When Arnav Bhaiya Met Moonchiya PART 4 UPDATED PG 32| May 12

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cineraria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: henamani
This had me in stitches. But arnav was definitely more sexy

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-Saumya-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Reserve for now.

Will get back to it soon. 😆

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DDC1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Cineraria Baisa,
You just made my Friday. Love your brand of humor. Much appreciated in this day when OS are hard to come by in this forum. To have both hunks in 1 OS & at each other's throats- what an idea Madam sa. I cant wait for both the Paglis to meet then I pretty sure R & R will join forces to combat the madness.

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cineraria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: DDC1
Cineraria Baisa,
You just made my Friday. Love your brand of humor. Much appreciated in this day when OS are hard to come by in this forum. To have both hunks in 1 OS & at each other's throats- what an idea Madam sa. I cant wait for both the Paglis to meet then I pretty sure R & R will join forces to combat the madness.

DDC1 baisa, I am glad that I could entertain you with this little endeavor. Paglis will meet soon, and the hunks too, in the next update, and both Lord Shiva and Devi Maiyya would cheer! 😃

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Sonam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

You have killed it... really killed it Baisa...
I am rolling on the floor laughing... Love your sense of humor...

the moustache part was so hilarious... And now we even know his raaz about his sunsilk hair...🤣

And the Shiv_Parvati track just cracked me... 🤣 Where do you get these ideas baisa... your are superb

Waiting gor Arni and Rudy's meeting...
As i am from Germany i would love to see Germany win the world cup but after reading your Masterwork i will definately present the World Cup to you!

Love you!

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MissAsian

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Omg i love how funny this is
plz continue with part 3

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BerryBlush07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Wow ! This is just fantastic!

The whole concept is brilliant!

And even more fabulously written !

It was hilarious ! Read it all in one go..

I am not much of an online fiction reader.. But this just caught me !

Well done.. Ur writing is par with excellence .

Waiting eagerly for the next part 😳

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Mischief-Managed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: cineraria

Oh Tangy thanks... I was actually really scared about this. I had no idea how would I meet the expectations, and even if this post doesn't I promise the Ru-nav meeting would be dhamakedaar. 😃

Will edit it comment on this later. 😆

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cineraria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: kidrauhlforever
Res..
Yayy I'm first 😆
First of all this was hilarious the way rudra is irritated with arnav 🤣 I was seriously ROFLing when Rudra asked Laila "thaaray ko maari daari chubti hai?" 🤣 and she replied "kya farkh parta hai" 🤣

Paro also drooling over ASR 😲 🤣 hayye Allah the dog ate khushi's picture 🤣 loved the update 😆

PS: One thing I would say please make paro's language a bit easy Hindi. 😊 she doesn't speak so much of the other language 😊 though I understand you haven't watched Rangrasiya much 😊 loved the update 😳 👏

Hey kid, thanks for the lovely comment.

About the language, as I said I was flaunting my linguistics 😆 . Well actually I wrote it this way to put a distinction between Paro and Khushi, if Paro starts speaking Hindi how'd I differentiate between the two and I really don't understand the Khichdi lingo they use in most shows based in Rajasthan. I mean it's such a mess of the two languages... but I'll try, by the way I do give the English translation in brackets but anyway, if it's still a problem let me know. 😃

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cineraria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: SONAM.M
You have killed it... really killed it Baisa...
I am rolling on the floor laughing... Love your sense of humor...

the moustache part was so hilarious... And now we even know his raaz about his sunsilk hair...🤣

And the Shiv_Parvati track just cracked me... 🤣 Where do you get these ideas baisa... your are superb

Waiting gor Arni and Rudy's meeting...
As i am from Germany i would love to see Germany win the world cup but after reading your Masterwork i will definately present the World Cup to you!

Love you!

First, Gosh dude, I am totally supporting Germany. Klose is my favorite footballer ever. 👍🏼

And I am overwhelmed by the Cup presented to me😳!

Thank you so much dear!