PaRud OS: Mere Sang [Mother's Day Special] *OS of the Week!* - Page 2

nice os...

simply beautiful.loved so many parts of it.When paro said his mother has done mistake by leaving him n now he is only his.I cud sense her possessiveness n love. 👏 loved this dailogue too" Jo bol ek Ma ne apne dukh mein andha ho ke bole, woh bol uss bol se zyada kemti nahi hai jo ek Ma ne poore hosh aur garv mein bole ho."suppperb.very much applicable to our life.

😕How did I miss this???

Oh wow! That was just amazing! Such emotions and the way paro helped through it without him saying anything! You are an awesome writer. So beautiful!

Very beautiful, emotional and soulful os.

Hi

Loved the angle.
Mother issues.

U reflected all his angt, pain hurt and anger.
His guilt re the death of collegue,

U drew us a beautiful picture of how paro is so sensitive to all his unspoken emotions.
How she knows JUST wat the matter us and EXACTLY how to help.

Then u gave rudra sum much needed affection, respect, validation and meaningful interaction with other mens mothers.

This gave him sum desperately needed closure.
Heal a few wounds.

An astounding piece of work
Iv loved it

Thank u

Samina

Very beautiful one shot dear.

wonderful one shot.