Piya Bawari : A Rangrasiya TS [part2 updated]

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milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ..Jyoti..
Amazing start
Waiting for the next part

thank u jyoti. next part updated.

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asmi279

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Oooh...read part 2 baisa... Apne apna vaada poora kiya.. ;):)

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milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: asmi279
Oooh...read part 2 baisa... Apne apna vaada poora kiya.. ;):)

baisa, kya batau.😃 i hav tried such stuffs for the 1st time...so zada achi nehi hoi hogi !

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milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: bluemoon255
lovely update. loved it😊

baas ! hogaya, tera feedback ?? 😡😡

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asmi279

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: shreya_rc

baisa, kya batau.😃 i hav tried such stuffs for the 1st time...so zada achi nehi hoi hogi !

Nahi re.. Sahi likha hai ekdum..paro's awareness abt her own feelings n cravings.. For the first time.. Ekdum sahi capture kiya.. Good job!!

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milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: asmi279

Nahi re.. Sahi likha hai ekdum..paro's awareness abt her own feelings n cravings.. For the first time.. Ekdum sahi capture kiya.. Good job!!

thank u, new dazzler in the forum !

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prettypri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Just read both parts Shreya... lovely!

The first part mirrors paros turmoil and her understanding of rudras actions so well.. Loved her resolve to not give in. Would have liked to see that in the show as well but they are depicting her in love totally so that's fine too.😊

Your description of Sumer is hilarious..😆

I think rudra was kinder calling him Gadha!😆

And what is this.. Paro had a dream that rudra kissed her??

Wow... so here too the attraction is from her side and she is not too coy to dream... What will she do about it though... Waiting to find out!!😳

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milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: prettypri
Just read both parts Shreya... lovely!
The first part mirrors paros turmoil and her understanding of rudras actions so well.. Loved her resolve to not give in. Would have liked to see that in the show as well but they are depicting her in love totally so that's fine too.😊

Your description of Sumer is hilarious..😆
I think rudra was kinder calling him Gadha!😆

And what is this.. Paro had a dream that rudra kissed her??
Wow... so here too the attraction is from her side and she is not too coy to dream... What will she do about it though... Waiting to find out!!😳

dekho, when she is so bold to propose him in front of the whole world, it would be too human for her to dream such stuffs.I want her to to be passion driven, not by divine symbols. I dont want her to be A medieval Joan of Arc. I want her to be a mythical parvati, who decided to marry mahadev because she craved him, and didnot shy away from showing her passions blatantly.

Edited by shreya_rc - 11 years ago

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mozart66

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Lovely story Shreya!! Do continue!! You are putting in words what everybody's wild imagination is visualizing in dreams!!

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milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: mozart66
Lovely story Shreya!! Do continue!! You are putting in words what everybody's wild imagination is visualizing in dreams!!

yaah everybodyz including our very own paro'😆s ! and baisa, dont u think she is also a fellow human being hence, she has the right to feel the heat of passion.

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