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aysh05

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Poor mohini... She's simply misunderstood ;)

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Aruni.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

WOW - this unique and fantastic!! For once i felt sorry for KCM - that is only in the initial part, K? - that she was overshadowed during her childhood and youth. Bitterness of that kind stays. But then I was bowled over by how you interpreted Rudra's comeback with Paro - So that is how KCM knows that Paro is here to stay. She said something in yesterday's episode about how paro's pain will hurt Rudra more - So THAT's how she knew. Thank you for this - I was thinking may be you are planning to write all the sins around Rudra, but this is way more cool.

Am off to search "seven deadly sins" and will guess on whom the next one will be! 😃

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DDC1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Really liked your heartfelt description of Mohini's psyche. Looking forward to more

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

The concept is quite interesting and the first two entries powerful specially the Mohini one. Great job in giving her actions and POV a reason, howsoever twisted it may be.

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Anushka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

nyc !,👍🏼 stories from different perspectives .!!

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DiyaS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Very nice! Especially liked the Greed story from Mohini's perspective.

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shagun-rocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

i really really like your style of writing..and this series holds much promise...hoping to read more of your works...

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GUNJAN

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Interesting one...U r the first to attempt Mohini's side of the story...👏

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Tania

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Another lovely shot :)
Loved the Greed part from Mohini's view :)
Waiting for the next shot :)

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javeria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

WOW i have a wonderful time reading Mohini journey

Jealousy give rise to greed and now she is envy.

She thought after Mala elopement, Dilsher and Rudra departure everything would be in her control but Parvati entry in Rudra has shaken her position in the family. Though Parvati coukd never think in her dreams to Harm Mohini, she respects her but Mohini hates everything related to Mala and therefor Parvati is her enemy too.

I wonder what cunning pan she will hatch to destroy Dilsher and to separate Rudra and Parvati if she ever get to know that Parvati is related to Mala.

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