SS: Bringing Back Paro pt4 pg 16 06/05 - Page 7

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Shona

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kaykay
really loved both the parts...both of them are perfectly ion character...making rudra move is only when paro is in danger...perfect reason for rudra and interesting choices...he always test her limit by his choices...what wud be paro's choice she cant choose neither..eagerly waiting for part 3..👍🏼 ur translations ...

She has never choosen something from the choices he gives...shes good at loopholes

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Tannu

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Posted: 11 years ago

Loving it so far, and thank you for updating on a Sunday - I really need some PaRud stories to keep me going over the weekend lol.

I think you've been able to capture Rudra's character particularly well, it seems very realistic that he would be unwilling to admit that he needs Paro, hence leaving the decision up to her.

Great work, keep it up :)

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@Zola029

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice updates !

Loved how portrait both their characters !

So typical of Rudra 😆 Not saying he wants her to come back but leaving to her to decide 😳

Eager to read the next one

Do pm me please 😊

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ujwala444

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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful read.. felt as if seeing it on tv 👏

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SherryGS

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Posted: 11 years ago

Great work on the second part. Enjoyed the way you portrayed both Paro and Rudra and I liked his determination. ⭐️

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Sona257

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Posted: 11 years ago

loved the story! Rudra is smart,, he knows how to get Paro hihi

Can't wait to know what Paro is going to do

and please do pm me for the next update!

Edited by Sona257 - 11 years ago

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shalini_s

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Posted: 11 years ago

good one... giving the option to her.. lets c if she chooses Rudra..

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Maya

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Posted: 11 years ago

Likey like!

The aloo sabzi,...hahaha...these two are so cute!!

I love how he pointed out all those things - which show that she still considers him her husband..

So now he has delivered an ultimatum!

And you stopped there??

Haaye! Now we wil have to wait to see Paro's reaction...please jaldi se update karo !!

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Anjali Verma

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Posted: 11 years ago

👏 awaiting the next update.

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Sona

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome SS!

Rudra is using the Thankur's threat to visit Paro. & she unconsciously makes his favorite food for supper, how cute!😉

Now he's giving her ultimate to make decision for their future; but I think he'll override her decision if it's not safe for her.

-Sona

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