Three Shot ; Protector

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Three Shot ; Protector

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Paro open her eyes with lots of struggle but her head is paining like hell...n she try to move her head when she found herself tied with by rope...she struggled she is trying to move n free when she heard the voice gve her security from the child hood but now she loathed most...

She look disgusted...she turn her head when Thakur Tejawat said kya hua bai sa...muh kyuon phira rehe ho...oh oh aapne iyaar ko dikhne ko chaha hain...Rudra Pratap Ranawat par jo insaan aapko Vidhwa kar de usse shi shaadi bara himmatwali ho aap bai sa...ek sath itni din unke sath...

Paro closed her eyes as if want to shut her ears also from disgusted words...when Thakur said kitna himmat baar gaye aapko , ek shaadi ke baad phir se ek aur shaadi...vidhwa hoke bhi shaadi karne ki khawab...ha...tch tch Bai sa...

Thakur turned at Paro n squeezed her cheek n said tu ekeli aurat hain jiske ke liye mere nuksan hua.tere oh yaar pehele tere shaadi mein hungama kya n mere saara maal ko khatam kar dia, mere nuksan mere itna saal ka mehenat ko paani mein mila dia uha tujhe bech ke par oh tujhe uha se utha ke le gaya ..uska baad oh tere kabaj baa gaya har waqt har pal tujhse aapne se alag na karna tere Raksha karna...tere mat ka natak kya , aapna naukari ka bhi parva nehi kya...sach mein maanna parega iyarana kaafi jordar hua hain...

Paro turn her head when Bheema entered n said Thakur shahab kaam ho gaya , everything is prepared as per u order...

Thakur nodded n said iska muh uha jake kholna hoga let's not wait for any time n just end this now..

Bheema nodded n went to freed Paro bai sa who is struggling n shaking her head but no one paid any heed...Bheema hold paro who is struggling to freed herself when Thakur said Bai sa n slapped her hard...Thakur hold her n said I will not tolarate any more ur nonsense...I had enough n I lost more than enough for u n not more.. 18yrs I make this deal safely but for u..my plan ruined n I face huge lost n till now in this Shivratri Mela .I want to smuggled arms but that capture by That Rudra ...

Paro smiles when Thakur held her hair tightly n said u r smiling ...n said don't worry that Rudra who caused so much pain so much lost for me n for him my 18yrs business come to a halt but not more ...he will pay...when Paro s eyes turn wide in shock n pain n she again shook her head with no...But thakur said kya kare bai sa...jana toh hoga , taklif hoga but aap kyuon phikar kar rehe ho aapke paas hi aapke Rudra ko bhejenge ...phir aap dono uha shaadi manao , Suhag Raat manao aur na manao ...

Paro felt disgusted again n turn her face when thakur took her hand n pulled her along with him...the force on his hand the roughness the pain he is giving her those disgusting words he is instilling her n the way he is accusing her n rudra for some...she can't even think she felt herself going down in some darkness but no she cant' ...Rudra will destroy then...n thakur said his job is in danger..hey bholenath iye manne kya kar dia...unke sath.oh humesha mere jaan bachaya mujhe har taklif se dur kya aur meine hi...nehi mujhe kuch karna hain...par kya kare hum kya...Rudra mujhe maaf kar do ek baar .pls iha ajao pls mujhe bachane ke liye iha aapne aapko sahi sabit karne ke liye...pls Rudra come here...

She closed her eyes in pray when Thakur said kya hua bai sa...kyua soch rehe ho... Iye ke...Tumhara Rudra dev kab aayega...hmmm bahut jald bai sa hum aapko jada intejaar nehi karwayenge...itna pyaar toh hum tumhe karte hain .akhir aap humara thakurain ki khash chehthi laadli ho...hum ek pal tak tumhe humara beti ke tarah dikhe par kya hain bai sa, marte waqt kisi ka andhere mein rakhna mere tarika nehi hainaur hum Raja Thakur aapko sab sach kehenge..kya hain na...iske baad aapke sath phir mulakaq toh hoga nehi...

Paro turn away.she only know she have to save herself as she is the last one who can help Rudra n after that if she has to die then she will happily...Rudra did everything for her...but she betray him but not she will save him.she know rudra how detest women for their betrayal n how his own mother betray him, abandon him she can't increase it.if she can't do anything atleast ...she sighed n pray to LORD shiva once more.

Bheema came n said there is those crocodile when Paro heard it... n fear , her eyes turn big when thakur sa said Paro bai sa dekh rehe hain inhe iye humare hain iye hume bahut maante hain...aur pata hain aapko...iha hi aapke oh pyaare se dost kya naam uss behekuf lerki ka ha bindi...iha dhakele the hum...oh behekuf lerki sab jaan chuke the aur aapko bachan cha rehe the barau sa aur uske admio r se..par khud I upar chale gaye par aap phikar mat kijiye aap bhi unse milege jald...

Paro's eyes turn wide with all revelation she can't take any more she want to cry shout scream in pain in agony how could she trust this man n betray that man...how could she blind with her own belief n came here n came over Rudra...her Bholenath listen her pray n give her a protector , a MAN name with LORD SHIVA but she ...she throw it she make the boon curse with her own blindness...

She fall down on her knees when thakur indicate to open her mouth n said do u want anything more bai sa..koi akhri iccha...bata dijiye...hum oh pura karne ki koshish jarur karenge...

Paro shiver n look at the sky then whisper Rudra...she closed her eyes n remember how many time rudra saved her. Protect her , he saved her respect, her honor , their first met, their meeting ,his protection, shouting, care, how he fed her, how she their moments all r going memory...she cried when she remember how he was helpless yet try to make her look at the other side of coin but she was...she remember that last moment when he was saying that he can only save her .trust him but she choose Raja thakur n it's her punishment...

She look at Raja thakur with disgust n anger n shock when Thakur evilly smiles n push her to the lake n she Screamed RUDRAAA...

Whole Place , haveli..sky echoed Rudraaa...

Precap:-

Rudra Tandav may be


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Edited by Krishna_Sourav - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful TS.do finish it.
Curious to know how it ends...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks yaar 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: DN2012

Beautiful TS.do finish it.

Curious to know how it ends...

Thanks dear
I'll continue soon 😃
may be within a 2days
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks yaar 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb... šŸ‘šŸ˜Š
Plz continue... šŸ˜›
I imagined a similar situation where thakur will take paro to the lake and tell about how he killed bindi... and then our hero comes to the rescue...
but was too lazy to write am OS..
good that I didn't... bcz your's is much much better than what I had written... 🄱
I am a terrible writer šŸ˜†
Plz continue...😊
Edited by raima111 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice... Wonderfully Written... šŸ‘
Please Continue Soon šŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow amazing work dear šŸ‘
Continue soon plzz 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: raima111

Superb... šŸ‘šŸ˜Š

Plz continue... šŸ˜›
I imagined a similar situation where thakur will take paro to the lake and tell about how he killed bindi... and then our hero comes to the rescue...
but was too lazy to write am OS..
good that I didn't... bcz your's is much much better than what I had written... 🄱
I am a terrible writer šŸ˜†
Plz continue...😊

Thanks Raima
I'm so happy that u loved it
awww...are write it down yaar...who knows we will loved ur version also
everyone has their different flow n style...
I will continue soon 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Santhu.The.King

Nice... Wonderfully Written... šŸ‘
Please Continue Soon šŸ˜›

Thanks Dear
I'm so happy that u loved it
I'll continue soon😃

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