for her as soon as he returned from work. But he is a lot sweeter here.
Samrat standing up for his wife was something I wanted ever since the adoption issue was raised for the first time. This is long overdue from him.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: firsttimehere

Nice update Rithu😊Loved how Dilsher referred her as Parvati beendani😊and for sure your Rudra is much more in control , sensible and more of a gentleman than being a jallad or janwar . ILike this version of Rudra too😊


Thanks Vani. My Rudra is an officer and a gentleman 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: neet2407

Lovely update Rithu- love that Mohini is much more understanding in this story and that Samrat and Maithali are adopting - also glad Rudra found out about the kidnapping !
These are things I would have loved to have seen in the show do am very happy you are writing about it!
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!


Thank you neet. Mohini can be more understanding as long as everyone listen to her, we have seen that in RR 2.0. I have been waiting for the adoption track for the longest time so added here.
Rudra had to be told about the kidnapping, it was related to Paro. I'm still disappointed that we didn't see a tandav when he found out on the show.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update rithu
So nice to see u cover all loopholes
Rudra got to know about the kidnapping scene
Samrat more of a man here
Loving this ff
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SPraba

Lovely update rithu
So nice to see u cover all loopholes
Rudra got to know about the kidnapping scene
Samrat more of a man here
Loving this ff
Thanks for the pm


Thanks Prabha. I'm rewatching the wedding episodes currently. So its affecting my fanfic a lot as I keep adding in the things I wanted to see on the show 😳 .
Samrat had to man up soon as there is kid involved now. He has to be more responsible.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update Rithu..


Glad to see you picked all the missed scenarios in original RR..connecting all the dots very nicely..But I loved the ending with to-be Rudra on Knees😉..I am just waiting for their realization of love (imagine me jumping like a 4 yr old with lollipop in hand..saying please please pretty please😆😆)

Happy to see sensible Samrat and witty Sumer at the start of the episode itself for a change..
BTW I realized you did a long update this time..Good job 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi sweetie
Fantastic chapter.
You have really nuanced each character very thoughfully in ur ff.
Paid attention to the smallest details.

Ruders anger and possessive nature get the better of him just as one would expect!

Here, you connected Paros love of small mirrors as clothing embellishment and brought it into play.

You have shown Paros respect for rishtey, family by having the photo.

You also portray really well her ability to understand people, their likes and tastes.
She knows just what sunehri would love to receive as a gift.

Thank you for keeping rr and paro alive

Thank you for writing bravely on when many people have given up on the show.
Bravo 👏

Samina

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