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Posted: 11 years ago
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Something like the Dewali almost kiss scene in ...
not exact replica but when Paro changes dress for the first time & Rudra sees her first time with all her mesmerizing charms ohhh I want him to loose cotrol for a while but hold back in the right time.
So much so that he tries to go to Laila,
but he is unable to get close to her,
or let her come close to him.
Laila should be there only as a game changer, a buning evil
& from that day onwards except for few occasions that he tries to either push Paro back
or discourage her of any deeper feelings for him
or tries to distract himself from getting attracted to her
OR later wants to make Paro jealous to attract her attention
He never wants Laila even for his lust
That day onwards his possession, protectiveness, & an unknown feeling ignites him and gradually he burns in an invisible fire to want to possess her
But unable to do so
I want her innocent charms to work like magical fire in which he cannot even feel lust for another
He becomes possessed by her innocence body & soul
And then the high point would be when she despite feeling love for him...
Leaves him & he is helpless.
His pride, arrogance ,possessiveness, all get wounded mortally by her
I want her to be as devoid of emotions as the heroine in Great Expectations is brought up by design / by default
It's a request CV's along with a storyline that is supportive & other strong characters building side by side I want her to be loved by everyone, even Dilsher& that dangerous chichi 😉cum masi but
I want her not to return any of Rudra's feelings other than initially when she is unable to hold herself back and also to lure him in soft cobweb of love & lust lies & deception👏
Please I want feedback don't hesitate to comment because I've a storyline I might write for u if u like it so comment please... Come on guys

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Fairy2012 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanx for showing no interest I shouldn't waste my time anymore
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its really interesting 😳. I have no problem if,CVS will add 'Sumer ka Tadka' in this story 😆 .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice idea

but i think it won't happen right away dear
maybe in the comming future
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG...even I daydream of this storyline all the time,specially she leaving him and wounding him. That will reiterate Dilsher's belief abt beautiful women. And after that I would like him to discover paro living as a widow in some other village...that'll incense him even more. Well expressed!Cheers! :*
Edited by lrlpam - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good thoughts 😉
But it will be sometime yet 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I want to see this and I hope CV's make something like that and show the intensity of the relation between PARUD 😳
But I'm like many of you this track don't come soon maybe later
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nicely expressed post but ... Remember it's a telly show where they drag the things so badly that they almost distort the characters & storyline BUT if the intensity is intelligently managed u will see this dream come true with so many emotions that we will be glued to the screens. Sanaya has magnetism that works magic.

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