the day she will not be virginal in thoughts n otherwise too

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Posted: 11 years ago
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She is as intelligent as her protective life made her

She is as adaptive as her orphaned childhood allowed her

She is as calm as she is required to mellow down her ever so boiling husband

She is as determined in her actions as he is determined in the ambers of his eyes

She is as devoted as her being the version of maa paravathi necessitates her to be

She is as much the perfection as are his imperfections

She is as much the purity of god as are his humanely sins

She is as much caring as her being the gentle of them all entails

She is more than the much when it comes to be adorable

She is more than the much when it comes to be loveable

She is infact the LOVE

YEAHHH SHE IS

THAT'S WHY MAYBE

SHE IS AS BRAINLESS AS LOVE CAN BE

SHE IS AS HEARTWARMING AS LOVE CAN BE

SHE IS AS SELFLESS AS LOVE CAN BE

SHE IS AS CONDITIONLESS AS LOVE CAN BE

ALSO

SHE IS AS VIRGINAL IN HER LOVE

AS HER UNTOUCHED THOUGHTS ALLOWS

SHE IS AS VIRGINAL IN HER THOUGHTS

AS HER UNCONSUMMATED BODY ALLOWS

OHHH

MY DARLING PARO

I DREAD THE RELATIES THT U AWAIT

I AM SACRED OF THE DAY WHEN U WILL CONSUMMATE

NOT WITH HIM ofcourse BUT WITH THT OTHER SIDE OF LIFE

Tht side which u remain so unaware of

Tht life which u yet remain so virgin of

AS U R """LOVE"""

ITS NOT SO DIFFICULT FOR U TO UNDERSTAND THE "" LOVE""

EVEN IF ITS OF THAT ANOTHER WOMAN FOR UR MAN

But

U IN UR VIRGIN NAIEVITIES DON'T UNDERSTAND THE

COMPLEXITIES OF LUST THT DESTROY LOVE

I dread the day when u will know the past sleeping habits of your stoney husband

I dread the day when u will know the not so virginal side of love

I dread the day when u will consummate with his black realities

I dread the day when u will became a non virgin in tht one moment

I dread the day when u will stand shattered by your own illusion

U will never be this virginal again anymore

It will take much more of HIS LOVE to bring her back

Not to his world but to her pure self too

It will take much more of HIS DEVOTION to create the PARO AGAIN

HE WILL HAVE TO CONSSUMMATE HER BACK TO BE THE LOVE AGAIN

HE WILL HAVE TO LOVE HER BACK TO BE THE PARO AGAIN

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Posted: 11 years ago
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mansi...lovely post ...i hope cv would give us heartrenching performance of sanaya irani
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This is beautiful! Thank you
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Very creative post, I must say. 👏 But I partly disagree... Hasn't she already been in touch with realities of the "real" world? She's seen the cruelties, the death, the destruction, the betrayal, the abandonment, the ridicule, the injustice, the helplessness... every step of the way so far. But has she crumbled, or hardened, or switched on a self-destructive mode? No, because like you said.. She is LOVE. The personification of it in its purest form. Rudra once suggested (more like forced her) to marry Sumer.. ugg.. if THAT didn't deter her from loving Rudra, do you really think finding out about his past is going to matter? Laila literally tried to kill her, but did she abandon her for that tonight? I don't understand this word "Virginal" that everyone keeps throwing around. She is very much introduced to the awefull truths of life, in every sense. "Virginal" also doesn't mean stupidity or complete naivete. Instead, I think she has "consummated" but still managed to remain untouched and pure. She holds more cards than anyone ever gives her credit for. Just my opinion though :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG! So Beautiful. Loved it.

I don't know how much of Paro's hurt or pain or broken heart we will get to see. As till now it was always about Rudra's pain, his past, his insecurities and his broken heart. And also I don't know how much Rudra will do to bring that Paro back (If we get to see Paro's breakdown, that is) as it was always Paro tending to Rudra.

The story slowly became more one sided, focusing more on his suffering. I totally understand Rudra has a bitter past than Paro. He went though hell lot in his childhood. But Paro had her fair share of troubles, problems, sorrows, losses, ups and downs too. They might seem to be small than Rudra's but they are definitely important.

I my ranting 😛. It is just that for a change I really want to see Paro break down and Rudra trying to mend her wounds. Don't get me wrong, I totally love watching Rudra's side of the story. But I want to see Paro's side too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: humeshaa

Very creative post, I must say. 👏 But I partly disagree... Hasn't she already been in touch with realities of the "real" world? She's seen the cruelties, the death, the destruction, the betrayal, the abandonment, the ridicule, the injustice, the helplessness... every step of the way so far. But has she crumbled, or hardened, or switched on a self-destructive mode? No, because like you said.. She is LOVE. The personification of it in its purest form. Rudra once suggested (more like forced her) to marry Sumer.. ugg.. if THAT didn't deter her from loving Rudra, do you really think finding out about his past is going to matter? Laila literally tried to kill her, but did she abandon her for that tonight? I don't understand this word "Virginal" that everyone keeps throwing around. She is very much introduced to the awefull truths of life, in every sense. "Virginal" also doesn't mean stupidity or complete naivete. Instead, I think she has "consummated" but still managed to remain untouched and pure. She holds more cards than anyone ever gives her credit for. Just my opinion though :)


I TOTALLY RESPECT YOUR OPINION N IT HOLDS QUITE A WEIGHT TOO,I AGREE SHE IS THT POSITIVE SIDE OF WHITE WHICH GREY WITHIN US OFTEN TEND TO DISRESPECT N NOT BELIEVE IN BUT U WILL HAVE TO AGREE WHATEVER SHE FACED ,,HE WAS STANDING THERE ON HIS SIDE AS A SHADOW,,EVEN WHEN HE FORCED HER TO MARRY GADHASA SHE HAD VERY EASILY POINTED OUT THE TRUTH BEHIND HIS LIES N THT TOO TO HIM ONLY
SHE KNEW IN THOSE MOMENTS TOO THT HER RAKSHAK WAS NOT BEING A BHAKSHAK

BUT SUCH IS THE TENDENCY OF LOVE SO PURE THAT IT BECOMES BLIND BEYOND ITS BENEFACTOR...she has never faced betrayal on his part,,,,she has never faced all the said cruelties by him ever,,IF SHE IS THE SHAKTI,,HE IS HER SHAKTI...
HER REASON OF BEING
HER JUSTIFICATION OF EVERY ACTION SUPREME
she is virgin NOT BCOZ SHE DOESNT KNOWS MANY A FACTS
SHE IS VIRGIN BCOZ SHE HOLDS HER BELIEF IN HIM UNSCATHED ,,,UNTOUCHED,,N AS PURE AS HER WORLD OF WHITE ALLOWS
it will be the first time his grey will be directly attacking her
it will be the first time she will face cruelty directly or indirectly sourced by him ,,,due to him..spally created by him
thats what will add grey to her virginal white
thats when paro will consummate with rudr's "black n dead" side

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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely post , its like poetry how u assembled the words , and i couldnt agree more , this is what going to happen once paro knows each and everything about rudra , but then things will be different , we'll find another paro , a more beautiful one , one who glows with the light of truth and love of rudra 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bioinfo

lovely post , its like poetry how u assembled the words , and i couldnt agree more , this is what going to happen once paro knows each and everything about rudra , but then things will be different , we'll find another paro , a more beautiful one , one who glows with the light of truth and love of rudra 😊


I soo want to imbibe ur positivity
n yeahhh u r quite right too,,
yes she will come out strong from this one too
but this time arnd she will need his love as the mast of her sinking ship of beliefs

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow mansi🤗 its a wonderful piece!!
i wonder if paro will ever know the relationship b/t laila n rudra.. if it were a real life, i wouldnt have wanted her to know busss ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg!! this is so sooo beautiful!! and utter perfection too!!

what beautiful lyrical thoughts u have penned down my friend... and what a lovely way of presenting the purity that is called Paro...
and how this story will pan out.. from a virgin in body mind and soul to an all knowing soul.. back to being happy.. pristine as she was meant to be...

loveee it!!! 🤗


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