OS: Hell Hath No Fury (Note-Page 4)

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Deepthi

@Beauceant

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Big thanks to everyone who liked it and did not consider me a psycho along with Laila.. If someone does think that then i'll say the CVs started it.. They made her a psycho..😆

@shruathi- Its a good thing it's fiction right?

@SingaporeFan- Rudra had to be redeemed right,as the rest is from Laila's POV.

@Snoowfall- Now that u point it out, it is right.. May be subconsciously.. Laila is a character that the Cvs have been unjust to. And i just dont understand her lashing out against Paro.. If she has to be angry with someone its Rudra.. If they are making her a psycho at least make her a proper psycho..

@Gogu- It had to be Laila's retaliation, so she cant faint off na..😆

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Deepthi

@Beauceant

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: SherryGS
This is the most interesting thing I have read on Laila! I was totally taken in. It was such a great take on the Laila created by the CV's and the Laila that most people want to see. The pain behind the woman. Yes, she created her own circumstances and her own inevitable pain. I do think she deserved an explanation from Rudra and a better "break up" than what was shown on the show. Your OS really does justice to the character that we are watching. This was a really good piece of fiction! 👏

Thanks a lot.. I felt like a psycho myself writing it.. The twisted reasoning and the lack of restraint..

She sure deserves an explanation from him.. He has never bothered to have a proper conversation with her, leave alone giving her some closure.

And it really put me off, seeing a character like her indulging in kitchen politics like kaki.. Mixing mirchi and burning sabzi.. If a character like her does something it had to be huge..

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

You did bring out the most important aspect.. That whatever is between or was between Laila and Rudra...must be resolved by Laila and Rudra... Paro should not get involved.

I liked the way you portrayed Laila's insane jealousy and relentless desire to have Rudra for herself..

I also liked the way Rudra decides that he will no longer turn to carnal pleasures and liquor to drown his miseries, he will face his demons head on... This is the change that Paro and his feelings for her,have brought in him..the need to cleanse himself of negativity so he can live in peace with his Paro..i hope this does happen in the show as well..

I am a little shocked by Laila's drastic resort in the end...and hope this will not happen on the show 😃

Interesting read Deepthi...keep writing!

Love

Maya

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

You know what if I take parud and my own affinity to them out of this equation, and IF Laila's previous attempts at Paro's life were not there i would cheer her on if she did this!!

cz he is the one who according to her betrayed her, not that innocent child Paro! that is where the Laila in the show loses all sympathy as she goes after the one who has never wronged her!

amazing story!! well written di!

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Anita

@neet2407

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Awesome Deeps! Lovely dark and twisted and if we didn't love Parud so much - who hasn't in very dark moments has these thoughts when you find out you have been used!!!

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ICanDoThis

@ICanDoThis

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

An astonishing story.
Really different as reflected and explored lailas
Perspective and character

Very Unexpected ending
😲

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DN2012

@DN2012

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

That was very very intensehell hath no fury like a woman scorned.

That is the personification of Laila.

This seems to be the apt attitude of Laila.

I remember writing on donebody'a post about, if I cannot have him, nobody can.it is true.8 years of mindless sex will not work the same way for Laila.

People change, feelings change

Good job, excellent writing.you have captured the essence of Laila very well.I really really feel sorry for her.

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Nicely written. A peek into Laila's thoughts!

So I see D is obsessed with/feelz for laila darling! Koi toh hai jise laila ki fikar hai!

For me Ankita as Laila has spoilt character for me. So I dont feel even pity for her! sorry

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

and the end!!

Nahiii..

Tune Rudra ko fangirls ke liye bhi nahi chhoda?? 😭

Laila, beware- Hell hath no fury like WOMEN scorned!!

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JJKKL

@JJKKL

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Am sure RR will never let this kind of a scene play out. Thank God for that. Don't we want our ParuD to have the consummation night ? 😉😉😉

But in real and reel world this is what happens when it is a story of intense passion and revenge. Don't we see people shooting, killing their spouses in a fit of rage ? Sometimes just because they doubt them and not because of facts.

Very well written

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