PaRud TS::Ansh-A Thread holding them last part up PG11 [COMPLETED] - Page 2

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Deezi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome...rudradev as a single dad was too good...paro's not dead, right, gonna give us a twist, aren't you?

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SanzBarbie

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Posted: 11 years ago

Gosh u are such an amazing writer !!!
I just LOVED how Rudra is taking care of his son !!
But what happened to Paro :(
Pls update soon dear !!
And do write more <3

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Rishita.SIholic

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Posted: 11 years ago

Loved baby Ansh and his daddy Rudra :)

Waiting to know more about Paro... Please update soon!

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jisa

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Posted: 11 years ago

this wAS amazing..!!
w8ng for part two..!!

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sairam03

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Posted: 11 years ago

Good one. Waiting for part 2.

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deep0909

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Posted: 11 years ago

Are you an immature writer? I sure could not tell!

your story is fantastic! I really love the pace the intertwining and the clear representation! I enjoyed the story very much and look forward to Part 2

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javeria

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Posted: 11 years ago

Very interesting start

Rudra is a single parent stringing very hard to give his uttermost love and attention to his son in absence of his wife.

Where is Paravti? I think she is in coma or something else happened to her.

Flashback were very cute and sweet.

Junior Ranawat remember lullaby to well.

Poor Rudra, he is striving so hard to fight the pain of loneliness and betrayal.

Eagerly waiting for next update

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mayurisb80

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Posted: 11 years ago

That was absolutely brilliant...one can feel the angst...when reading ...

waiting to know what has happened ...why Paro is not with them ,why is he angry with all...so many questions ..

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Tannu

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks for the PM!

Love this, I can't express how much I love this! Brilliant writing, brilliant pace, brilliant characterisation, well done dear :)

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lourel24

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Posted: 11 years ago

interesting.parud has a son.What has happened that paro has left n rudra is angry with everyone?plz continue soon .Wana know the happy ending.

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