A Boy's Tale : A Rangrasiya OS - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreya_rc


thank u soo much baisa. apko acchi tho lagi naa ? khus hui meri housewarming gift se ?


Sirf acha nahin, kamaal ka likhtay ho app! 👏

Its so heartbreaking that in all his years, he just had that doll as Paro baisa's reminder, that helped him in making peace with his pains.. <3 :( Paro was always there in hs thoughts, as a symbol of hope.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was both beautiful, haunting and yet, strangely poignant. I found myself rereading certain paragraphs, then slowing down over others so i could make it last longer, see in my head the pictures you were describing. That for me is the sign of a truly resonant piece of writing. Thank you for writing it, and for giving us a momentary glimpse into what one scarred child might have meant to another---and how important that child still might be to the man who has grown up. How strange fate is--he has grown into the man who unknowingly, will offer that child's adult self comfort when once, long ago, as a little girl, she did the same to him. Absolutely beautiful work!
Edited by napstermonster - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: napstermonster

That was both beautiful, haunting and yet, strangely poignant. I found myself rereading certain paragraphs, then slowing down over others so i could make it last longer, see in my head the pictures you were describing. That for me is the sign of a truly resonant piece of writing. Thank you for writing it, and for giving us a momentary glimpse into what one scarred child might have meant to another---and how important that child still might be to the man who has grown up. How strange fate is--he has grown into the man who unknowingly, will offer that child's adult self comfort when once, long ago, as a little girl, she did the same to him. Absolutely beautiful work!


👏 Thank You. I was struggling to put my thots down after reading Shreya's OS. So just commented with a gif 😳. Your post helped me out.

Shreya, I second verbatim Napster's comment here.. 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Wow. Really enjoyed it! Great ideas and writing. I like your style.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Awww Shreya,that was very very sweet.
innocence of Rudra is already lost.in its place we have cold hearted swine who will do anything to protect his gawa,who already found a place in his heart.Her innocence is still remaining and she is yet to grow up and be cynical.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was a sad but beautiful OS. Hope you write more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
That was really good, we all wanted to find out what happened to that little boy who got the doll from the stranger girl, that was lovely!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreya_rc


Ye yes niyoti , u completely get it. the girl is not parvati real flesh and blood. she is a figment of imagination who is nameless. and whenever he is about to do something wrong ,he imagines her shaking her head in disapproval thus saving him becoming a beast. giving him a laksh in his life and thatz how he grows up from a boy to a man under her imaginative loving care .he tells her his deep secrets to her, even quarrels with her saying never come back.
even in the serial, rudra is never a bully or brawny like sumer. he is strong, silent, broody. he speaks very less and never uses cuss words, he is a man of action,not words. and is very much attached to that doll, it accompanies him everywhere.
So itz sort of in between moments, baisa !😉
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Very astute observation of his character :) The silent and brooding kind.

A moment in between indeed 😃

PS: you're too kind with yoir compliments. I'm glad you chose to read what I write. 😳
Edited by niyoti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radaz


Beauty! Emotional Athyachar today .. Enjoyed reading it.. And as a gift here is the gif and the the doll give away scene..
Pic Credit: Original uploader. I just got it from web.




oh thank u radz ! for the gif. I am now going to stick it on the front page!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: napstermonster

That was both beautiful, haunting and yet, strangely poignant. I found myself rereading certain paragraphs, then slowing down over others so i could make it last longer, see in my head the pictures you were describing. That for me is the sign of a truly resonant piece of writing. Thank you for writing it, and for giving us a momentary glimpse into what one scarred child might have meant to another---and how important that child still might be to the man who has grown up. How strange fate is--he has grown into the man who unknowingly, will offer that child's adult self comfort when once, long ago, as a little girl, she did the same to him. Absolutely beautiful work!

aaw ! napster thank u soo much for taking out time to read it. and for ur amazing indepth criticism ! infact ur analysis is more beautiful and heartrending than the original prose itself !😉
I am honoured, really !!

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