Piya Bawari : A Rangrasiya TS [part2 updated] - Page 5

Originally posted by: Sofna

we'll be thrown out of the forum😆

Originally posted by: asmi279

Hey bhagwan!!! That wd be sooo awesome!! Kal rudrasa cd nt handle shraddhawala love.. Ab yeh hot ishqwala love kaise handle karenge?? :D

Originally posted by: asmi279

Yaar ab toh paro ne bhi bol diya ki woh manmani karna chahti hai.. Ab toh pakka yeh dream come true ho sakta hai 😳

Originally posted by: gunji

Loved it totally Shreya...great work🤗

there is one more part to come na?

Originally posted by: ThithliDhost

👏Shreyooo...kya bath hain! 😳

Very nice! 😊. Loved both parts. Poor Sumer yaar! You called him a orge😲😆.. I guess he is compare to Rudy boy hain? Nice to c evn ur Paro is steadfast in fevicoling to Rudrr. Liked her monologue.

Yes! Dreams are our own. Dreams does not inow if it is Village Belle or a 21st centuary ultra feminist.. 😛. Dreams just reflect ur desires sometimes. And Paro's desires, kindled by Rudy boy takes a different size and shape inher dreams.. The one which is more passionate and pleasurable ..😳..

And even in Dreams, Rudy keeps his originality ..😆. Me likey.. 👏

So when is part 3 releasing? Dono't tell , i have to fill up 70 pages of new Pursuit thread to get there! 😃

Originally posted by: nihamrm

I start reading and come across this "hat slimeyball with toad eyes and greasy fingers " and i can't help but say how could you do this? how could you call a butiful person a slimeyball Now jokes apart honestly i dont think so there's a better description for sumer. And as the story is concerned do i have to say it you rocked it again. Honestly baisa you are one of the most talented writers I've come across in this forum and whatever I've just read is proof enough to substantiate my statement. And the way the feelings were described sounds exactly like Paro so you've nailed it right there and i wish the part three the finale will also be as impactful as the two parts.

Originally posted by: shreya_rc

baas ! hogaya, tera feedback ?? 😡😡

Originally posted by: bluemoon255

ab mein kya bolu? tu ithni acchi likthi hai ki shabdu hi nahi milthe.😊

on a serious note, i really liked it. paro has to spent all waking hours with a person who she thinks as her protector. not to mention a very handsome one who does not believe in giving personal space. so it is obvious that she gets physically attracted to him. you have captured her emotions and desire beautifully.