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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesum FF .. Plz update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you everyone for your comments, it is greatly appreciated.

This is part 3 hope you like it...



Part 3:


Rudra: Aman, where is parvati?...

Aman: Sir, May I know why you want to know about my sister. I do not think it's your concern.

Rudra was shocked because he did not expect this answer from aman; he wanted to make sure that parvati is fine for some reason.

Rudra: because she is our witness for the case and I need her to meet me to give me some statements that are missing... so where is..

Again he was interrupted not by aman but by his supervisor..

Senior Officer: Major, it is not necessary because Paro's statements are taken and Aman will be take over that case and if we need paro's statement. I will take it from her because Paro is not here in this village.

Rudra was shocked because Paro left and not in this village and angry because aman will be in charge of this case... but rudra does not know is that senior officer knew what happened last night and did not want Rudra in this case and how much Paro was affected by it.

Rudra: okay sir, aman can be in charge of this case and its okay...

Senior Officer: everything is settled then (he turned towards Aman)... I need to talk to Paro and tell her to call me and I will talk everything to her.

Aman: okay sir, I will.

(By the way the senior officer and aman knows what happened to paro that day)...

Rudra did not know what was going on but he only felt anger because everything happens due to paro and now she has left the village and he has not access to this case anymore where he almost lost his father.

(This story is going to jump forward six months...)

During these six months... rudra have never saw paro... he was still anger at her but he still wanted to see her.

He never heard aman talk about paro front of him and he no longer had access to that particular case... however he did not want to think about paro so he goes to lalia. Lalia was happy paro was not there and that rudra was hers. Rudra's dad was still in coma and has not got well yet, but it might happen if paro revisits. Chachi was happy that rudra never comes to the house and her sons are enjoying it to themselves... aman was continuing his regular duty aware of everything that is happening around. Thakur cannot believe paro escaped that night because he wanted to sell her and his men are searching for her. Rudra also knows that Thakur wanted to do something bad to paro and rudra is still not aware of what happened to Paro that day she went missing. Rudra still tries to gets on the nerve of Thakur.

Presently, exactly after six months...

Rudra and Aman was working together on a case belonging to Thakur's men. In order to do this job they needed a another bsd officer with experiences to help in case...

Rudra met his senior officer and told him that they need another bsd officer to assist as they cannot trust many officers here because some leak information to thakur.

Senior officer thought for a while and knew who to put with rudra and aman to work with.

Senior Officer: I know an officer who knows thakur well and about his cases, that officer will more than glad to help you. (He said this while looking at rudra then at aman)..

Aman kind of knew who he was talking about but let his senior officer continue.

Senior Officer: let me call her and ask if she okay it.

Rudra: sir is the person a female bsd officer. Sir you know thakur is dangerous

Senior Officer: but she is capable of handling him... she is one of the best bsd officers we have; I will call her and inform her to come here within two days.

Rudra: Yes sir

Rudra left but the senior officer told aman to stay back

Senior Officer: it's time for your sister to get justice, call her in for Wednesday and she is best at what she does

Aman: are you sure sir?

Senior officer: I am more than sure; let me talk to her...

On the phone...

Girl: hello sir

Senior officer: it's time to get your justice, you are transferred here, be here in two days. I trust you

Girl: yes Sir, I will be there.


thats it guys...

hope you like it

Part 4 is gonna be even better

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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
that is really amazing update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful story. nice twist paro becoming bsd officer.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update.Wait is Paro was the new BSD officer?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you for the comments.
Here is part 4... trust me after this it is interesting...
Hope you like it

part 4:

The whole BSD office knew that there is a female bsd officer joining today but not sure who she is...


Aman and rudra was asked to pick up the officer... aman did not want rudra to pick her up... rudra saw something was wrong with aman since the time they announced about the lady bsd officer.

Both aman and Rudra went to the train station

(i am not sure if there is train in that place, plz just go with the flow)..

Aman was pacing in the station.


Meanwhile, rudra noticed a girl get off the train wearing BSD officer uniform

(rudra and aman was also in their uniform)


Rudra signed aman to go and call her...


Aman was walking towards the girl... before he can reach her, she turned around..


Rudra was rooted in the stop.


Before anyone can say anything, the bsd officer launched herself in a hug to aman and screamed bhaiya.


Aman hugged her and said how my sister is

Aman got no reply expect the fact that his sister hugged him tightly.

Aman then broke the hug from her...


The female officer's eye then went towards the other officer who looked as if he saw ghost.


She knew that it will affect him deeply to see her but she has to come there one way or the other.

She was wearing BSD uniform with a gun on the side... she had a ponytail and was wearing glasses.


Aman knew this day will come one day or the other... but he felt happy that his sister would be with him.


The BSD officer approached Rudra... by now rudra was out of his shock... but he never thought he would see her like this...


She took her hand and introduced herself...


Parvati Rudra Pratap Ranawat in duty sir... she smirked


thats it...

I know its short by next part will be better.

Thank you

JP


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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Liked the update. But is it possible to become a BSD officer in 6 months? I know creative liberty, but wouldn't it have been better if you had taken a leap of atleast 4 to 5 years?
Anyways coming back to the story, it was a nice twist and rudra's reaction to seeing paro was good.
Always liked the character of aman, nice to see it develop in this ff.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh Jesus ...Parvati Rudra Pratap Ranawat !!! This is getting exciting ... Pls update ASAP 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woah ...jst caught up. ..totally loving it...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Loved it!
Can't wait to read more :)

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