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Posted: 11 years ago
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fab...
especiall Paro and Aman... refreshing...please update
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Luved it 😛 😳
Paro as BSD officer 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it totally.read all 4 parts in one go. 👏
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Lovely! Waiting for the next update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you all for your comments

NOTE: just go with the follow, i may not have accurate information but you will understand what i am trying to say.

Hope you guys will like it.

Here is part 5

Part 5

Rudra: what??!!


Rudra was shocked he never that she would use his name as her surname.


Then he noticed her name in the tag too, that stated "Parvati Rudra Pratap Ranawat."


Again, paro stated her name: Parvati Rudra Pratap Ranawat


He then shook her hand and welcomed her formally to the village. And introduced himself as "Rudra Pratap Ranawat"


She smirked when he said that


Aman can feel the heat between both of them and said lets go.


While aman put paro's luggage in the jeep, rudra, and paro was staring at each other.

(by the way, paro is still angry with rudra and never going to forgive him and rudra is happy to see paro but thinking about his dad just made him get angry at her)

Aman was about to drive the jeep, but paro requested to drive the jeep.


Aman told her that she can drive another time and she just came. she nodded her head


Paro sat in the back while Aman and Rudra sat in the front.


Rudra did not know paro can drive and that she was speaking in English.


Then rudra remembered everything how Aman was talking with someone in English in phone and realized it was paro all along.


During the ride, rudra and paro was staring at each other remembering their past.


However, rudra wanted to question paro why she is using his name as her surname and how she became bsd officer.


Paro knew that she shocked rudra by her name and who she was.


However, she was least affected by it... there is four things why she came to this village for. First: rudra's dad; Second: Thakur; Third: Chachi; fourth: Lalia. She knows rudra have a huge impact on her life, but she was very heart broken and lost her trust because of this man that she does not want anything to do with him. She wants to slap rudra so hard but she knew he was not aware of the facts.

As paro drove to BSD office, everyone was surprised to see paro being a BSD officer and that too after six months.


She was welcomed by the senior officer and she just gave him a hug and said you have done so much for me as a father and I will do my duty as her rules properly.


Rudra was shocked because their senior officer does not hug people that fast and she was thanking him for being a good father. He wanted to know what is happening.

Just then Rudra's chacha enters the BSD officer and saw paro in BSD uniform, then he realized she is the officer they were talking about.


Chacha always had a feeling that Paro would never do such act.

He was happy paro was back because when she was here he saw change in rudra's behavior.


Paro also saw him. Paro was happy to see him; she knows that he believes she did not do anything.


Before she can even come to him, paro went to him and got blessings from him. Chacha blessed her and smiled at her...


Then something caught his eyes, which surprised him as he thought it was a dream.

Before anyone can say anything... the senior officer interrupted

Senior officer: everyone, she is the newest member of our bsd staffs; she was transferred here to work with major Rudra Pratap Ranawat and Aman. She is a very valuable member of the BSD team. I hope everyone co-operates with her. Her name is Parvati Rudra Pratap Ranawat.

Everyone was shocked. However, paro smirked knowing what is going through their minds.

Senior Officer: now can everyone continue their job, I need major Rudra, parvati, and Aman to come to my office.

All walked away and the three officer followed their senior to his room.



That's it... tomorrow i will update the rest

Thank you

JP

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ahhh! So this is the twist. Good one. Waiting for the next update.
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Wow ..
It was nice and great

So pm me your further works and part of this ss

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you so much for your comments and likes.


yes, there is a twist in the story.

Like I said in the last part, there are four reasons why paro actually agreed to come back to village.

1. Rudra's father

2. Thakur

3. Rudra's Chachi

4. Lalia


you will get the answer in coming parts...


here is part 6...


PART 6:


All the officer were standing in front of their senior waiting for instructions

Senior officer: I need all of you work together and catch thakur in his wrongdoings. He is very dangerous.

After that, he looked at both rudra and aman...


Senior officer: I know parvati is one of the strongest BSD officers however; this case is more dangerous to her than anyone is. Her safety is the first priority, as I have to answer many people if anything happens to her.

Rudra interrupted.

Rudra: Then why is she here in first place, we need assistance not disturbance in this case. So why...

Paro interrupted... and turned to rudra


Paro: With all due respect major, I know how to take care of myself; I do not need your assistance.

Senior officer: both of you listen, it is my order... parvati can take care of herself and at the same time, I know there are many dangers to her life in this village. (He turned to parvati)... parvati I know you can handle everything, I have seen you accomplish many other cases, but this one... you know what I am talking about and I need your co-operation... (Paro shook her head in agreement). (Then he turned to aman and rudra) parvati will help you with case at the same time her safety is priority. Co-operate with her and work together. I hope you all understand this.

All three shook their head.

Senior officer: you all can go except parvati, parvati I need to talk with you

Rudra still does not know what is happening around him but he knows that he needs to talk with parvati.

Rudra and Aman left the place, but Rudra took a good look at paro before leaving the office.

Senior Officer: Paro I am so glad you came... but I hope you are safe here. (Paro was going to interrupted but he raised his hand to stop her)... no let me finish. I know Rudra does not know everything, and I am respecting your decision by not saying anything, but I want you to be with aman or rudra at all time. I do not want to see history repeat itself. I can never forget that day in my life. I am saying this because I am also a father who has a daughter. Please be safe (he touched her head softly and affectionately)

Paro: yes papa, I will be... you have done many things to me. You took me into your house that day and made me part of your family. You joined me in BSD and now I am one of the respected officers because of you. I know you are worried so will mama, dadi, and baby. Trust me I will be safe. Yes, I will be either with Aman bhaiya ... ... or Major Ranawat. But you know I cannot live with you because I know my life is at stake and I cannot risk yours. I will stay in a different place, please.

The senior officer had took in paro as his own daughter after the incident and he has make sure she is fine otherwise his family back home will kill him. He does not want to leave paro to live by her but if that is what she needs. He will agree

Senior officer just shook his head in approval and called chacha inside to take her to Rudra's office.


Paro said bye to the senior officer promising she will fine and that she will call him in case of emergency and call the family every day.

Chacha and Paro were walking towards Rudra's office. When chacha stopped her before entering...


Chacha: Paro how are you beta? Where have you been?


Paro: chacha I am fine, I was in BSD for past 5 months.


Chacha: Sorry beta about that day in hospital, I know you would have not done anything like that, but you know my position


Paro: I know chacha do not worry about it, if there is someone I know who trusted me that day, it was you. And trust me it means a lot to me.


Chacha: beta can I ask you something... your name... it is...


Before chacha can finish paro completed it


Paro: Parvati Rudra Pratap Ranawat


Chacha: why? How?


Paro: Chacha, when the time comes, you will know... Chacha, I need your help.


Chacha: what is it beta?


Paro: I need to meet bapusa, please...


Chacha: I think you need to talk to rudra about that, I will be more than glad to take you there, but he never lets anyone beside him


Paro: thanks chacha

Both were front of Rudra's office... Paro said bye to chacha and knocked the door of Rudra's.

Rudra: Come in


Paro: Major Ranawat, I would like to talk to you

Rudra who heard Paro's voice just turned towards her. He could not believe that she is paro who was fearful of everything. Paro in other hand was somewhat nervous because after all its rudra she is facing. Therefore, she put her brave face.

Paro: I need to see the file that both you and Aman sir are working on, to know more about the case.

Rudra remained silent... he was aware of what paro said but he wanted her to talk to him about that night.


Paro was waiting patiently for his reply, then

Paro: Major are you listening, I want the file about Thakur.


Rudra: it is in that cupboard (he pointed towards the cupboard)

Paro just stared at him and walked over to the cupboard and took the file, when she turned around, she saw Rudra standing front of her. She was scared for a second.

Rudra: So Parvati Rudra Pratap Ranawat is that your name?


Paro: Sir I believe that is what is written in my tag, isn't it?


Rudra: Why my name?


Paro: once someone told me I was Parvati Rudra Pratap Ranawat, that's why sir?

Rudra: you are not my wife... there is no phere, no mangalsutra, and no sin... (Before he can complete it)

Paro: Sorry I know there is no phere and mangalsutra but you put sindoor on my head with blood and that makes me you wife... isn't it ... At least that is what you told me 6 months ago Major sab. And I do not have time to explain myself to you Major sab, please if you could excuse me I would like to do my work.

Rudra was completely shocked, he never that paro will change like this, and he was angry with her for making his dad in bad condition and all he wants to give her is pain.


Then something came in his head and smirked at Paro.


Paro knew by his smirk that he was up to no good, and that she needs be aware of her surrounding,


Rudra just let Paro walk away.


Throughout the day, paro and rudra's minds were thinking about each other.

During the six months, every time paro calls she wants to hear his voice because she wants to make sure that thakur did not harm him. Even though paro hated rudra for his thoughts and words about her, she still needs to ensure he is okay for the sake of Ranawat her bapusa. She also made sure that aman goes, see him every week, and inform her about it. In Rudra's case, he can only think of paro that maybe she did not do anything to his father, but his sister being a witness he could never trust paro. So his coping mechanism was through lalia not in terms of having body intercourse but just to drink alcohol.


that's it for today

enjoy 😊


JP


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Posted: 11 years ago
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that is soo awesomeee love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Rudra is totally confused. But that smirk, hope he does not do something stupid.

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