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SALIAH

@OriginalBarbie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Shreya iv just finished reading your poetry in motion
It was simply outstanding..words cannot do justice to your work, i felt like i was caught up in a wirlwind of emotions..could totally imagine rudras face and the various different expressions..

Are u sure its not a page out of ur secret collection of books 😳

Saliah

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milinda.shreyz

@milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

@ leena : arre u dont hav to quote the whole story to prove your point baisa !! main toh eimi maan gayi thi !

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milinda.shreyz

@milinda.shreyz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: OriginalBarbie
Shreya iv just finished reading your poetry in motion
It was simply outstanding..words cannot do justice to your work, i felt like i was caught up in a wirlwind of emotions..could totally imagine rudras face and the various different expressions..

Are u sure its not a page out of ur secret collection of books 😳

Saliah

Nooo baisa, it is purely original, and child of my very own imagination !!😃

haawww !! u accuse me of plagiarism !😲😭

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prettypri

@prettypri

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Sofna

I did...was there anything significant cept him going mandir, praying..?

Sofu... The other lady came... The one who set the fire.. And why do I feel that rudra is not as trusting as he appears...😉

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Sofna

@Sofna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: prettypri

Sofu... The other lady came... The one who set the fire.. And why do I feel that rudra is not as trusting as he appears...😉

Yh devyani coming bck n forth for money will bump into Maithli one day...

Did u see the look Rudr passed to Sumer n mausam sa😆...he has his suspicion

Dz he knw it's Paro...when the both held DS head..?

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Sofna

@Sofna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: OriginalBarbie
Shreya iv just finished reading your poetry in motion
It was simply outstanding..words cannot do justice to your work, i felt like i was caught up in a wirlwind of emotions..could totally imagine rudras face and the various different expressions..

Are u sure its not a page out of ur secret collection of books 😳

Saliah

Hugs Saliah..🤗... I completely agree about Shreya's writing...yr words gave expression to my thoughts in a better manner😆

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prettypri

@prettypri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Sofna

Yh devyani coming bck n forth for money will bump into Maithli one day...

Did u see the look Rudr passed to Sumer n mausam sa😆...he has his suspicion

Dz he knw it's Paro...when the both held DS head..?

Rudrr felt some connection.. How could he not.. But his most trusted people are vouching for her so he does not think maybe.

Danveet acted weird poor guy😆

And paro gave him the phone herself... I thought he found that odd... she will slip up... Is too simple..

But I have the feeling she will actually get to the bottom of who set the fire... Else why bring that lady in so deliberately!

In the middle of all that some TLC for Rudrr as well

😳

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SALIAH

@OriginalBarbie

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: shreya_rc

Nooo baisa, it is purely original, and child of my very own imagination !!😃
haawww !! u accuse me of plagiarism !😲😭

Lmao oh god nooo never i respect u and u work far too much to even think like that 😳

What i meant to say was, have u secretly written books and not told us?
As in my first thought was..is shreya an author? 😳

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SALIAH

@OriginalBarbie

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Sofna

Hugs Saliah..🤗... I completely agree about Shreya's writing...yr words gave expression to my thoughts in a better manner😆

Big hugs sofna 😳 😳 😳

Im amazed at the talent in this forum..while reading shreyas OS i felt like i was going through the emotions, she has a way with words..they flow so well together just like a river 😳

Sofu did u see todays epi? major sa can feel paro bai sa around him 😉 has even memorised her touch 😉

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mozart66

@mozart66

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Shreya!! That is one beautiful story you wrote here which will always keep that episode of RR too with us forever!!

Rudra's anguish at seeing his smiling mother in the portrait with the traitor was the worst blow fate could have dealt him after his mother left. One can live life somehow if one knows that the person who left you behind is not ever coming back. But to know that you have already met that person but did not recognize and now is standing in front of a portrait of a happy portrait knowing that the person is alive and living well without you, even forgotten you can be too painful to describe in words.

Paro was like a breath of fresh air for him. Balm for his soul and he instantly turned into a child trapped into a grown man's body, to be taken care of by her!! He was probably hallucinating about his mother!!

All in all the entire essence of the episode is captured in beautiful words in your story!! That I will come back again and again to, to read!