~Desert~ A PaRud OS

Aishwarya

@Aish002

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

it was wonderful and amazing...absolutely perfect choice of words for portraying the emotions...absolutely loved the ending lines..👏.pls pls write more...

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AdamsApple

@AdamsApple

Beginner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

My gosh! This was a remarkably beautiful piece of writing! It stirred so many emotions within me.. The pain, confusion, sense of belonging ant the ultimately realisation was beautifuuly penned!
Would love to read more from you! An absolute pleasure !

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Karishma

@Mystique.Kishi

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: anki_22
Okay, so am no gonna RES...!!
👏👏
umm, I want to give a lamba comment, as I always do..!! But honestly, am short of words here..!!
Not only because it was written beautifully and it had everything a reader looks for..! Also not only because I loved the heart-warming longingness of both of them portrayed with efficiency, and also not because this chotu-sa OS is making me giggle like an idiot...AM short of words because I am thinking about a LIST of demands am gonna display you soon...!!😊

Yes, another splendid job..! As Always..!!👏
with love😳

you have no idea how much your lamba and chotu comments mean...anki- shona make demands..you are my cara, after all...so, i have to listen to you

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ipkknd-fan

@ipkknd-fan

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

That was such a beautiful OS!
Loved it :)

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Mehreen

@Motif_Soul

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Beautiful OS.😊

Desert...them...as hot desires in the sun embrace them in the cold moon.

That's how I see it.

Can you PM me next time .

Thnx

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milinda.shreyz

@milinda.shreyz

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Happiness is

reading a fantastic os at a breath pace with a heart thudding in expectation and anticipation !

Captured the epiphany moment brilliantly. main to fan hogayi aap ki. Joota feku?? u must be kidding! sachmuch kissi de du kya?😉

Edited by shreya_rc - 11 years ago

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Appu

@expectappu

Explorer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Very well written!!!! Even though this is set considerably in the future...you seem to captured the essence of both Rudra and Paro. Keep writing! would love to read more of your work in the future!!

👏

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unisha

@unishaz

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

awesome os dear.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..

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HemaG

@HemaG

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

its awesome dear...simple and sweet...do write more...!!

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Kishi my darling...this was mindblasting...
Girl how can u be so perfect..???...
I hv never watched rangrasiya with so much interest..time never permits...
Bt now i think i shud...
All bcoz of you...i wont comment on any part coz i dont want to tarnish ur creation...it was just insanely beautiful

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