OS: Poisoned Apple - Page 3

Originally posted by: shutter

That was awesome!!!!! A very well-written tale...

Indeed this would have happened in the show if the makers had not decided to let Rudra eat that poisoned laddoo...

The care and concern from Rudra was so evident, even if he tried to mask it under nonchalance... Like the last para, wherein we have Paro's thoughts!!!!

👏

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

Perfectly written
Loved it

Originally posted by: goguma

enjoyed reading it very much ...

want to see rudra taking care of paro, as her husband...

Originally posted by: sarita_barun

This was lovely.
😊

Originally posted by: prabha.abha

So gud dear

Originally posted by: sirivalli.t

Beautiful os dear...!!!!

loved it...!!!!

very well written 👍🏼

Originally posted by: pakpearl

OMG..

Abeer...

Tum mera kitna kehna manti ho😊

At last..

Parud OS 😃

It was really so sweet..

Major Sahib cares..

But can't show..

Sanaya..oops..Paro flashing her 1000 watt smile..

Awww..

I m full fida over her smile 😛

I hope u'll write more on Parud..

Though Arhi r still our addiction !!!

Originally posted by: custodian75

Very nice. Well written.