Smitar's OS 2: The Missing Mat (25/5/2014)

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Anita

@neet2407

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Wonderful story - loved Rudra's threat to burn all the mats! Supercute!

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LadyLucifer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Loved it... Brilliant os.😊

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Sona

@sparikh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

That was so cute; him throwing the mat...at the end, ran away to office to avoid her questions. :)

-Sona

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binimoti

@binimoti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Sweetest OS I have ever read, it was cute, funny in some places, beautiful I loved it.

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henamani

@henamani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

wow wow and wow. the passion simmering bw them is so palpable

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DDC1

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Aww so cute, the way you describe his zidd.

Can you make this a two shot with night 2 on the bed?

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Tvbug2011

@tvbug2011

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

And yet again I'm late, Smita!! What a lovely story this is - the kind that needs to be savoured over and over. And love the original naughty thought - getting rid of that darned mat! 😃 And of course you got those two key questions in - why didn't Rudra get it when Paro asked him that she really was angling to feel like a proper wife - with mangalsutra and not just a simple thread, and physically too. That was Rudra's cue to consummate - but what to say of this Kadai-headed major!! And so instead of laying her - every doubt to rest, very pleasurably, he was left with an aching head and a muddled mind as he tried to explain his way to her satisfaction!😉

Going back to read it bit by delicious bit. 😊

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smitar

@smitar

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: tvbug2011
And yet again I'm late, Smita!! What a lovely story this is - the kind that needs to be savoured over and over. And love the original naughty thought - getting rid of that darned mat! 😃 And of course you got those two key questions in - why didn't Rudra get it when Paro asked him that she really was angling to feel like a proper wife - with mangalsutra and not just a simple thread, and physically too. That was Rudra's cue to consummate - but what to say of this Kadai-headed major!! And so instead of laying her - every doubt to rest, very pleasurably, he was left with an aching head and a muddled mind as he tried to explain his way to her satisfaction!😉
Going back to read it bit by delicious bit. 😊

Aap ka darshan ho gaya! 😆Hum dhanya he! 😆Where had you vanished off to, my dear?

I didn't like the night scene after Laila left. No pathos. No dealing with issues. It is as though both of them forgot that Laila ever existed after the first few lines. Iss Amnesia Ko Kya Naam Doon?😆