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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3: the dark night


By the time rudr returned home it night every body slept. he saw some one sitting in the dark . The first thought that came to his mind was paro . He soon touched her lovingly from behind his arms around her waist . He felt her gripping his hands more closer. Just then he saw paro coming it was layla who he was holding paro saw that and was shocked. He jerked layla and called paro and went running behind her. Laila thought she had shot the bullet and will definitely hit without noise.

Inside room rudr was looking at paro he tried to talk to her but she stopped him saying " aapko mare ko kuch batane ki zaroorat na hai . Mujhe aap per khud se zada bharosa hai . App moo haath dhoo kar kapde badal lijiye"
There is no need for any explanation i trust you more than my self. You go and fresh up she ordered. As rudr was in washroom paro went to kitchen to bring food. She saw laila" bura mat manna parvati wo rudr ne mareko ...hamara rishta.
The thing you saw... I mean my relation with rudr... Paro intrepted but said firmly that " baisa wo mare pati hai aur mai unki patni. Unki zindagi mein maari jagah koi nahi le sakta. Unper poora vishwas hai mareko" lady he is my husbsnd snd iam his wife and nobody can take my place in his life and i trust him completely . She took food and left.

As soon as rudr was out he saw paro with food in her hands. She was quiet it killed him . Aap khana kha lijiye major saab she said tune kha liya ( you please have your dinner he asked if she had it )she nodded no. Rudr made her sit and fed her with his hands. Looking at her with love. After they finished paro got up to go in kitchen suddenly light went of . She clinged to rudrs chest . He wrapped her in her arms. They both went in to kitchen and kept the dishes and he lit the lamp. With a hand in her waist they went back to bedroom. In faint light laila saw that and was in fumes. Rudr closed the door and came near paro. He decided to talk to her later. As he was working day and night he got a day off next day. Slowly paro drifted of to sleep holding his hand. He slowly put his arms around her and wrapped her like a cocoon and slept.

Next morning paro woke up and saw him so close to her , his lips almost buried in her neck .she slowly turned and saw him he was definitely very handsome and manly. He just belonged to her she thought. Any one can fall in love with such a handsome face she thought.

At dining table paro was seving food to rudr accidently poured water on rudr. They had a eye lock. Dilsher intrepted saying " rudrdev ab bahut baqat hogaya mre ko waris kab doge.( its high time when are you going to give md grandkids)Parvati was too embarrassed and walked away. Rudr grinned.

That night every one went to see movie . Rudr was not going so paro stayed back. Even layla wanted to stay but maithli cleverly took her away.

In the room rudr was waiting for a paro. He caught hold of her and said in deep voice. Bapusa ki khaish poori ..."( what do you think about my dads wish) paro felt very shy. Rudr took hold of her hand pulled her closer. He wanted her to give time and as thought earlier he wanted to confess every thing to her.

He gently stroke her hair and said that the are things which he wanted to tell her. He said her about his relationship with layla . He also confessed that it was his past and she is his life now and he can not live without her. paro didn't say any thing all while just tears rolled down her eyes. Not even in her dreams she thought that her husband could have done this .she moved away from rudr . Rudr dint know how to react . He never had any emotions but paro was different.

She was shattered she thought rudr was a stone becoz of his past. This confession was like a lightning stuk her heart. She was a human afterall. Rudr tried to hold her she moved back and just with raising hands said him to go. Rudr was very upset he lay on bed trying to read paros mind but in vain. Other hand she just silently was sitting on floor lost in thought. The night was adark night for both of them. Hope the day would be shining and bright thought rudr.

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Edited by fiza005 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
well written..
As u said.. she might not confront Laila

but she is strong enough

just want to see Parud together
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow amazing update
loved reading it
beautofully written
yeh laila ki toh 😡
omg rudra confessed everything to paro
paro was distressed
ab kiya hoga
hope paro umderstnds ta situation n forgive rudra as it was his past
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG!!!! Poor Paro!!!!

waiting for the next update!!
well written!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Continuation

In morning paro was more quiey than usual jjija asked her many times but kept mum.rudr on other hand was restless. Her silence was killing him ftom deep inside. Why cant she undersrand that was my past
I said that I care only about you. Go to hell he thought.laila in other hand was quite happy that she won. She wanted to see that if her music hit right cord. She came to paro and said did rudr confess you about us. Not us it was just you paro said in low but firm voice. Rudr had a past and now ge us just mine. My husband rudr . I have all rights over him she saud in strong voice. Laika was shocked by that. Rudr on other hand while as passing by heard her voice and smiled.

So she truly became mrs rudr pratap ranawat he thought. Paro said layla so that you are perfectly fine now and we can find alternate accommodation for you in BSD . You can't stay here forever. Laila showed her anger and taunted paro saying that he might be your husband to world but I am truly his wife in bed. This made paro very upset she attacked like a wounded tigress a tight slap came across lailas face. You were with him for 8 years but you were unable to make him yours . pack your bags up she said.

Laila out of picture paros was at ease but still she was deeply saddened by thought that she was not first in rudrs life
Edited by fiza005 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice.Her firm answer to laila was supern.I liked it very much.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I liked the slap!!!

very nice update!!!!


keeep writing!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice tight slap... Jhapad.. very needed
well written yaar...

See, she is strong enough...

now way to go Srimati Parvathi Rudra Pratap Ranawat😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 4 : the timeless journey


Laila was out of ranawat haveli . Rudr was in his room at BSD hesd quaters. He was in deep thoughts about his beautiful wife. She always surprised him .

In the morning she came in to room without looking at his face how she commanded him to find alternate accommodation for layla immediately. She was woman of strong determination . Once she decided things it was impossible to chage her decision he thought. She was hurt and her behaviour didn't change. Their progressive relation was back yo square one he thought. It will take time but I am sure she will forget my past he said to himself.


Things were getting back to normal. It was hard for paro to forget his past but it was all before she came in to his life , he assured her that she means a lot to him. Paro wanted to start fresh eith him. Rudr dint even try to approach her after that. She cared for him as usual .even in night when they were sleeping he never tried to come closer to her. It was like neverending distance between them.

There was karvachaut festival comming up preparations were on swing in ranawat haveli. Rudr had little knowledge about it. He heatd about karvachaut but dint had a clue about that. He thought it might be some puja done by women. Night before karvachaut dilsher called paro and gifted her a beautiful saree and matching jewels to her ." Karvachaut per mara aur uski maa ka ashirwaad samajh kar pehenle."

Keep it as blessing from me and his mom he said. Maithli was astonished after seeing the saree and jewels. " bahut hi sundar hai aur ye gehne aise hai jaise kisi raj gharane ke . Bahut hi sundar dikhegi tu.. " its absolutely beautiful and jewellery looks like of some royal family , you will look beautiful in it said maithli.

Early in morning maithli was knocking the door to call paro . She opened the door and said that she is comming in 5 minutes. She freshened up and was about to leave rudr woke up and asked her where us she going. To have breakfast she said and left leaving rudr puzzled .

Maithli called her in kitchen and said that "hoon to main teri jija per jethani bhi hoon to is nate se ye le sargi" I am your sister but I sm your sister in law as well that's why have this sargI(food given by mother in law) .
Rudr was restless and he walked out of room looking for his paro. Her presence was peace for him.he walked to kitchen corridor . The yummy smell of foid hit his nose. Paro he called. She was standing with plate in her hands come and eat in room he demanded. Maithli jija asked her yo go.

She came back to the room with him sat fown and slowly started eating. Rudr was looking at her . She offered him he quickly took a bite from her hand. How can he miss the chance when she was feeding him. Both of them had the food. Rudr was not a foodie but something in him urged to have food with her.


In morning pato offered him tea and break fast but he declined saying he had enough with her . It was quiet busy at BSD office . Sing sir wanted things to be done quickly today. He dint even get a chance to drink water.


Back in haveli paro was getting ready for evening. In beautiful golden maroon net saree with delicate embroidery on border and with matching antique jewellery.she looked stunning. Sunehri forced her and applied a little make up. As soon as. She walked in the roof terrace where all ladies were present .all eyes set on her she looked absolutley divine.

Maitli walked to her" parvati baisa app to rajkumari lag rahe ho. Nazar na lage kisi ki"
She said as she applied kajal .

" Inko to to sirf rudr bhaisa ki nazar lagegi" Sunehri chirped . Baupsa admired his daughter in law's beauty. He thanked god for giving his son such a good wife.

Kakisa who was not so happy seeing paro was burning in anger. "PARVATI BEENDHNI itna sajh dhaj ke hai magar rudr banna ka koi ata pata bhi hai" she smirked evilly.

Back at BSD where rudr just finished his work and came out to give file to sing sir . He was completely exhausted . He was literally hungry , and thirsty. Sing sir was not in his cabin he called him . To hus surprise getanjali mam picked the phone . She asked him about hus wife and her fast . He dint understand and asked her about fast. She explained him about how wife break fast with husbands hand etc.. paro might be waiting for him . He quickly grabbed his keys and rushed home. He would fly if had wings...

Edited by fiza005 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb Story.👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I loved it.
I am looking forward to reading more.
Thanks.😃

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