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Posted: 11 years ago

#411

For Cured: The whole idea of spinning a complete tale on the major phases of Rudra's life, summing up nearly half of it with an inanimate object such as a room is remarkable my friend. And learning of his agony, his pain slowly being transformed into something like love, all because of the doings of one woman, through the nooks and crannies of his room, was a sheer delight.

For Overtaken: I found this piece very sensual. There was so much in this drabble making a beautiful picture - his scent, her crumpled lehenga, his touch, her laughter, their embrace and his admiration. You get the gist - a visual delight!

Amazing work Rae, no one does romance, better than you, my friend!

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#412

Originally posted by: mistyrains
For Cured: The whole idea of spinning a complete tale on the major phases of Rudra's life, summing up nearly half of it with an inanimate object such as a room is remarkable my friend. And learning of his agony, his pain slowly being transformed into something like love, all because of the doings of one woman, through the nooks and crannies of his room, was a sheer delight.

For Overtaken: I found this piece very sensual. There was so much in this drabble making a beautiful picture - his scent, her crumpled lehenga, his touch, her laughter, their embrace and his admiration. You get the gist - a visual delight!

Amazing work Rae, no one does romance, better than you, my friend!

❤️

Thank You so much! Glad you liked it!

And for the last part - Yeh lo blushing wali kissies - :* :* :* :* ☺️

PS - You also do romance very very very well! *cough* UPDATE! *cough* :p

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@mistyrains

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Posted: 11 years ago

#415

This last piece served its purpose, and by the last line made me feel content, too!

The first two lines of the drabble, show how much of a change has happened to the way Rudra looked at the world, like almost every man in love goes through. For him maybe, the change was different was a little more drastic than in most men. Because I'm more than sure, he had never appreciated the beauty of the stars, the moon or come as close as to draw analogy between it and a woman. And kudos to you for bringing all that out in two measly sentences.

There were undercurrents of sensuality in this piece, her being so attuned to him, then his hand or her waist - very subtly done, which made it all the more beautiful and shiver-inducing, if I may add ;)

And the last two lines, like I said previously , are my favourites! Very strong, very poetic.

Also, a perfect ending to this lovely series. And amazing, amazing work as always! :D

P.S: It was my sheer pleasure getting to read these drabbles and convincing you of how truly wonderful they are! So thank you, for entertaining me and getting me through the dreary boredom of this exam period :P

And I love the theme, you based the whole series on, brilliant concept.

Lots of love! <3

Edited by mistyrains - 11 years ago