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-Zesty-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: henamani
paro ne jallad ko insaan banaya aur ab ...

Originally posted by: -Swetz-
Very nice

Originally posted by: rangprab
Ooh i love this take better... I got a glimpse and this Jallad is gonna keep me wanting to read a lot...

Thanks for commenting, dears :)

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lmathew77

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Paro needs to be scared straight by the Jallad. I can't wait to read the next part!! Between the awesome episodes on tv and brilliant writers like you, I'm having a a hard time concentrating and focusing on things I should be doing!!!! Update soon!

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-Zesty-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: lmathew77
Paro needs to be scared straight by the Jallad. I can't wait to read the next part!! Between the awesome episodes on tv and brilliant writers like you, I'm having a a hard time concentrating and focusing on things I should be doing!!!! Update soon!

thank you s much for the beautiful words, dear :)

Thanks that you consider me as a writer😆 .. I just love to imagine my fav couple and then type it down...bas...nothing else

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sphobic

@sphobic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Shivi!!! I love!! I really love you!!!!

This is the best...Yes! We are seeing Mr.Hegde's version of Othello...but I would love to read your version...

The nightmare was written so beautifully...

So now as the Jalllad has returned...lets see to which extent the jalladness of this Jallad go😉

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zunaiba5

@zunaiba5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Thnx 4 pm
I think he is going to hunt her down :)

Pls post the next part soon

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Aisha

@Aisha1996

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Awesome part 👏

Eagerly waiting to read next part ⭐️

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shutter

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Wow!! That was pretty intense... Paro leaves behind a letter while going away and the Major is hell bent on getting her back... Would love to see your version of their separation in the next part... Update soon!!!!!