After the dance os(18 +)rudr the lover. part 5 updted

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Rudr reaction after paros dance. Please ignore spelling mistakes.
Part 1 : mystical dance

Paro was very happy after the morning encounter she was so close to rudr when stitching his button. The way he was looking at her lovingingly .she blushed as she thought about the encounter. After break fast rudr came to the room to pick up his bike keys he saw laila spying him , even in morning when paro was sewing she suddenly barged in to the room.he instantly knew that she was lying about thakur and she was up to something.
Laila came from behind and put arms around rudr and was telling him that she can not live without him and she knew he has no relation with paro . She is dying to be with him and want old relation back. " maare ko mat tadpa rudr mai vada karti hoon paro ko kuch pata nahI chalega hamare bare mein. Mujhe pata hai tu bhi tadap raha hai" . He jerked her arm and pushed her. " mai sirf paro se pyar karta hoon patni hai wo meri. Meri sukh dukh ki saathi. Usne muje janwar se insaan banaya. Koi uski jagah nahi le sakta" he screamed at her to get out.

Paro heard him and came running asked him " kya hua major saab kuch chahiye aapko" " surf teri wajah se mai us aurat ko bardaasht kar raha hoon" paro lovingly said him to be calm and this time she said him shant major saab shaant. Rudr smiled at her words and sudenly came close to her before she can react gave a small peck on her cheeks Paro was shocked her eyes wide open. Rudr gave a smile and said bye to paro. Paro was very happy all day.

She loved rudr and admitted openly now it was rudrs turn to show his love. He definitely was more passionate lover.

Every one noticed paros happiness all day . All were happy. sunehri and maithli teased her she dint mind that. In night sunehri started dancing on song and she forced paro in to it . Paro saw rudr and danced in happiness. Laila also joined her rudr was angry to see her but he dint care as soon As he saw paros face , Full of life and happiness . He was mesmerised seeing her.

That night when paro came in to room he was waiting for her.
as soon as she entered room was empty she heard door lock , she turned and saw him standing infront very close to her.her heart started beating very fast. She could hear her own heart beats." Baher Badi hasi aarahi thi thuje kya baat hai" you were laughing very mych. Why? he said .paro was afraid thinking that he dint like her dancing, then closed her eyes. Rudr gave his wicked smile. As he enjoyed teasing his innocent wife. Paro was speechless and lil scared of his anger.

She opened her eyes. He then to her astonishment pulled her closer to him, she was in his arm helplessly ." Tu bahut pyaaru lagrahi thi" he said. She was surprised at his words." Tu aise apni aanke gol mat kiya kar. Muje khud ko rokna mushkil hojayega". Dont let your eyes open wide."Mai kuch bahut bura kardunga tere saath" he said. "Aap mere saath kuch bura nahi kar sakte " she said confidently. Rudr liked it."agar kardon to " he teased her and slowly lifted her chin and then placed his lips on hers. Sucking her lower lip and then the other , he wanted to explore her tongue. His tounge tried to make a way in to her mouth.
Paro was embarrassed by this sudden move. She felt butterflies in her stomach. it felt so good . Her mind and her heart were playing game's . She partially opened her mouth to say something. Rudr took opportunitiy and explored her mouth with his tounge .he wanted to kiss her like this in jaipur, as soon as he saw her in that red saree. Slowly he moved his lips away from her looked her in to eyes. Paro blushed profusely and hid her face with her hands. Suddenly he got a call from aman .sir tejawat and his men are no where near . There is some important news can you please come to office he said. He looked lovingly at paro .his wife and now his life." Mujhe bsd ke daftar jana hai abhi" he said while remoging paros hand from her face .he gave a small peck on her cheeks and said her to be prepared." Taiyyar rehna" he said mischievously and left room.

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Part 3 page 3

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4019713&TPN=3

Part 5 : page 4

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4019713&TPN=4


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Posted: 11 years ago
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wish like dis really happens. awesome. this os was excellent.
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aaw!it was so sweet.loved the way rudra talked about paro.
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Expecting a scene like this
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Part 2 : Love blooming

Rudr left for bsd office . Paro who loved him madly was deep in his thoughts. She slept on the chair waiting for him. Rudr had a busy night he was unable to return home . Even in morning it looked like his work was not going to finish . He called bapusa and informed him that he is not going yo come home till evening and to inform that to her. He finished and cut his call as he knew bapusa will definitely pull his leg .


Bapusa came to paros room to inform her but he saw from window that she was sleeping on chair. He called out to her . She woke up suddenly and asked him if he needed anything. He inquired about sleeping on chair. " wo raat ko majorsaab duty per gaye unka intezaar karte kab neend lag gayi pata naji chala" she said. Wo thare pati ka phone aaya tha wo kaam mein vyast hai ghar nahi aasakta. Thare ko batane k liye kaha". He dialed rudrs no and handed phone to Paro and left . Ab kya hai ranawat said rudr. Majorsaab she said. He was surprised hearing her voice. It was such music to his ears. Are you alright he Inquired. She said yes and questioned him when are you returning home?. In evening paro he said. Ill be waiting for you she replied. She took phone to bapusa and thanked him. Rudr was still on line. Your are lucky man your wife slept on chair waiting for you... dilsher said. Rudr smiled and kept the phone. Bhawgwaan ne mare chore ko sahi beendni di he said

It felt so nice to hear voice he was waiting for him . He was happy like a child imagining paros face.he wanted to stop every thing and rush to his wife.

Sir wo jo ladki aapke ghar hai wo jhoot bol rahi hai said aman. There are no traces of thakur or his men. he knew that rudr replied she might me up to some thing he said.he told aman he will deal with her.

Lailas name brought him to reality. He definitely had a physical emotion less relation with her. She was part if his routine 8 long years . Paro was completely diffrent. Naive, innocent self less girl who turned him to hunan from stone. Who he loved deeply. Before making any move towards paro I must tell her about laila he thougt .There were many times he wanted to open his heart infornt of her. She always felt like friend he never had he wanted to share a pure and trust worthy relation with her , transparent one.before starting husband and wife relation. His paro his life ...


Give me some ideas how might paro react...
Edited by fiza005 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice.obviously paro would be shattered.show her fighting with herself n her major sab getting restless fearing she might leave her.Paro should initially ignore him.rudra can't tolerate n in drunken state will reveal his vulnerability.how he can't live without her or something like that.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you I ll definitely use your idea
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Cute OS, do continue dear :)
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Paro will be shattered to know the truth
but she cannot leave him can she?

she loved him as himself

accepted him with all his flaws

She might be angry upset

but never leave him.. may be their relationship can grow more strong emotionally while She can herself confront Laila
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MeenuArshiCrazy

Paro will be shattered to know the truth

but she cannot leave him can she?

she loved him as himself

accepted him with all his flaws

She might be angry upset

but never leave him.. may be their relationship can grow more strong emotionally while She can herself confront Laila





Giving her charcter I don't think she can confront laila but definately she will have sympathy towards her.

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