Four Shot: SAY GOOD-BYE--Part 3, Pg 26 (updated--June 17th) - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jaz1990

This was heart wrenching! One can feel the loneliness and sorrow she is going through. This somewhat reminded me of the goodbye from friends, wer Rachel says goodbye to all her friends before she leaves for Paris, but does not say goodbye to Ross cause it's just to damn hard! Tell me you watched that episode naps?


Jaz:

I was a HUGE "Friends" fan...huge! I watched that episode, absolutely. I remmeber crying when they ended up together, for ever. That was rhe original Tv couple for me!

From the perspective of Paro and Rudra...how do you say goodbye to the person is basically your soulmate...for that soulmate's sake and not your own? I am writing the second segment of this, trying to work out for myself what I would see Paro doing now..and Rudra doing later. Full disclosure--I wont have them in bed, Ross/ Rachel style to deal with this! Stay tuned, love..

-Navin
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pareesakhan

You are a master story teller. A magician with a pen as a magic wand. You twirl it around and weave a web of emotions buried deep and emotions ashore. Spinning the story with words that encase the readers and transports them to the eye of the emotional storm that's is raging through the characters' minds.
I just love you.


Thats some incredible imagery right there--you seem to be a writer yourself, Baisa! Welcome to the forum, and thank you for a beautiful comment..really touched my heart. Glad you are reading my work!

PS: One of my best friends is actually named Pareesa Khan--Pari, for short! Huge coincidence!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shhaina

Dear Navi,

I am sitting with tears in my eyes for poor Paro who has only suffered loss throughout her life. I don't know a single person in this world who makes such pacts with God but reading this OS I guess there must be people like that in this world. How do they live after moving away from their loved ones. I wont call it giving up as people like Paro will always have their loved ones in their heart, but what about the hearts of those who love her. Who will mend those broken hearts. Is't this act of Paro going to steal these people trust from trust, bharosa, love, friendship.
I am so emotionally moved by your writing that I am relay crying for Paro, Rudra and all his family members.
Personally for me good-by's are very painful, I easily get attached to people, places and things and they stay in my mind for ages. If Paro is like me in this aspect these goodbyes will be very painful and not saying it even more painful.

I can write an essay on your OS as this has relay moved me.What can I say my friend that you are the best writer on this forum but I think you already know it so keep writing and updating. Bless u and Paro too.


You have been really sweet, I've seen you commenting on my other writings, and every comment is so well thought out and so kind--thank you!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Jaz:</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">I was a HUGE "Friends" fan...huge! I watched that episode, absolutely. I remmeber crying when they ended up together, for ever. That was rhe original Tv couple for me!

From the perspective of Paro and Rudra...how do you say goodbye to the person is basically your soulmate...for that soulmate's sake and not your own? I am writing the second segment of this, trying to work out for myself what I would see Paro doing now..and Rudra doing later. Full disclosure--I wont have them in bed, Ross/ Rachel style to deal with this! Stay tuned, love..</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">-Navin</font>



Napsss 🤗 it's been 10 years since friends finished and I still watch it on Comedy Central and still laugh even though I watched dat same epi a million times! No show can replace friends for me! 😆 with Ross and Rachel like any other classic dude Ross actually thinks Rachel does not care enough to say goodbye, when actually she can't imagine saying goodbye because it makes her not want to go! That scene and dialogue rite der broke my heart!

As for Paro and Rudra they are something different altogether, and sometimes u don't know what to expect from these two, cause they have so many layers and so many feelings yet to deal with! Can't wait for ur next segment! When will it come out (premier) lol 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Beautifully written 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
beautifully written! loved to see the emotions paro was feeling!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing and heart wrenching loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: automaticstart

after reading this i just cried so much that my sister got really worried. but the only this i will say that it truly touched mu heart. each n every n the emotions are so overwhelming . thank u for giving us such pleasure.
p.s. ok i am such a cry baby n i know this.


🤗 from me to the world's nicest, most adorable crybaby! Thanks for your PM!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Navin Di, you cannot do this to me! Not before exams. Not fair.
You made me choke up- The relationships Paro has with characters- including ones that disappear- are so beautifully built. My favorite part was her cutting up her favorite ghagra to build another one for Sunehri.

You make Paro human- she's not a constantly happy go lucky girl that seemingly doesn't worry about herself. I like the Paro you have- she's real, as are all your other characters. Her relationships are strong, but she's willing to break them. The loyalty and her faith are two things you've made into something that's more believable- it's not quite as blind with you.


Amazing as always, Navin Di!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ABOUT ur Two Shot...


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I am sure soon in the show tooo there is gonna come a point where v mite see ur work reflected...its gonna FLOOD the forum...😭




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