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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: SanayaIsBest

Nice one.
Quite touching...
Where is PAro?



Originally posted by: -Azy-

Very nice n interesting TS, pls update the next part soon :)



Originally posted by: DoJin

Awesome...rudradev as a single dad was too good...paro's not dead, right, gonna give us a twist, aren't you?




Originally posted by: SanzBarbie

Gosh u are such an amazing writer !!!
I just LOVED how Rudra is taking care of his son !!
But what happened to Paro :(
Pls update soon dear !!
And do write more <3




Originally posted by: -Sanayaholic-

Loved baby Ansh and his daddy Rudra :)

Waiting to know more about Paro... Please update soon!




Originally posted by: jisa

this wAS amazing..!!
w8ng for part two..!!








Originally posted by: sairam03

Good one. Waiting for part 2.





Thank you so much guys...will update soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: deep0909

Are you an immature writer? I sure could not tell!

your story is fantastic! I really love the pace the intertwining and the clear representation! I enjoyed the story very much and look forward to Part 2








Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Very interesting start

Rudra is a single parent stringing very hard to give his uttermost love and attention to his son in absence of his wife.
Where is Paravti? I think she is in coma or something else happened to her.
Flashback were very cute and sweet.
Junior Ranawat remember lullaby to well.
Poor Rudra, he is striving so hard to fight the pain of loneliness and betrayal.
Eagerly waiting for next update




Originally posted by: mayurisb80

That was absolutely brilliant...one can feel the angst...when reading ...

waiting to know what has happened ...why Paro is not with them ,why is he angry with all...so many questions ..





Originally posted by: Tannakstar

Thanks for the PM!

Love this, I can't express how much I love this! Brilliant writing, brilliant pace, brilliant characterisation, well done dear :)




Originally posted by: lourel24

interesting.parud has a son.What has happened that paro has left n rudra is angry with everyone?plz continue soon .Wana know the happy ending.




Originally posted by: bebo2050

i am a bit slow in these things , i cant figure out even with hints

its really interesting , what happenend to paro baisa , the suspense is killing me , update fast na,😃




Originally posted by: SherryGS

Nice plot and different. Look forward to the conclusion. What did poor Maitali do?






Thank you so much for your lovely words dearies :)
@aruni50218, I loved your siggy 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_

Sambhavi-Sa, I forbid you from calling yourself immature!


Such brilliant write-up!

I almost cried you know? I thought Paro was dead! And then I cried thinking about Ansh and Rudra..

Even made up a story in my mind about how Maithli knew the pregnancy would harm Paro... And how maybe Paro passed away in the labor room giving birth to Ansh.. And how Rudra is angry that she never told him.. Or else he'd have done something.

Idiot I am. Getting hyper and emotional without reading your note!

I saw that you said you are a fan of happy endings. And after reading other comments, Paro is alive I am sure! :)

Lovely write-up! Now update soon! Okay?






Originally posted by: Jaz1990

Ow my god this was so adorable yet so damn sad! Seriously fab! Do continue




Originally posted by: Hope

tictac sa, Fabulous OS. Loved it. But I have so many questions? Please update soon.

Also, your write up is just brilliant👏. You should not call yourself a immature writer. You are a fantastic writer😃.





Originally posted by: kaykay

superb...rudra..single dad...waiting for the nxt part..i'm sure its gonna be happy ending





Originally posted by: sarita_barun

Loved it.
She's in the hospital I'm guessing...
And thats where they're heading now...
Can't wait for the next update.




Originally posted by: Suni

Lovely start. What's up with Paro? Is she the next Ranawat in a coma? Complications with the pregnancy and only she and Maithili knew about it? Very intriguing. Looking forward to part 2.




Originally posted by: sreeyaanar

👏👍🏼🤗

Superb writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
keep it up!
waiting for teh next part!!!





Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

simply superb
loved it
keep writing-




Thank you so much for commenting dears :)
@_SenbonZakura_, sorry that I made you cry 😆.. but happy ending it is😉
@Hope, your all questions will be answered in the last update, that is next :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: binimoti

Hey update soon, you left it in a very interesting place..






Thank you guys :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful storyline. fingers crossed about what happened to paro. eagerly waiting for ur next update. i think he is taking his son to paro. may be she is hospitalised. lovely concept.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shyamala_mohan

wonderful storyline. fingers crossed about what happened to paro. eagerly waiting for ur next update. i think he is taking his son to paro. may be she is hospitalised. lovely concept.



Thank you so much dear :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
nice one ..
waiting for the second update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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love the storyline,wondering is paro dead or she left him...it seems she is dead complication during birth but there rudra said even if he had ti die somethg...waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful story!!!
Where is Paro baisa???
I hope she's not in coma or something...,
Plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gowri_19

nice one ..

waiting for the second update




Originally posted by: march2011

love the storyline,wondering is paro dead or she left him...it seems she is dead complication during birth but there rudra said even if he had ti die somethg...waiting for next update




Originally posted by: Milii

Wonderful story!!!

Where is Paro baisa???
I hope she's not in coma or something...,
Plzzz continue soon






Thanks for commenting dearies, your all questions will be answered soon :)

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